Johan Liebert Posted January 15, 2011 Report Share Posted January 15, 2011 [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/2306/282557mb.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/9925/282557l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9342/282557k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/2485/282557.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/3451/282557p.jpg[/img] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/6228/282557q.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfFan16 Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 Well i must admit i have not seen a killer bee here and well its not even that good of a try along with the others. I realize you are a new member and generally new members tend to create these level 12 monsters with insane and/or useless effects. I shall begin from the top. [spoiler=Killer Bee and Deidara criticisms] As far as i know there are no Level 12 Normal Monster Cards in the game because they would need an effect saying it needs 3 tributes or something. Both images are pretty bad and descriptions are bland.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Sauske] Having a card that specifically targets another is fine EXCEPT when it means destroying that target. It is usually made to target a card you would have to make it stronger.(as easily seen in LV cards) The image is alright. Demon is a fake type and is frowned upon in this forum. You are not using a proper Spirit effect either. look at [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Yata-Garasu]This card[/url]. the first section of the effect ("This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up.") is universal for spirit monsters.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Itachi Uchiha] too much text in the image. find a better one. the effect should be worded as follows. "When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, Select 1 monster your opponent controls. Decrease the ATK of the selected card by 700 to increase the ATK of this card by 700."[/spoiler] [spoiler=Sasori] To have a dual type, word the monster in this way; "This card is also treated as a Zombie type monster" Also that effect makes no sense, Perhaps you mean "This card can only be destroyed by a Level 7 or higher monster" but that also makes it too powerful The image is actually fine[/spoiler] [spoiler=Kisame] Well considering a colored version isnt out yet i cant blame you for the image. Also the wording would be something like "When this card is Normal Summoned, destroy all WATER monsters on the field other than this card.[/spoiler] Wow i havent written that much in a while. i give this set a 4/10. (hope i get a + for all that) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkeymadman Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 If these are your best cards ,I'd hate to see your worst. 2/10 bad OCG, levels too high, effects bland, vanilla descriptions are boring etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 Seriously dude, try again. Try not to make them so ridiculously OP'ed and you have numerous OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 This deck is very much OVERPOWERED dude try and make it better if you want 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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