xzero015 Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [spoiler=Monsters] [u][b]Kashran[/b][/u] [img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/7783/176266hr.jpg[/img] [i]If this card is removed from the field the turn it is summoned, instead, remove it from play and then special summon it during your next standby phase.[/i] Lv2, ATK 900, DEF 300 [u][b]Ayrah[/b][/u] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/654/176266w.jpg[/img] [i]If this card is removed from play when one of your "Ethereal Dragon" cards summoned this turn would be destroyed by an opponents card (either by effect or in battle) it is not. If you activate this effect, remove from play that monster during the end phase. You can only activate the effect of "Ayrah" once per turn.[/i] Lv7, ATK 2900, DEF 700 [u][b]Cytan[/b][/u] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/9262/176266s.jpg[/img] [i]If this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle on the turn it is summoned you can special summon 1 level 3 or lower "Ethereal Dragon" monster that has been removed from play.[/i] Lv4, ATK 1900, DEF 1100 [u][b]Espen[/b][/u] [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/5572/176266.jpg[/img] [i]Tuner - If this card is used as a synchro-material monster on the turn it is summoned remove all monsters used in the synchro-summon from play and in addition the summon of that synchro-monster cannot be negated.[/i] Lv3, ATK 1700, DEF 900 [u][b]Hyro[/b][/u] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/1596/176266c.jpg[/img] [i]During the turn this card is summoned, if this card destroys an opponents monster as a result of battle you may add one of your removed from play "Ethereal Dragon" cards to your hand.[/i] Lv5, ATK 2300, DEF 1600 [u][b]Laquen[/b][/u] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/5572/176266.jpg[/img] [i]FLIP: Until the end phase this card is unaffected by your opponents card effects. If this card would be sent to the graveyard after being flipped face-up, instead remove it from play and then draw 1 card.[/i] Lv4, ATK 500, DEF 2100 [/spoiler] [spoiler=Synchros] [u][b]Haikoza[/b][/u] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/654/176266w.jpg[/img] [i]1 "Ethereal Dragon" Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters. During the battle phase of the turn this card is summoned, your opponents card effects are negated and any monster sent to the graveyard is removed from play.[/i] Lv7, ATK 2500, DEF 1400. [u][b]Vorah[/b][/u] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/5572/176266.jpg[/img] [i]1 "Ethereal Dragon" Tuner + 2 or more non-tuner Dragon-type monsters. This card is unaffected by all card effects other than it's own during the turn it is summoned. Once per turn you may remove 1 "Ethereal Dragon" monster in your graveyard from play in order to remove 1 face-up card on the field from play. If you activate this effect, remove this card from play during the end phase.[/i] Lv9, ATK 3200, DEF 1700. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spell & Trap Support] [u][b]A Memory Long Past[/b][/u] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/5572/176266.jpg[/img] [i]N. Spell - Special summon 1 of your removed from play "Ethereal Dragon" monsters. If it would be removed from the field at any point this turn by an opponents card effect or as a result of battle, instead remove it from play and 1 card on your opponents side of the field. During your next standby phase, destroy the summoned monster.[/i] [u][b]It Shall Not Be In Vain[/b][/u] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/6711/176266o.jpg[/img] [i]Q. Spell - Activate this card only when one of your "Ethereal Dragon" monsters summoned this turn is destroyed and sent to the graveyard. Remove from play that monster and 1 "Ethereal Dragon" monster in your deck. Then search your deck for one "Ethereal Dragon" monster and add it to your hand.[/i] [u][b]The Spirit Realm[/b][/u] [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/4058/176266v.jpg[/img] [i]F. Spell - Once per turn you may remove 1 "Ethereal Dragon" monster in your graveyard from play in order to place 1 "Spirit" counter on this card. Whenever an "Ethereal Dragon" monster you control is removed from the field during the turn it was summoned place 1 "Spirit" counter on this card. You may remove 2 "Spirit" counters from this card in order to draw 1 card. If this card would be destroyed by an opponents card effect instead remove 1 "Spirit" counter from it.[/i] [u][b] One Final Act[/b][/u] [img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/5572/176266.jpg[/img] [i]Cntr Trap - Activate this card only be activated by paying 1000 life points when one "Ethereal Dragon" monster you control is destroyed and sent to the graveyard. Remove that monster from play along with 2 other face-up cards on the field.[/i] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzero015 Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Bump. Come on people! This is my first proper set of cards, the others were just tests to get the hang of the OCG etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 11, 2011 Report Share Posted January 11, 2011 Overrall review : OCG : Not perfect, but not terrible. Capitalize Deck, Graveyard, Types (Dragon-Type) and all kinds of Summon (Normal, Flip, Tribute, Special). Say Ethereal Dragon" monster, not card. Tuner is also capitalized in non-Tuner. I noticed 1 effect that confused me :"If this card is removed from play when one of your "Ethereal Dragon" cards summoned this turn would be destroyed by an opponents card (either by effect or in battle) it is not." This effect is too limitated, if the card is removed only when a Dragon is destroyed ? I understood it that way. Try to fix this one. I think they are playable and balanced. ALSO, you don't need to say the level and the ATK of the monsters, what kind of Spell or Trap they are, etc. Those are clear in the cards. And the most important, if this topic is for the Your DEK. Community Brawl, you must add a decklist. Add a spoiler with these custom and TCG/OCG cards or this topic won't be considered. 7/10 ^Because of OCG and the effect I mentioned. Good topic, but organize it if you want it to be judged by the CC Your DEK. Community Brawl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzero015 Posted January 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2011 [quote name='War Chess' timestamp='1294746678' post='4927093'] I noticed 1 effect that confused me :"If this card is removed from play when one of your "Ethereal Dragon" cards summoned this turn would be destroyed by an opponents card (either by effect or in battle) it is not." [/quote] Yeah, it's meant to essentially work while the card is removed from play. I just can't get the wording right. Is this better? "When one of your "Ethereal Dragon" cards summoned this turn would be destroyed by an opponents card (either by effect or by battle) while this card is removed from play, it is not." As to my decklist. My cards are not all done yet. I've got 1 more spell, 1 more monster and 1 more trap to add. After that I'll write up my list. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xaqairy Posted October 14, 2011 Report Share Posted October 14, 2011 I think they're interesting. They would probably work pretty well with/against my "Time Warrior" Archetype. Ayrah confused me a little. "If this card is removed from play when one of your "Ethereal Dragon" cards summoned this turn would be destroyed by an opponents card (either by effect or in battle) it is not. If you activate this effect, remove from play that monster during the end phase. You can only activate the effect of "Ayrah" once per turn" I think this might make a little more sense: "While this card is banished, when an "Ethereal Dragon" monster (that was Summoned this turn) would be destroyed by an opponent's card (either by an effect or by battle), it is not banished. If you activate this effect, banish the "Ethereal Dragon" during the End Phase of this turn. The effect of "Ethereal Dragon - Ayrah" can only be activated once per turn." When it comes to counters, you don't need to quote the type of counter. ex: "Skilled Dark Magician" Whenever a Spell is activated, place one Spell Counter on this card. You can Tribute this card with 3 Spell Counters on it to Special Summon 1 "Dark Magician" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard." Other than that, I like this set. I'd say 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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