Good Dragon Card

[evilgniusjr]

[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/4056/347050.jpg[/img]

Lore:"1 Tuner +2 or more non-Tuner monsters"
Once per turn, you may add one "ShadowBane" counter to this card (max 1). You can remove one "ShadowBane" counter from this card to activate one of the following effects:
-Increase this card's ATK points by 800 until the End Phase.
-Destroy two Spell or Trap cards on your opponent's side of the field.

plz comment!

[bbstar95]

i like this alot i cant see any OCG then again im a noob but i like the pic 10\10 ps if i knew how to +rep i would lol

[evilgniusjr]

[quote name='bbstar95' timestamp='1295308386' post='4941777']
i like this alot i cant see any OCG then again im a noob but i like the pic 10\10 ps if i knew how to +rep i would lol
[/quote]

thx alot!

[Azphreal]

"1 Tuner +2 or more non-Tuner monsters"
Once per turn, you may [i]add[/i] [b]place[/b] [i]one[/i] [b]1[/b] ShadowBane [b]C[/b]ounter [i]to[/i] [b]on[/b] this card (max 1). You can remove ShadowBane [b]C[/b]ounter from this card to activate one of the following effects:
-Increase this [i]monster[/i] [b]card[/b]'s ATK [i]points[/i] by 1000 until the End Phase.
-Destroy [i]two[/i] [b]2[/b] Spell or Trap [b]C[/b]ards on your opponent's side of the field.

First line doesn't need speech marks, and neither do counters. That's only for names. "+2" needs a space in between it. Fixes are in bold. Removes are italics. Most common OCG error here though is numbers; don't use words, use numbers.
Also, it is waaay OP. Once per turn, you get a 1K attack boost or two S/T destructions?

[evilgniusjr]

[quote name='Phoenix19' timestamp='1295339140' post='4942520']
"1 Tuner +2 or more non-Tuner monsters"
Once per turn, you may [i]add[/i] [b]place[/b] [i]one[/i] [b]1[/b] ShadowBane [b]C[/b]ounter [i]to[/i] [b]on[/b] this card (max 1). You can remove ShadowBane [b]C[/b]ounter from this card to activate one of the following effects:
-Increase this [i]monster[/i] [b]card[/b]'s ATK [i]points[/i] by 1000 until the End Phase.
-Destroy [i]two[/i] [b]2[/b] Spell or Trap [b]C[/b]ards on your opponent's side of the field.

First line doesn't need speech marks, and neither do counters. That's only for names. "+2" needs a space in between it. Fixes are in bold. Removes are italics. Most common OCG error here though is numbers; don't use words, use numbers.
Also, it is waaay OP. Once per turn, you get a 1K attack boost or two S/T destructions?
[/quote]

ok thx for the info i will change it.