muskiecy13 Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3979/245579.jpg[/img] This card may only be summoned by tributing 2 FIRE monsters from your side of the field. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you may discard one FIRE monster from your hand to increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the End Phase. [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/3979/245579.jpg[/img] This monster may not attack your opponents' Life Points directly. When you deal damage to your opponents' Life Points, you may select one card from your opponent's hand and remove it from play. [img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/3979/245579.jpg[/img] Pay half your Life Points. You may Special Summon one monster, ignoring summoning rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makor Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Balanced. OCG is good. Great job. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] I especially like the "G.E.M. Warrior." You can force your way through enemy defenses and then remove one of their cards from play. [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] Yes, Captain Obvious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Good Cards for a new member, welcome to YCM and enjoy your stay here and have fun, also follow the rules and try not to break them (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 OCG fixes: This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by offering 2 FIRE monsters as a Tribute. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 FIRE monster to increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the End Phase. This monster cannot attack your opponent’s Life Points directly. Whenever you inflict damage to your opponent’s Life Points, remove 1 card in your opponent’s hand from play. Pay half your Life Points. Special Summon 1 from your Deck, hand or Graveyard ignoring the summoning conditions. Your OCG wasnt bad (just a bit old school) I just polished it up a bit. For a new member very promising cards well done indeed.[quote name='Makor' timestamp='1294688463' post='4925563'] Balanced. OCG is good. Great job. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] I especially like the "G.E.M. Warrior." You can force your way through enemy defenses and then remove one of their cards from play. [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] Yes, Captain Obvious. [/quote] I think you may have misread "G.E.M Warrior" it can't attack your opponent's life points directly...."CANT" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 The last one is OP'd, especially late game if you have an unsummonable monster and only 1000 Points left. The other two are good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makor Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='chedbonlahor' timestamp='1294689557' post='4925590'] I think you may have misread "G.E.M Warrior" it can't attack your opponent's life points directly...."CANT" [/quote] I know, I meant that then, because the monsters are gone and because of the card's effect, you can attack directly (with whatever method you choose) to remove one of your opponent's cards from play. I didn't say to attack with "G.E.M. Warriror." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbstar95 Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 i still do not know how to post cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makor Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='bbstar95' timestamp='1294698445' post='4925904'] i still do not know how to post cards [/quote] Click on your card in the card maker and, in a few seconds, the image will be uploaded to image shack and right below the image will be a link. Copy and paste that into your post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muskiecy13 Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1294691355' post='4925648'] The last one is OP'd, especially late game if you have an unsummonable monster and only 1000 Points left. The other two are good. [/quote] Should i have it be a set amount of life points, like say 4000? That way it can't be used with like 100 life points left, and just give you a free monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makor Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='muskiecy13' timestamp='1294700069' post='4925973'] Should i have it be a set amount of life points, like say 4000? That way it can't be used with like 100 life points left, and just give you a free monster? [/quote] That's a good option. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzero015 Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Griffon It's ok, but very much under-powered and doesn't really do anything. The image is ok... but it doesn't real feel like a yugioh card. Either boost the amount it gains from discarding (1000 would be about right) or drop it to lv6 and require a single fire tribute/ 5/10 Balance & Playability 6/10 Image 5/10 Originality TOTAL ---> 5.7/10 G.E.M. Warrior A very nice card, could actually be considered a tier 1 card. Which would be amazing for a basic double trib. The image is however a bit plane but it does feel a lot like a yugioh card so not bad. But nothing to shout about. It's also reasonably original, but nothing especially new. 9/10 Balance & Playability 7/10 Image 8/10 Originality TOTAL ---> 8/10 Greed Definitely the best of the bunch as far as the image goes. Looks a lot like a real card. But it's nothing new originality. What really lets it down is the OCG and how OP it is. Anything from your deck??? That is game-breaking. Just plop exodia necross on the field and smile would be one example. It needs the "from your hand" clause in there somewhere. And you also need the cost to be a definite amount to stop your opponent using it with only 100lp left and letting them run 3. I would have the cost as "Pay 3000 life points". 7/10 Balance & Playability 8/10 Image 6/10 Originality TOTAL ---> 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninjarainbowcloud6! Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 GEM warrior and Greed are great cards and all the cards have good OCG but I think the first card is underpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='muskiecy13' timestamp='1294700069' post='4925973'] Should i have it be a set amount of life points, like say 4000? That way it can't be used with like 100 life points left, and just give you a free monster? [/quote] Get rid of the "ignoring summoning conditions" requirement and you don't need nearly that many Life Points, probably just 2000. Also, you do need "from your hand, Deck or Graveyard" somewhere in there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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