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[⓿.⓿] 'Raving' Archtype [7/??] Updated: Added - Raving Siphon, and Missionary (Need OCG help on missionary)

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Got bored made a archtype. Lol.

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[spoiler=Monster: Raving Slicer]
[img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/2705/131224.jpg[/img]
Effect:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 card from your hand. This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. Once per turn flip a coin, if heads randomly discard 1 card from your opponents hand. [/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Monster: Raving BulletSlinger]
[img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/1781/131224z.jpg[/img]
Effect:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 cards from your hand. This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. Once per turn if this card is in Defense Position, select 1 Monster on your opponents side of the Field During the next turn that card cannot declare a attack. Once per turn discard 1 card from your hand and inflict 200 points of damage to your Opponents Life Points.
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[Spoiler=Spell: Raving Grounds]
[img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/2705/131224.jpg[/img]
Effect:
All Monster's with the 'Raving' arch-type gain 100 ATK and DEF and this effect: Once per turn You can remove 1 card in your graveyard from play and bring 1 card from your graveyard to your hand.[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Monster: Raving Demoralizer]
[img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/2705/131224.jpg[/img]
Effect:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 card from your hand. This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. As long as this card remains face up on the field all of your Opponent's Monster's Lose 300 ATK and 500 DEF and all Monster's you control lose 100 ATK and 300 DEF.[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Monster: Raving Tank LV3]
[img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/469/131224f.jpg[/img]
Effect:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 card from your hand. This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. You can equip any monster with the 'Raving' arch-type to this card. This card gains 50% of that card's ATK and DEF. Once per turn you can discard the Monster equipped to this card and inflict 50% of that Monster's ATK to your opponents Life Points.
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[Spoiler=Monster: Raving Tank LV7]
[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/2705/131224.jpg[/img]
Effect:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing Raving Tank LV3 and by discarding 1 card from your hand. This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. You can equip any monster with the 'Raving' arch-type to this card. This card gains 80% of that card's ATK and DEF. Once per turn you can discard the Monster equipped to this card and inflict 80% of that Monster's ATK to your opponents Life Points.[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Monster: Raving Siphon]
[img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/5936/131224q.jpg[/img]
Effect:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 cards from your hand. This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Battles involving this card have no Battle Damage. When this card Declares a attack/ is attacked this card gains 200 ATK and DEF. Thsi card gains 50 ATK and DEF for every card removed from play.
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[spoiler=[color="#FFFF00"]Spell: Fading Sight - Promo Card[/color]]

[IMG]http://i677.photobucket.com/albums/vv140/gefhx/FadingSightF.png[/IMG]
Effect:
Equip this card to a monster your Opponent controls. Every time that monster declares an attack have your opponent flip a coin, if heads the attack is successful and you lose 200 Life Points, if tails the attack is negated.
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[spoiler=[color="#FFFF00"]Monster: Raving Missionary - Promo Card[/color]]

[IMG]http://i1084.photobucket.com/albums/j401/HTMLemons/01Myself-Raving_MissionaryF.png[/IMG]
Effect:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 3 cards from your hand and Tributing 2 'Raving; monster. This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. As long as this card remains face-up on the field during your draw phase you have to pay 300 Life Points, if you choose to not, this card is destroyed. Once per turn place 1 Destructive counter on this card. When this card has 5 Destructive Counter's on it, it gains 1000 ATK and DEF. When this card has 10 Destructive Counter;s on it, it gains 200 ATK and 300 DEF and you no longer need to pay Life Points for this card to remain on the field.
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hexcalibrate Newbie

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oh dear god, your ocg is appaling. you don't use the term arch-type in a card, and arch-type is spelt archetype and never use percentages. when you use a cards name your susposed to put it in ""s, you don't use the word bring its add, graveyard has a capital G and monster on its own is spelt without a capital M.

these are terrible.
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Soul Saint Newbie

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Obvious incorrect OCG aside, 9/10: These are really well made and nicely balanced in my opinion. Their pictures are great, suit the cards just fine and look pretty f'n BA. Their effects are not as long as you have usually made your cards, that I've seen thus far...much shorter, and clear, on what the cards do. OCG is a bit better than the last time I looked at your 'Titans'.

As for what you did incorrectly OCG-wise, read the post by "Naturia Melon". Sums it up.
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@ Naturia Melon
Lol OCG isnt all that matters =) Ironicly it barely Matters, creativity and style are far mroe important.
Anyways. Thanks for the OCG fix First Time back in 2 years. But your wrong about the monster thing, is the OCG thread still around?

@ Soul Saint
thanks =D

@ Dragon ball
They do have different pic's...
and Thanks xD and Btw it is LV7 Check the real cards =)
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Though I do not agree with the picture for "Fading Sight", the card itself is very balanced. Sticking to my original rating of your cards, though Dragonball brought up a very good point I overlooked - It doesn't have seven stars.

@Dragonball - They have similar effects, LV7's is stronger though. From half of the "Raving" monster's attack to the monster's total attack. What would you suggest as a change, since this clearly just is not to your liking?
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Just woke up O.O (2:00pm xD) well ima fix the Level on Raving Tank LV7 to start ... and the reason i chose fading sight is,if you look behind the holo or even at the character itself the picture is blurring.


EDIT:Did some miniscule editing on Raving Tank LV7 and fixed the star issue.
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well i was going to same thing about the ocg but they got there before me (as rules stats you now must return the favor i will pm as the rules dictates)

i think there should be a Raving Tank Leve 5 and Raving Tank Level 9 then you should fic the ocg of Raving Tank Level 7 if you make Raving Tank Level 5

you can use the img code, the spoilers and the link to post any awesome realistic cards with unsual card effectrs you want on the club forum if you want
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