Huntar! Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 please rate them.they may be a bit overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Many Grammar errors, if you need them pointing out just ask ^_^ Good effort tho ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 can you point some of them out please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Dark Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Perfect! But i don't like the Pictures. 9 /10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 7/10 Are you sure those are your best? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Grammar needs help =/These may be your best now, but you are going to be even better, trust me. People think i'm good, but when I first joined, my grammar was HORRID, now I just have a few problems, so, you will get there. PM me whenever you want any help ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Just work on your grammar and use of pictures, (Because it could be a little more unique...) and your work will be about perfect! For effort, I think you did a pretty good job! Keep up the good work! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Yeah, glass got it, good effort ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pug Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Yeah, apart from grammar and spelling ("Special Summon" and "End Phase" etc have capitals). Also it's spelled "Phoenix", not "Pheonix". My opinion doesn't really hold much water, considering this is my first post, but at least some of it can be salvaged ... I hope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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