evilgniusjr Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/4056/347050.jpg[/img] I tried to just make a normal card at first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 This is really good OCG for your first card. Few corrections though: tribute = Tribute inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent = inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points. face up = face-up While this card remains face-up on the field, = While you control this face-up card, (I think) 8/10! Effect's not special, but as I said, really good for a first-timer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilgniusjr Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 thx 4 the corrections. i'll keep those in mind 4 my next post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeruel85 Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 One thing the other guy missed: field = Field. This is good for a first card (and a lot better than my first). But I think that the card should benefit from its own effect. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Zeruel85' timestamp='1295238556' post='4940096'] field = Field. [/quote] Not true. Field is only capitalised if it is as in "Field Spell Card". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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