Dragon7OP Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 The swirling void gives birth to a shadowed race. From the farthest hidden worlds, they come. They come to burn, they come to rule, they come to destroy. Chaotica will Arise. This is my second booster, and almost every card i have made since my first booster, Galactic Victors. the chaotica monsters serve as an anti-Meta to my previous creations, the Crysalia monsters. Their effects counter Shard Counters, and they are the opposite 3 attributes. also, a new archtype, Skie, has taken flight. the skie monsters operate mainly from the removed from play zone, making them difficult to fight. Finally, i have the three titans of Earth- Behemoth, Leviathan, Ziz. each of them is attuned to an element of the planet-EARTH, WATER, Wind, respectively. I found them while searching through mythology. Please rate and comment. I own no artwork. [spoiler=Monsters][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/9873/322015.jpg[/img][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters. When this card attacks, destroy all other monsters on the field after the Damage Step. This card cannot be summoned if "Leviathan" or "Ziz" is face-up on the field.[/spoiler] [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7102/322015m.jpg[/img] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/1892/322015f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9882/322015s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3165/322015x.jpg[/img] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/7682/322015ui.jpg[/img] [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/5702/322015l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/4588/322015w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/121/322015d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/9480/322015sh.jpg[/img] [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7382/322015i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/7382/322015i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/5030/322015nl.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/7102/322015m.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/7569/322015b.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/1237/322015u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/9873/322015.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/126/322015v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/126/322015v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/7215/322015a.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/3222/322015n.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/6977/322015q.jpg[/img] [img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/3222/322015n.jpg[/img] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/3667/322015c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8743/322015oq.jpg[/img] [img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/9744/322015ia.jpg[/img] [img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/9569/322015pj.jpg[/img] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/578/322015g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/2443/322015p.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/7109/322015pe.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/298/322015id.jpg[/img] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7726/322015h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/9882/322015s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7382/322015i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/2163/322015z.jpg[/img] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9873/322015.jpg[/img] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9882/322015s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7382/322015i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/6889/322015df.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][spoiler=Spells][img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/2067/322015yj.jpg[/img] [img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/9873/322015.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/7569/322015b.jpg[/img] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/2443/322015p.jpg[/img] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/578/322015g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/3165/322015x.jpg[/img] [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/9873/322015.jpg[/img] [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/578/322015g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3222/322015n.jpg[/img] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/7215/322015a.jpg[/img] [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/6282/322015j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/6282/322015j.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][spoiler=Traps] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/5702/322015l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/3667/322015c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/6311/322015k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/7102/322015m.jpg[/img] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3508/322015y.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/357/322015e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/6008/322015jq.jpg[/img] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7987/322015o.jpg[/img] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9898/322015li.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seth Dawnstrider Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 I don't see much originality here and the strategy is a bit unclear. The balance of the cards is slightly overly tipped to your advantage and I find some of the cards to be OP, like the Skie monsters - it is very easy to get them all removed and make yourself invincible. The pictures are very good, though, they fit each card greatly! One last thing, I find some OCG errors here and there, I think you should take another look on your set to fix them up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon7OP Posted January 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 [quote name='Seth Dawnstrider' timestamp='1295169643' post='4937846'] I don't see much originality here and the strategy is a bit unclear. The balance of the cards is slightly overly tipped to your advantage and I find some of the cards to be OP, like the Skie monsters - it is very easy to get them all removed and make yourself invincible. The pictures are very good, though, they fit each card greatly! One last thing, I find some OCG errors here and there, I think you should take another look on your set to fix them up. [/quote] I'll admit originality was lacking here. This was certantly not my best set. The skie monsters would be OP, except for 1 thing. The more you remove from play, the harder it is to remove the rest. It's a curve, and it eventually zeroes out. Also, could you post some specific OCG things? It would take forever for me to review every single card, especially since I don't know where to look. Thanks for the input. Edit: also, strategy is not a big concern of mine. It's a booster set, with several kinds of cards. I just make the cards. I leave it to others to figure out how to use them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seth Dawnstrider Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 Well the mistakes aren't a big deal or anything, but I think you can take your time to fix them up: [spoiler=The cards] OCG Chaotic Chariot - Spell Cards cannot be [b]"Tributed"[/b], instead, you can write [b]"...send this card to the Graveyard to destroy..."[/b]. Behemoth, Leviathan and Ziz - I'm not really sure about this one, but I think you should replace [b]"When this monster attacks, destroy..."[/b] to [b]"When this monster declares an attack, destroy..."[/b]. Unimportant YGO grammar mistakes Chaotica Chimera - [b]"Except"[/b] should be without a capital letter. Descend into Nightmare - [b]"monster card zones"[/b] should all be with capital letters. On some cards with [b]"summon"[/b] in their effects - it should be with a capital letter. On some cards with [b]"deck"[/b] in their effects - it should be with a capital letter. On some cards with [b]"graveyard"[/b] in their effects - it should be with a capital letter.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie \m/ Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 wow... i like it and and you dont supose those are duel masters images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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