John A. Zoidberg Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [center]A little idea I thought of. This archetype focuses on Special Summoning as many tokens to your opponents field as possible to fuel Apocalyptis, as he's the main powersource. [spoiler=Monsters (4/?)] [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5760/227682.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, you can pay half of your Life Points to Special Summon 1 monster with 0 ATK and 0 DEF.[/spoiler] [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/4440/227682z.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summoned to your field, switch control of it to your opponent. Once per turn, your opponent must pay 1000 Life Points. If they don't, you gain control of 1 monster on their field until the End Phase. If your opponent goes 4 turns without paying Life Points, this card is destroyed.[/spoiler] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/5760/227682.jpg[/img] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/6277/227682e.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Morbid Summoner." Once per turn, Special Summon 1 or more "Morbid Token(s)" (0 ATK, 0 DEF) to your opponent's field for each "Morbid Summoner" in your Graveyard. "Morbid Tokens" cannot be tributed. For each "Morbid Token" on your opponent's field, this card gains 2000 ATK. At the End Phase of your opponent's turn, destroy all "Morbid Token(s)" on your opponent's field.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells (1/?)] [img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/6277/227682e.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]Whenever a "Morbid" monster is sent to the Graveyard by battle, pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Morbid Zealot" from your hand or Graveyard. If this card is destroyed by the effect of another Spell card, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Morbid" monster from your hand or Graveyard.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps (0/?] To be started another day[/spoiler] I think my OCG turned out relatively well, for someone who hasn't made a serious card in ages. Anyways, enjoy and rate.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 For the first one, specify where it can be summoned from... For the second one, when your opponent gains control of it, you do know that you become the cards opponent right, meaning you get the negative effect. For the third one, it's ATK and DEF are a bit too high for a level 3 monster. For the fourth one, change 2000 to 1500. It's got potential otk ability. EDIT: For your spell card, dont restrain it to morbid zealot and stay away from the grave, say you can special summon Morbid monster who's ATK is between 1500-2000 from your hand or deck. Remove it's destruction effect too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Essence' timestamp='1295232197' post='4939876'] For the first one, specify where it can be summoned from... For the second one, when your opponent gains control of it, you do know that you become the cards opponent right, meaning you get the negative effect. For the third one, it's ATK and DEF are a bit too high for a level 3 monster. For the fourth one, change 2000 to 1500. It's got potential otk ability. [/quote] 1st, will do. 2nd, ah. Damn loopholes. o.o 3rd, I'll fix that, too. 4th, you can only have 3 of one monster in a deck, and it gets 2000 attack for each token. Plus, you need to pay half your lp. And there's a chance your opponents will have 2+ monster on their field anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Dr. Rockso' timestamp='1295232362' post='4939880'] 4th, you can only have 3 of one monster in a deck, and it gets 2000 attack for each token. Plus, you need to pay half your lp. And there's a chance your opponents will have 2+ monster on their field anyway. [/quote] Fair enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Dr. Rockso' timestamp='1295232362' post='4939880'] 4th, you can only have 3 of one monster in a deck, and it gets 2000 attack for each token. [/quote] Not true. Tokens are unlimited. Otherwise, explain Scapegoat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Phoenix19' timestamp='1295235965' post='4940006'] Not true. Tokens are unlimited. Otherwise, explain Scapegoat. [/quote] >_> The card gets 2000 ATK for each token. There is one token for each Summoner. There's a maximum of 3 summoners. The tokens are destroyed at the end of the turn. Do the math. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Dr. Rockso' timestamp='1295237207' post='4940050'] >_> The card gets 2000 ATK for each token. There is one token for each Summoner. There's a maximum of 3 summoners. The tokens are destroyed at the end of the turn. Do the math. [/quote] Oh, right... forgot the destroyed effect. My bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Phoenix19' timestamp='1295254616' post='4940341'] Oh, right... forgot the destroyed effect. My bad. [/quote] No problem, just a simple mistake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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