War Chess Posted January 15, 2011 Report Share Posted January 15, 2011 I made this with an image from Future Paradise. [spoiler=Link to Image]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/236244-new-image/[/spoiler] So here's the card ! [img]http://i53.tinypic.com/2ajtmr9.png[/img] Lore: All face-up monsters with 2300 or more DEF on the field are changed to Attack Position and remain in Attack Position while this card is active. You can discard 1 Spell Card and 1 Monster Card to negate the activation and/or effect of a Trap Card and destroy it. Rate and comment. If you liked this, give me an internet (the button in my sig). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 I can't believe nobody saw this yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 OMG ! Bump. Comment ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 omg anthor galaxy star theme card like we didn get that enough from jaden yuki and now yusei now yuma seem to have some kind of star / galaxy theme thing going for him too i like the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Well, that effect is... really disjointed. It forces monsters with (a very random - 2000 DEF would surely be better) defence to go into attack, but then, possibly because you remebered at the last minute that 'Final Attack Orders' is much better than this, you add a random Trap negation on the end as well. And the whole card is suppossed to have a cosmic theme? It's a bad card just because it looks and feels so unnatural, and seems so randomly thrown together with little thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Bahamut ZERO' timestamp='1295275550' post='4940577'] Well, that effect is... really disjointed. It forces monsters with (a very random - 2000 DEF would surely be better) defence to go into attack, but then, possibly because you remebered at the last minute that 'Final Attack Orders' is much better than this, you add a random Trap negation on the end as well. And the whole card is suppossed to have a cosmic theme? It's a bad card just because it looks and feels so unnatural, and seems so randomly thrown together with little thought. [/quote] Well, that was harsh. The change position was like, cosmic energy changes monsters. It was just a random idea, but thanks for commenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Honestly, I don't like the holo over the picture. It just ruins it. I guess it's all right, though I think it would make more sense to reduce the DEF. Alright, but not great. [6.7/10] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Future Paradise' timestamp='1295282588' post='4940770'] Honestly, I don't like the holo over the picture. It just ruins it. I guess it's all right, though I think it would make more sense to reduce the DEF. Alright, but not great. [6.7/10] [/quote] Thanks. I was just playing with LiAM's template, sorry for that. And yes, it has a stupid DEF requirement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1295269327' post='4940488'] omg anthor galaxy star theme card like we didn get that enough from jaden yuki and now yusei now yuma seem to have some kind of star / galaxy theme thing going for him tooi like the card [/quote] LoL... this comment made me chortle [quote name='Bahamut ZERO' timestamp='1295275550' post='4940577'] Well, that effect is... really disjointed.It forces monsters with (a very random - 2000 DEF would surely be better) defence to go into attack, but then, possibly because you remebered at the last minute that 'Final Attack Orders' is much better than this, you add a random Trap negation on the end as well. And the whole card is suppossed to have a cosmic theme?It's a bad card just because it looks and feels so unnatural, and seems so randomly thrown together with little thought. [/quote] He's right... there's no theme, even though you made a theme card [quote name='Future Paradise' timestamp='1295282588' post='4940770'] Honestly, I don't like the holo over the picture. It just ruins it. I guess it's all right, though I think it would make more sense to reduce the DEF.Alright, but not great. [6.7/10] [/quote] Another one that's right... Holo sucks. LoL But my fair opinion on this card... Keep the effects similar, to benefit off each other. Then, make it more unique by adding some sort of twist into the entire mix.... If you need card making help.. I do offer a school for that darling. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Bahamut ZERO' timestamp='1295275550' post='4940577'] (a very random - 2000 DEF would surely be better) [/quote] No 2300 is better 2000 is to boring xD. Anyways: OCG is solid. The pic is good, IMO the holo reminds me of a meteor shower for some odd reason xD. There is nothing wrong with the card IMO, it may beslightly Op'd but its balanced enough IMO. OCG fix: All face-up monsters with 2300 or more DEF on the field are changed to Attack Position and remain in Attack Position while this card is active. You can discard 1 Spell Card and 1 Monster Card to negate the activation and/or effect of a Trap Card and destroy it. Overall Rating: 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 [quote name='Essence' timestamp='1295288333' post='4941032'] LoL... this comment made me chortle He's right... there's no theme, even though you made a theme card Another one that's right... Holo sucks. LoL But my fair opinion on this card... Keep the effects similar, to benefit off each other. Then, make it more unique by adding some sort of twist into the entire mix.... If you need card making help.. I do offer a school for that darling. ;D [/quote] Oh, so PM me this school darling . The theme was confusing, and the holo failed, but it was my first try at it XD. [quote name='â“¿.â“¿' timestamp='1295288337' post='4941033'] No 2300 is better 2000 is to boring xD. Anyways: OCG is solid. The pic is good, IMO the holo reminds me of a meteor shower for some odd reason xD. There is nothing wrong with the card IMO, it may beslightly Op'd but its balanced enough IMO. OCG fix: All face-up monsters with 2300 or more DEF on the field are changed to Attack Position and remain in Attack Position while this card is active. You can discard 1 Spell Card and 1 Monster Card to negate the activation and/or effect of a Trap Card and destroy it. Overall Rating: 8.4/10 [/quote] Thanks for the comment, glad you liked the holo. Come on, more comments ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Bad card. First effect is too situational, last effect is a SPECIFIC -2. I don't like it. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 I don't think it's a bad card chess but.... I do think it's a bit disjointed/random. I don't quite understand the 2300 DEF bit, are you intending to use this with another card because otherwise it just seems a tad random. Again the trap negation/destruction at the end is a little random. It doesn't make it a bad card, just a radom one however at the same time I must confess that with no direction it's not a top-class card either. I also thaink that the holo makes it look scratched rather than shiny, but I am not really one for superficiality. Who am I though to judge the inner workings of your mind, if this card makes sense to you then that's all that really matters. On the plus side the OCG seems o.k (but i'm no expert yet) and the image itself in quite deep, spiritial and calming but to me it seems a bit random. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Thank you both for commenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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