TJP12409 Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 This is a small set of cards based on the basic RGB and CMY color wheels: Reviews are the only way I can make these cards better! [spoiler=monsters] [img]http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/9288/320879.jpg[/img] [img]http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9288/320879.jpg[/img] [img]http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/9288/320879.jpg[/img] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/1274/320879j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/294/320879g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/8303/320879f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/508/320879e.jpg[/img] Lore: "R Chromatic"+"G Chromatic"+"B Chromatic" By sending the above monsters from your field or hand to the graveyard using "Color Mixer" you may Fusion Summon this monster. Once per turn you may discard a "R", "G", or "B Chromatic" from your hand to activate one of the following effects: - Randomly discard one card in your opponent's hand OR - Deal 1000 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points [img]http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9288/320879.jpg[/img] Lore: "C Chromatic"+"M Chromatic"+"Y Chromatic" By sending the above monsters from your hand or field to the graveyard using "Color Mixer" you can Fusion Summon this monster. Once per turn you may discard a "C", "M", or "Y Chromatic" from your hand to activate one of the following effects: - Destroy one card on the field OR - Deal 1200 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9068/320879bo.jpg[/img] [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/471/320879o.jpg[/img] [img]http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9288/320879.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells/Traps] [img]http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/1875/320879l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/9288/320879.jpg[/img] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/7956/320879u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9288/320879.jpg[/img] [img]http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9288/320879.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] yeah the pics arent that good, but finding pics for this kind of thing ain't easy... Still a rough idea, any help would be great. Ideas for more cards would be EVEN BETTER. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJP12409 Posted January 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Great Milenko Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Pretty sweet I like them. 10/10! Perfect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seth Dawnstrider Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Most original set I've seen yet - I love it! Also, I see nothing wrong with the pictures, they are great for this kind of theme. The strategy is simple and the balance is great... great! I can see some YGO grammatical errors, but nothing to worry about! Overall, this set is a breath of fresh air from all the generic sets (including mine), if you ask me... P.S.: You can't Tribute from your hand, you send it to the Graveyard instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJP12409 Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Seth Dawnstrider' timestamp='1295295151' post='4941253'] Most original set I've seen yet - I love it! Also, I see nothing wrong with the pictures, they are great for this kind of theme. The strategy is simple and the balance is great... great! I can see some YGO grammatical errors, but nothing to worry about! Overall, this set is a breath of fresh air from all the generic sets (including mine), if you ask me... P.S.: You can't Tribute from your hand, you send it to the Graveyard instead. [/quote] yay! someone likes my cards! P.S. : Thanks for the tip, but how do I fix the OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seth Dawnstrider Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 For C, M, Y Chromatic - [b]"This card can be Special Summoned from your hand by sending 1 "insert monster name here" and 1 "insert monster name here" from your hand or field to the Graveyard."[/b] (you can replace [color=red]"...from your hand..."[/color] with [color=red]"...from your Deck/Graveyard..."[/color] or replace [color=blue]"This card can be Special Summoned from your hand..."[/color] with [color=blue]"You can Special Summon this removed from play card to your side of the field..."[/color] or if you choose to add it to your hand/Deck while it is removed you can replace [color=green]"This card can be Special Summoned from your hand"[/color] with [color=green]"You can add this removed from play card to your hand/Deck..."[/color]. Depending on your needs, there may be other possibilities I have not thought of, but these are the most common ones). Also, you should state how exactly your Fusion Monsters are Summoned in their card descriptions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJP12409 Posted January 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 thanks, ill edit them soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJP12409 Posted January 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 ALRIGHTY THEN, fixed the OCG. love to see more reviews.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJP12409 Posted January 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 bomp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Judαs Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Very original concept, some pictures are really beautiful! 8.5/10 Like Seth said, you should state how exactly your Fusion Monsters are Summoned in their card descriptions. It would probably be better to say "[i]You can Special Summon this card by sending the above cards from your hand or side of the field to the Graveyard (You need not use "Polymerization".)[/i]", or more correctly, "[i]This card can only be Special Summoned by sending the above cards from your hand or side of the field to the Graveyard (You do not use "Polymerization".)[/i] like [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/XYZ-Dragon_Cannon"]XYZ-Dragon Cannon[/url]. You can also try type variations (just a suggestion, the cards are also good as they are). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Nice cards, I like them. I always like to see original cards and ideas. Pictures were pretty nice too. Good job! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJP12409 Posted February 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 thank you all for the good comments, I have recently made new cards for this so I will be updating this soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJP12409 Posted February 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 HUGE @$$ overhaul with the cards fixing OCG, balancing, AND new cards Check it out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｍｒ．Ｒｏｂｏｔ Posted February 3, 2011 Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 [center]it's been a long time since originality strike ycm!! haha well seth already did a few ocg fix so not much to say so here's my rating mate-8/10!![/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Duellist Ren Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 The images are good and the cards very original, but you've heard that already. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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