Classic Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [color=maroon][size="2"][b][center] C&C? [IMG]http://i1084.photobucket.com/albums/j401/HTMLemons/MechanicalVelociraptorF.png[/IMG] [u]Effect:[/u] This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. When this card is destroyed by a card effect Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. When this card is destroyed you lose 200 Life Points. When this card destroys a monster activate one of the following Effects: - Inflict 500 Direct Damage to your opponents Life Points. - Special Summon 1 Mechanical Velociraptor token (Same Effect, and DEF as this card but minus 100 ATK) in Attack position O[Spoiler=Original Effect][u]Effect:[/u] This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. When this card is destroyed by a card effect Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. When this card is destroyed you lose 200 Life Points. When this card destroys a monster activate one of the following Effects: - Inflict 500 Direct Damage to your opponents Life Points. - Special Summon 1 Mechanical Velociraptor token (Same Effect DEF as this card but minus 100 ATK.)[/spoiler] [/center][/b][/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. When this card is destroyed by a card effect Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. When this card is destroyed [b](by battle?/by a card effect?)[/b], inflict 200 damage to your Life Points. When this card destroys a monster [b]by battle[/b] activate one of the following effects: - Inflict 500 Direct Damage to your opponents Life Points. - Special Summon 1 "Mechanical Velociraptor Token" [b](Machine-Type/EARTH/Level 3/ATK 1600/DEF 0) in ??? Position.[/b] Tokens can't have effects. Also, that sort of ATK is OP for a Level 3 with that kind of effect. I'd make it around 1200, or increase its Level. If the first bolded bit is neither, then make it "When this card is removed from the field". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Thanks for the review but my opinion: • First Bold: It doesn't need to say "removed from the field" :/ • Second Bold: it does not need to say by battle. • Third Bold: Whoops Meant Attack Position xD • Token (effect Comment): Ya they can.. • The ATK is not OP due to the the drawback's IMO. • Did you read the effect or skim it because it looks like you did not read it :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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