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My first try at Excess Summon ^^. Hope for your support


Kuroda Kaito

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[center]Hi, this is my first try at Excess Summon and i dont know if it's good or not :) . But anyway hope for your support :lol:

Here is the card:
[spoiler=Excess Card]
[img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/1020/117231s.jpg[/img]

[b][i]Lore:
When this card is successfully Exceed Summon, remove from play 2 Dragon-type Monsters from your Graveyard to increase this card's ATK and DEF equal to the total ATK and DEF of the 2 removed Monsters. While this card is face-up on the field, when a monster you control is destroyed by your opponent's Monster, place 2 Cosmic-Counters on this card (max.6). When one of your Monster destroys a monster your opponent controls, you can remove 2 Cosmic-Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Dragon-type monster from your Graveyard and the Special Summoned Monster's effect will this card's until the end of that turn. When this card destroy your opponent's Monster, you can tribute this card to Special Summon 2 Dragon-type monsters removed from play from this cards effect until the End Phase, and during your next turn, Special Summon this card to the field. It gains 2000 ATK and DEF points. When this card has no Overlaid Monsters on it, this card's ATK and DEF will lose 1000 points and it gain one additional attack in that turn.[/i][/b][/spoiler]

Feel free to give me advices, cause this is my first try at this and i dont know much about Excess Summon ;)[/center]

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Correct Lore:
When this card is successfully Excess Summon, remove from play 2 Dragon-type Monsters from your Graveyard to increase this card's ATK and DEF equal to the total ATK and DEF of the 2 removed Monsters. While this card is face-up on the field, when a monster you control is destroyed by your opponent's Monster, place 2 Cosmic-Counters on this card (max.6). When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, you can remove 2 Cosmic-Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Dragon-type monster removed from play by this cards effect.

Dont really understand this part. ( When this card has no Overlaid Monsters on it, this card's ATK and DEF will lose 1000 points and it gain one additional attack in that turn.)

When this card destroy your opponent's Monster, you can tribute this card to Special Summon 2 Dragon-type monsters removed from play from this cards effect until the End Phase, and during your next turn, Special Summon this card to the field. It gains 2000 ATK and DEF points.

That was some really f***ed up OCG man, but the pic is off the chain.
Original card: 4/10
Fixed card: 7.5/10 (.5 from pic)
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