The "Unwaking Waters" archtype: Excess support (11/??).

[Dandelo]

The "Unwaking Waters" (or just "Unwaking") archtype features DARK Sea-Serpent and Fish-Type monsters whose effects mostly deal with recycling cards in your Graveyard and supporting Excess Monsters. The offensive effects belong more to the Excess monsters, and said effects usually deal with bouncing and Deck manipulation. The Fish-Type Excess monsters will always be Level 6 or lower, whereas the Sea Serpent-Type Excess monsters will be Level 8 and higher.

As another note, many monsters in this set were made to be versatile; that is to say, that they are able to be used in not only an "Unwaking" Deck, but also other Decks that involve the use of Excess Monsters, Sea Serpent or Fish-Type monsters, as well as profit from many cards that deal with DARK monsters and sending cards to the Graveyard.

And for trivia fun, the Effects monsters are mostly named after the scientific classification of the creature the monster in the picture resembles (Rorqual = whale, etc.), and the Excess monsters are named various water dieties, with ocean-related alliteration before the name.

[center][spoiler=Effect Monsters: 6/??][IMG]http://i763.photobucket.com/albums/xx280/waters27/2-36.jpg[/IMG] [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/8751/212065ix.jpg[/img]

[b]Vanguard:[/b] You can return 1 "Unwaking" monster in your Graveyard to the Deck to have this card be treated as 2 monsters with the same Level as the returned monster's Level. If you did, this card can only be Tributed for an Exceed Summon.

[b]Rorqual:[/b] If this face-down Defense Position card is attacked and not destroyed, you can add 1 Excess Monster in your Deck to your hand. If this Overlaid card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of an Excess Monster, you can add 1 other "Unwaking" monster in your Graveyard to your hand.

[img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/3134/212065pe.jpg[/img] [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/5698/212065t.jpg[/img]

[b]Cnidaria:[/b] You can reveal this card in your hand to select 1 Excess Monster you control. Return 1 "Unwaking" monster in your Graveyard to the Deck whose Level is equal to the Levels of the monsters Tributed to Exceed Summon the selected monster. Then, you can Overlay this card on the selected monster. If you activated this effect, if this Overlaid card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of an Excess Monster, Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase.

[b]Stronsay:[/b] When this card destroys an opponent' monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can activate 1 of the following effects:
- This card's Level is treated as the destroyed monster's Level.
- Select 1 other "Unwaking" monster you control. It's Level is treated as the destroyed monster's Level, until your next End Phase.

[img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/8977/212065b.jpg[/img] [img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/1954/212065h.jpg[/img]

[b]Syngnathidae:[/b] When this card is Summoned, you can look at the top 3 cards of your Deck. If there is not an Excess Monster among those cards, you can add 1 Excess Monster in your Graveyard to your hand. If this Overlaid card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of an Excess Monster, you can select 1 Excess Monster you control. Then, Overlay 1 other "Unwaking" monster in your Graveyard on the selected monster.

[b]Actiniara:[/b] When this card is Summoned, it is changed to Defense Position. Once per turn, you can return 1 Sea Serpent or Fish-Type monster in your Graveyard to the Deck to Special Summon 1 "Anemone Token" (Fish-Type/DARK/Level 0/ATK 0/DEF 1200) in Defense Position to your side of the field. The Level of an "Anemone Token" is equal to the the returned monster's Level, until your next End Phase. Then, it is treated as Level 1.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Excess Monsters: 4/??][img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/8977/212065b.jpg[/img] [img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/6025/212065e.jpg[/img]

[b]Sharkshifter Ahti:[/b] This card can only be Exceed Summoned by Tributing Sea-Serpent or Fish-Type monsters. Once per turn, you can send 1 Overlaid monster on this card to the Graveyard to return 1 card your opponent controls to their hand. Then, your opponent must reveal and shuffle 1 other card in their hand into their Deck.

[b]Floodflayer Paricea:[/b] Once per turn, you can send 1 Overlaid monster on this card to the Graveyard to reveal the top 2 cards of your opponent's Deck. Then, send them to the bottom of your opponent's Deck. Your opponent can discard 1 card to negate this effect. You can Overlay 1 "Unwaking" monster in your Graveyard on this card or add 1 "Unwaking" monster in your Graveyard to your hand instead of conducting your normal Draw Phase.

[img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/848/212065r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/5698/212065t.jpg[/img]

[b]Crabcaliph Ikatere:[/b] This card gains 200 ATK for each "Unwaking" monster Overlaid on it. Once per turn, your opponent must reveal the top and bottom card of their Deck. If the revealed cards are not the same card type, you can send 1 Overlaid monster on this card to the Graveyard to send both revealed cards to the Graveyard.

[b]Lobsterlegion Atlaua:[/b] You can Tribute up to 2 "Unwaking" monsters of any Level you control to Excess Summon this card. When this card selects an opponent's monster as an attack target, before the Damage Step, your opponent must shuffle their Deck, then reveal the top card of their Deck. If the revealed card is a Monster Card, you can send 1 Overlaid monster on this card to the Graveyard to send the selected monster to the top of your opponent's Deck. Then, this card can attack again.
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[spoiler=Spell Cards: 1/??] [img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/7248/212065.jpg[/img]

[b]Unwaking Waters:[/b] Neither player can Exceed Summon, unless they Tribute Sea Serpent or Fish-Type monsters. If an Excess Monster is destroyed by a card effect, the monster's controller can add a number of other "Unwaking" monsters in their Graveyard equal to the number of monsters used to Summon the destroyed monster to their hand. Also, both players can Overlay 1 Sea-Serpent or Fish-Type monster in their respective hands on an Excess Monster they control. If they do, they cannot Normal Summon a monster that turn.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Trap Cards: 0/??][/spoiler][/center]

[Thelinil]

I feel like Vanguard should remove an unwaking from play, not add one to your deck, that way you couldn't have someone with 3 excess monsters on the field using the same few monsters. But thats about it, I like the second one's mechanic. A tad slow, but thats fair.

[Dandelo]

[quote name='Thelinil' timestamp='1295153174' post='4937478']
I feel like Vanguard should remove an unwaking from play, not add one to your deck, that [b]way you couldn't have someone with 3 excess monsters on the field using the same few monsters[/b]. But thats about it, I like the second one's mechanic. A tad slow, but thats fair.
[/quote]

Could you explain the bold part to me; either it makes no sense or i'm just a little slow at the moment.

[Thelinil]

[quote name='waters27' timestamp='1295153398' post='4937485']
Could you explain the bold part to me; either it makes no sense or i'm just a little slow at the moment.
[/quote]
It feels like you could really easily dump a level 4 unwaking into the graveyard, then use a vanguard to get an excess, and then you have a vanguard in the graveyard, then get another vanguard and rinse and repeat.

[Dandelo]

[quote name='Thelinil' timestamp='1295153572' post='4937489']
It feels like you could really easily dump a level 4 unwaking into the graveyard, then use a vanguard to get an excess, and then you have a vanguard in the graveyard, then get another vanguard and rinse and repeat.
[/quote]

Okay, now I see what you mean. I think i'll just add a "when this card is sent to the Graveyard after activating this effect, it is removed from play" or something to Vanguard. That seems better.

[Thelinil]

Sharkfin Ahti: This card can only be Exceed Summoned by Tributing Sea-Serpent or Fish-Type monsters. Once per turn, you can send 1 Overlaid monster on this card to the Graveyard to return 1 card your opponent controls to their hand. [b]Then, if they can, your opponent must reveal and shuffle 1 card of a different card type in their hand into the Deck.[/b] [i]One time only, if this card would be destroyed by battle when it has no Overlaid monsters on it, you can select 1 "Unwaking" monster in your Graveyard instead. Then, Overlay the selected monster onto this card.[/i]
I feel like the second part be just 1 card in their hand, not of a different type, that way, you could send even the same card type, but then its a tad weaker in the fact they can choose more things. More balance IMO.
And the last effect feels like just adding something unnecessary, that would be 3 cards bounced, and then 3 cards put back into the deck, thats a -3 on the field, and -3 from their hand, and you only lose -2 from excess summoning.

[Dandelo]

[quote name='Thelinil' timestamp='1295154174' post='4937505']
Sharkfin Ahti: This card can only be Exceed Summoned by Tributing Sea-Serpent or Fish-Type monsters. Once per turn, you can send 1 Overlaid monster on this card to the Graveyard to return 1 card your opponent controls to their hand. [b]Then, if they can, your opponent must reveal and shuffle 1 card of a different card type in their hand into the Deck.[/b] [i]One time only, if this card would be destroyed by battle when it has no Overlaid monsters on it, you can select 1 "Unwaking" monster in your Graveyard instead. Then, Overlay the selected monster onto this card.[/i]
I feel like the second part be just 1 card in their hand, not of a different type, that way, you could send even the same card type, but then its a tad weaker in the fact they can choose more things. More balance IMO.
And the last effect feels like just adding something unnecessary, that would be 3 cards bounced, and then 3 cards put back into the deck, thats a -3 on the field, and -3 from their hand, and you only lose -2 from excess summoning.
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Well, seeing as Exceed Summoning is considered more difficult than Synchro Summoning, Excess Monsters are... lets say, allowed to be slightly overpowered. Though I may take off the last effect.

Cards have been updated.

[Classic]

[u][b]Unwaking Vanguard:[/b][/u]
The pic looks great, and in a way matches the name in a way, At the end of the first sentence i'm not sure if you worded that right Grammatically, but looks good ... it is balanced and No OCG errors. Nice Job .
Single Rating: 10/10

[u][b]Unwaking Rorqual:[/b][/u]
First off! *looks up rorqual* Ok a Cetacean mammal... Hmm... Anways:
Looks good As The first No OCG errors, But on the last part of the effect (If this Overlaid card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a DARK Sea-Serpent or Fish-Type Excess Monster, you can add 1 non-Excess "Unwaking" monster in your Graveyard to your hand.) At the end of that maybe you should add something like "other than this card. And once again nice pic. Overall nice Job .
Single Rating: 9.5/10

[u][b]Sharkfin Ahti:[/b][/u]
First of IMO the pic is good, but ... almost bland the background bores me :/. Effect is good i don't know what exceed monster's are yet or what overlaid means xD (havent actually looked at TCG cards in a year =P doubt there even real). OCg is perfect .
Single Rating: 9.8/10

Overall Review:
It is a nice set, i'd like to see more, BTW if you need Gold rare's or Holo's/Advanced Holo's or Advanced recolor's tell me i will do it for free ^^.

Overall Rating:
9.76/10

[Dandelo]

[quote name='⓿.⓿' timestamp='1295217711' post='4939324']
[u][b]Unwaking Vanguard:[/b][/u]
The pic looks great, and in a way matches the name in a way, At the end of the first sentence i'm not sure if you worded that right Grammatically, but looks good ... it is balanced and No OCG errors. Nice Job .
Single Rating: 10/10

[u][b]Unwaking Rorqual:[/b][/u]
First off! *looks up rorqual* Ok a Cetacean mammal... Hmm... Anways:
Looks good As The first No OCG errors, But on the last part of the effect (If this Overlaid card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a DARK Sea-Serpent or Fish-Type Excess Monster, you can add 1 non-Excess "Unwaking" monster in your Graveyard to your hand.) At the end of that maybe you should add something like "other than this card. And once again nice pic. Overall nice Job .
Single Rating: 9.5/10

[u][b]Sharkfin Ahti:[/b][/u]
First of IMO the pic is good, but ... almost bland the background bores me :/. Effect is good i don't know what exceed monster's are yet or what overlaid means xD (havent actually looked at TCG cards in a year =P doubt there even real). OCg is perfect .
Single Rating: 9.8/10

Overall Review:
It is a nice set, i'd like to see more, BTW if you need Gold rare's or Holo's/Advanced Holo's or Advanced recolor's tell me i will do it for free ^^.

Overall Rating:
9.76/10
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Thank you for the exceptional individual ratings; glad you liked them. I did change Rorqual's effect. As for Excess Monsters, they are real, and I believe there is a thread about them in this forum.

And I may get to you on the holo-ing, sounds like it'd be cool looking.

Also, "Cnidaria" and "Stronsay" added!

[Classic]

[b][u]Cnidaria[/u]:[/b]
OCG looks solid, the pic is great as usual not much else to say its balanced, and a nice card.

Single rating:
10/10

[b][u]Stronsay[/u]:[/b]
First off nice pic . It seems balanced as far as i can see. OCG is solid except at the end of Opponent you put a ' instead of a s if it was meant to be like that the OCG is 100 Percent Solid .

When this card destroys an opponent[b]s[/b] monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can activate 1 of the following effects:
- This card's Level is treated as the destroyed monster's Level.
- Select 1 other "Unwaking" monster you control. It's Level is treated as the destroyed monster's Level, until your next End Phase.

Single Rating
10/10

[b][u]Overall[/u]:[/b]
Once again good cards, but they almost bored me, try using more creative effects.

[b][u]Update Rating[/u]:[/b]
10/10

[b][u]Updated Entire Set Rating[/u]:[/b]
9.92/10

Keep it up ^^.

EDIT:

[quote name='waters27' timestamp='1295262758' post='4940419']
And I may get to you on the holo-ing, sounds like it'd be cool looking.
[/quote]
It looks like this:
[spoiler=Advanced Holo]
[IMG]http://i1084.photobucket.com/albums/j401/HTMLemons/GreaterChimera-1.png[/IMG][IMG]http://i1084.photobucket.com/albums/j401/HTMLemons/MechanicalVelociraptorF.png[/IMG][/spoiler]

Ad a basic Holo is that but it goes over the entire picture not Just the BG ^^

[Dandelo]

[quote name='⓿.⓿' timestamp='1295287621' post='4941005']

[b][u]Overall[/u]:[/b]
Once again good cards, but they almost bored me, try using more creative effects.

[/quote]

I sometimes like to keep the effects clean and simple. Sometimes it's better.

Also, thank you again for the ratings/comments. And I do like the holo-ing... once I create some more cards, we'll see about it.

[Dandelo]

New Excess Monster, "Floodflayer Paricea" added!

[Classic]

[b][u]Floodflayer Paricea[/u]:[/b]
OCG Looks Solid As usual xD, The pic is great but the colors are dull to me o.o. The effect looks great the first part is a nice flare due to the fact your opponent can choose to deny it for a price ^^ and the last segment is nice

[u]Update Rating[/u]:
10/10
[b]
[u]Updated Set Rating[/u]:[/b]
9.96/10 (almost to 10! xD)

[Dandelo]

[quote name='⓿.⓿' timestamp='1295414708' post='4944302']
[b][u]Floodflayer Paricea[/u]:[/b]
OCG Looks Solid As usual xD, The pic is great but the colors are dull to me o.o. The effect looks great the first part is a nice flare due to the fact your opponent can choose to deny it for a price ^^ and the last segment is nice

[u]Update Rating[/u]:
10/10
[b]
[u]Updated Set Rating[/u]:[/b]
9.96/10 (almost to 10! xD)
[/quote]

Thanks, yet again; Paricea is definetely my favorite card of the set, thus far. I suppose since you're the only one following this thread, you deserve another +rep.

Also, two more Effect Monsters added.

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

I don't see why you haven't received a 10 yet (:

So i will give you a 10'

Your cards are great with fantastic effects. The arch-type you created is swell as well.

I see no OCG problems in my point of view and what a sketchy set you have created.

10'

[Dandelo]

[quote name='♣Master♣' timestamp='1295485383' post='4945689']
I don't see why you haven't received a 10 yet (:

So i will give you a 10'

Your cards are great with fantastic effects. The arch-type you created is swell as well.

I see no OCG problems in my point of view and what a sketchy set you have created.

10'
[/quote]

Haha, thank you. +rep for the nice comment.

Also, "Unwaking Waters" Field Spell Card and Excess Monster added!

[Anbu-of-Sand]

[color=blue][b]Unwaking Vanguard[/b][/color]
It makes for an 1800 Beater and a Level flexible Tribute for Exceed Summons. It's very simple, and I like it a lot. Although it's uses outside of the Archetype may be questionable, the card itself looks like a must. But so far, even though it's the only card I have reviewed, I'd run it at 2, possibly 3. Originality is somewhat questionable to, even if it does involve Excess Monsters. In my opinion, the last drawback is unneeded, the card would be fine without it.

[color=blue][b]Unwaking Rorqual[/b][/color]
The first effect could make the monster somewhat splashable in Excess Decks. The problem? 1750 is somewhat easy to run over nowadays. Perhaps bump it to 1800-1900? 2000 would make it a sweet wall, but possibly getting it's first effect to use to easy. Second effect although very, VERY specific lets you recycle one of your non-Excess Unwakings to your hand. The card in my opinion, is to well, specific. Perhaps if it would just be sent to the Graveyard by the effect of any Excess Monster? Instead of a DARK and / or Sea-Serpent / Fish-Type. Do that , the card could be pretty damn good.

More reviews to come overtime, seeing I'm reviewing I believe 3-4 other Archetypes overtime as well.

[monty1394]

wow. these cards are just great. the pics, effects, and names are outstanding. 10/10

1 question...where do you find the pics??

[Dandelo]

[quote name='Anbu-of-Sand' timestamp='1295496636' post='4946191']
[color=blue][b]Unwaking Vanguard[/b][/color]
It makes for an 1800 Beater and a Level flexible Tribute for Exceed Summons. It's very simple, and I like it a lot. Although it's uses outside of the Archetype may be questionable, the card itself looks like a must. But so far, even though it's the only card I have reviewed, I'd run it at 2, possibly 3. Originality is somewhat questionable to, even if it does involve Excess Monsters. In my opinion, the last drawback is unneeded, the card would be fine without it.

[b]Yeah, I didn't much like the remove from play drawback for Vanguard either, seeing as for this this archtype, that is a major drawback. Returning cards to the Deck seems good enough, since "Unwaking" monsters like staying in the Graveyard. [/b]

[color=blue][b]Unwaking Rorqual[/b][/color]
The first effect could make the monster somewhat splashable in Excess Decks. The problem? 1750 is somewhat easy to run over nowadays. Perhaps bump it to 1800-1900? 2000 would make it a sweet wall, but possibly getting it's first effect to use to easy. Second effect although very, VERY specific lets you recycle one of your non-Excess Unwakings to your hand. The card in my opinion, is to well, specific. Perhaps if it would just be sent to the Graveyard by the effect of any Excess Monster? Instead of a DARK and / or Sea-Serpent / Fish-Type. Do that , the card could be pretty damn good.

[b]And I didn't know if 1800 - 1900 DEF would be considered overpowered or not for Rorqual. And I was thinking of making it any Excess Monster, which would make it much more flexible, and would make use of adding other Excess Monsters not of the archtpye to the Deck.

All changes you suggested were made.[/b]

More reviews to come overtime, seeing I'm reviewing I believe 3-4 other Archetypes overtime as well.

[b]Yup, I realize you're a busy guy, haha. I appreciate your review and time, and look forward to more. +rep for you (when I am able to give out more reputation).[/b]
[/quote]

[Dandelo]

Bump.

[Anbu-of-Sand]

[color=blue][b]Unwaking Cnidaria[/b][/color]
The first effect is somewhat simple, being able to recycle a monster that has a Level equal to the monsters that were used to Exceed Summon that Excess Monster you selected when revealing this card. You might want to re-word it somehow though, I was confused at first if it meant the Excess Monsters Level, or the Level of the monsters used for the Excess Summon. Being able to Overlay this card right after using this effect seems like a +1, which I like. Another sweet bonus if when you do use this effect, when this gets sent to the Graveyard by the Excess Monster, you get it onto your field during your next Standby. The effects although not so original, flow well together and seem like it can help the Archetype here and there.

[color=blue][b]Unwaking Stronsay[/b][/color]
The first effect makes for good Level flexibility. Either for Synchro Summons, or the obvious use for the Archetype; Exceed Summoning. Or is it called an Excess Summon? Eh, who cares :P The second effect lets you use it on another Unwaking monster you control instead, but last only until your next End Phase, rather then permanently like the first effect. The card seems best for flexibility, and looks like a decent beater. But like the above, not the most original. And I don't know why, but seems slightly underpowered.

[color=blue][b]Unwaking S_______e[/b][/color]
NO WAY IM TYPING THAT LONG AS NAME. I'm not even going to try to pronounce it. The card when Summoned, lets you recycle an Excess in your Grave to your hand, but first, you'll have to look at the top 3 cards of your Deck and hope none of them is an Excess. This seems quite risky, but so far, seems like a good deal that you'll win most of the time. The card then when sent to the Graveyard by the effect of an Excess Monster, lets you select an Excess Monster you control, and lets you Overlay an Unwaking in your Grave onto that monster. Now I don't know if you knew this, but you know this lets you recycle this again and again, right? Not sure if this would be overpowering though, but probably would.

[color=blue][b]Unwaking A______a[/b][/color]
Read first to sentences from the last card. Anyways, the card when Summoned makes a 1200 DEF, well, not really a wall, but I can't think of another word. The card lets you recycle a Sea-Serpent or Fish back to the Deck from the Grave to give you a free Token, which stats are somewhat equal to this monster. However, the Level is equal to that monster you returned from the Graveyard to the Deck, until your next End Phase that is. Just like that Stronsay monster, seems to be made just for flexibility. After that next End Phase though, it becomes a Level 1. This reminds me of Formula Synchron, but sadly, it can only be used as a Tribute for an Exceed Summon. Or is Synchro Summoning different from Tributing? xD Anyways, a decent card.

[Dandelo]

[quote name='Anbu-of-Sand' timestamp='1295578138' post='4948060']
[color=blue][b]Unwaking Cnidaria[/b][/color]
The first effect is somewhat simple, being able to recycle a monster that has a Level equal to the monsters that were used to Exceed Summon that Excess Monster you selected when revealing this card. You might want to re-word it somehow though, I was confused at first if it meant the Excess Monsters Level, or the Level of the monsters used for the Excess Summon. Being able to Overlay this card right after using this effect seems like a +1, which I like. Another sweet bonus if when you do use this effect, when this gets sent to the Graveyard by the Excess Monster, you get it onto your field during your next Standby. The effects although not so original, flow well together and seem like it can help the Archetype here and there.

[b]I thought the effect was pretty clear. Return 1 "Unwaking" monster in your Graveyard to the Deck whose Level is equal to the Level[i]s[/i] of the monster[i]s[/i] Tributed to Exceed Summon the [i]selected[/i] monster; meaning, if I Summoned a level 8 Excess Monster with 2 Level 4's, i'd have to return 1 Level 4 monster in my Graveyard to the Deck, etc. And like I always say, sometimes originality doesn't work out, so I like to create effects that would actually benefit the card and.or archtype.[/b]

[color=blue][b]Unwaking Stronsay[/b][/color]
The first effect makes for good Level flexibility. Either for Synchro Summons, or the obvious use for the Archetype; Exceed Summoning. Or is it called an Excess Summon? Eh, who cares The second effect lets you use it on another Unwaking monster you control instead, but last only until your next End Phase, rather then permanently like the first effect. The card seems best for flexibility, and looks like a decent beater. But like the above, not the most original. And I don't know why, but seems slightly underpowered.

[b]You know, i'm not sure if it's Exceed or Excess Summon eitherh, haha. But yes, this card was created to be flexible. It can be used in other decks that invole Synchro or Excess Summoning. If that's considered underpowered, I suppose upping the stats could work.[/b]

[color=blue][b]Unwaking S_______e[/b][/color]
NO WAY IM TYPING THAT LONG AS NAME. I'm not even going to try to pronounce it. The card when Summoned, lets you recycle an Excess in your Grave to your hand, but first, you'll have to look at the top 3 cards of your Deck and hope none of them is an Excess. This seems quite risky, but so far, seems like a good deal that you'll win most of the time. The card then when sent to the Graveyard by the effect of an Excess Monster, lets you select an Excess Monster you control, and lets you Overlay an Unwaking in your Grave onto that monster. Now I don't know if you knew this, but you know this lets you recycle this again and again, right? Not sure if this would be overpowering though, but probably would.

[b]Syngnathidae! And you're right about the last part, I should have it let you Overlay 1 OTHER "Unwaking" monster.

[color=blue][b]Unwaking A______a[/b][/color]
Read first to sentences from the last card. Anyways, the card when Summoned makes a 1200 DEF, well, not really a wall, but I can't think of another word. The card lets you recycle a Sea-Serpent or Fish back to the Deck from the Grave to give you a free Token, which stats are somewhat equal to this monster. However, the Level is equal to that monster you returned from the Graveyard to the Deck, until your next End Phase that is. Just like that Stronsay monster, seems to be made just for flexibility. After that next End Phase though, it becomes a Level 1. This reminds me of Formula Synchron, but sadly, it can only be used as a Tribute for an Exceed Summon. Or is Synchro Summoning different from Tributing? xD Anyways, a decent card.

[b]Again, yes, for flexibility. The idea for the "Unwaking" archtype is to let you be able to manipulate Levels, do it easily, and do it often, seeing as it is the Excess Monsters that are the ones that pack the punch. And I was thinking that if i'd let the Tokens be used for Synchro Summoning, that it'd be considered overpowered. What're your thoughts on that? [/b]
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As always, I appreciate the astounding reviews. +rep, sir!

[Dandelo]

And a bump.

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Just to let you know, I plan on giving lots of reviews (some to this thread), tomorrow afterschool. Mainly because I'm still studying for my history exam.

[Dandelo]

[quote name='Anbu-of-Sand' timestamp='1295914293' post='4958435']
Just to let you know, I plan on giving lots of reviews (some to this thread), tomorrow afterschool. Mainly because I'm still studying for my history exam.
[/quote]

Sounds good to me, mate. Good luck on that exam.

Also, a few changes have been made thanks to suggestions. And new Excess Monster added!

La-di-da, comments would be nice.