TheBigCheese Posted August 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 Constructive criticism welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted August 16, 2011 Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 Tried to send this to you in a PM, but I kept getting errors. I was wondering if I could get the link to your images in your Zelda set. I'm putting them into my custom card game, but since the site has updated I can no longer right click on an image and collect the image like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted August 16, 2011 Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 More cards dude 8/10 there awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Just popped back on to YCM more constructive criticism welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 Hello everyone! I hope you are all very well, I have not popped onto YGCM for ages so I've just come back to have a look around and meet the new members. If you are a new member or if you have never seen me before then check out my cards I always want feedback. Regards. TheBigCheese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exedraking Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 I must say that over-all, your cards are the best i've seen! All i must say that a couple of them, the wording, confuses me. They definitely unique effects! But they do confuse me as to what they specifically do. Though even with that in mind they definitely awesome! 9.56/10 The only thing keeping me from saying 10/10 is the wording. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 [quote name='TheBigCheese' timestamp='1339347471' post='5954948'] Hello everyone! I hope you are all very well, I have not popped onto YGCM for ages so I've just come back to have a look around and meet the new members. If you are a new member or if you have never seen me before then check out my cards I always want feedback. Regards. TheBigCheese [/quote] Hey man just wanted to let you know that your Light Arrow has been seeing a lot of play in my ccg. It's one of the staples. I've also found Elegy of Emptiness really good for Token decks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hormrock Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/IsuKt.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exedraking Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 [quote name='hormrock' timestamp='1339355109' post='5955013'] [img]http://i.imgur.com/IsuKt.jpg[/img] [/quote] uh why exactly is this here? isnt this supposed to be a Zelda card topic post? This isnt related to said topic, it isn't exactly your topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2012 [quote name='Exedraking' timestamp='1339352214' post='5955003'] I must say that over-all, your cards are the best i've seen! All i must say that a couple of them, the wording, confuses me. They definitely unique effects! But they do confuse me as to what they specifically do. Though even with that in mind they definitely awesome! 9.56/10 The only thing keeping me from saying 10/10 is the wording. Great job! [/quote] [quote name='Exedraking' timestamp='1339352214' post='5955003'] I must say that over-all, your cards are the best i've seen! All i must say that a couple of them, the wording, confuses me. They definitely unique effects! But they do confuse me as to what they specifically do. Though even with that in mind they definitely awesome! 9.56/10 The only thing keeping me from saying 10/10 is the wording. Great job! [/quote] Thank you for taking the time to have a look at my cards. I appreciate what you say about the wording of a few of the cards and it's something that I will try to rectify but long and drawn out effects require wordy and often confusing LORE's. Having said that I am always trying to revise them. Are there any cards in particular that you would like to see me make? Regards..... TheBigCheese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted June 16, 2012 Report Share Posted June 16, 2012 Make a card off of Link's Zora form. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted June 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2012 [quote name='FF Fan' timestamp='1339885154' post='5957925'] Make a card off of Link's Zora form. [/quote] Done The card itself may seem rushed and simplistic but I wanted it to reflect the boomerang effect of Zora Link. I hope you like it. Regards...... TheBigCheese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted July 3, 2012 Report Share Posted July 3, 2012 Hmm, well it is simplistic. How about Goht? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShenRai89 Posted July 3, 2012 Report Share Posted July 3, 2012 I know that you've heard this, but maybe you should lessen up the effect cards and maybe add a few normal monsters. Maybe some fusion or ritual types, too. Just trying to help out. BTW, amazing cards. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted July 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2012 [quote name='ShenRai89' timestamp='1341293176' post='5966093'] I know that you've heard this, but maybe you should lessen up the effect cards and maybe add a few normal monsters. Maybe some fusion or ritual types, too. Just trying to help out. BTW, amazing cards. Keep it up! [/quote] ShenRai89 Thank you for your input on my cards. You are right, there are a vast number of Effect Monsters in my collection and very few Vanillas. This is down to the fact that when I make my cards I wish to express my creativity and there is more skill in creating an Effect Monster than a Vanilla Monster. Having said that I am a massive Normal/Vanilla Monster fan and I will add some Vanillas into my collection. If you are a Zelda fan yourself, perhaps you could tell me which Zelda characters that you would like to be made into Vanilla Cards, (make sure that you check my collection first though.) Regards…… TheBigCheese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exedraking Posted July 15, 2012 Report Share Posted July 15, 2012 [quote name='TheBigCheese' timestamp='1339804216' post='5957482'] Thank you for taking the time to have a look at my cards. I appreciate what you say about the wording of a few of the cards and it's something that I will try to rectify but long and drawn out effects require wordy and often confusing LORE's. Having said that I am always trying to revise them. Are there any cards in particular that you would like to see me make? Regards..... TheBigCheese [/quote] I guess i do see a lack of equip spells. So maybe like a master sword for "hero of winds" ? or you know like the sword that ganondorf pulls out of his chest in TP and equip that to the different forms of ganon. but you know thats just my opinion. Whatever you feel like should be added...maybe the mask links? like Goron, Deku, or Feirce deity as a ritual. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Triforceguy92 Posted November 11, 2012 Report Share Posted November 11, 2012 Where is Zelda in the Zelda deck? >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♦~Thug-Life~♦ Posted November 11, 2012 Report Share Posted November 11, 2012 Yeah I just looked through all the cards and they are fantastic for a first. I see your using the older OCG but that don't matter. Some effects could use some rearranging but they are great. I'm giving you a like for taking your time to do these and work on them hard. Good job man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hermit Purple Posted November 11, 2012 Report Share Posted November 11, 2012 [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]To start off, I would just like to say that I have no idea on how you planned to make these cards. I'm saying this now just to let you know that i'll just be reviewing the cards as individuals because that's how I see it (since there is no defined archetype i can only assume that these cards can be/are meant to be played with existing cards other than these) Okay well let's start[/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Dark One of Legend[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]First turn 8k Beater if you just HAPPEN to have polymerization. Sure, if your opponent Solemn Warnings it then it's not going to the extra deck afterwards but it's still WAY to powerful and it probably wouldn't matter if you couldn't attack first turn, because most of the time, if your opponent can't setup, than you can just push for game in one hit.[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Ganondorf - King of Darkness[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Only makes sense to run it in a DARK deck because it has it's limits. It's sole purpose would want to be attacked. And since you'd probably not want to keep this guy on the field, you would just banish it for the summon you get off of it. I don't need to tell you that people would be playing this with "Yubel" cards most of the time do I?[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Ganon [/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]I will NEVER see myself running this just to Normal Summon it. Nobody is going to attack this card for any reason because it's just going to get negated anyway and nobody wants their monsters to get destroyed. This card in a stall deck would probably make this an INCREDIBLY powerful burn card. The way i would run this card, is having it stay on the field as the only monster, then once it gets destroyed, i play "Gravity Bind" and wait for my opponent to die from the burn damage.[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Young Ganondorf[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]It's a Normal Monster....nothing else I can say about it other than the fact that it seems to be the first non-Broken card i've seen so far. I should also add, I like the flavor text on the card. The ATK is no problem because I see Normal monsters that have 2000 and it's doesn't matter.[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Wolf Ganon[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Meh, it's okay. Only time he's actually any good is if he has 2 counters to summon a level 2, unlikey to get another wolf counter unless there is something lower than 17, unless you increase it's ATK in some way. He can only get the summon when he is on the field and not destroyed which is also okay since the summon would ignore the summoning conditions of the monster that would be summoned, Although i don't know why you dislike summoning conditions so much (reference to most of the cards above Special Summoning monsters ignoring those conditions)[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Link - Hero of Time[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]A good target for Rescue Rabbit I must say. Its a Normal Monster so there isn't really anything bad I can say since it can't make it's own play and needs other cards to help it out. Also like the flavor text.[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Link - Hero of The Winds[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Its effect is a trade-off to deal direct damage. It's not like i'd want him in a position that would make his ATK/DEF 0 and get run over next turn but It's also a free 2200 (unless it gets destroyed by then), if you can stall it's so much worse Messenger of Peace would be used a lot more if this card was real. Even if i didn't want a burner, I still have a Level 4 2200 Defender or Attacker (I'm always going to decrease the ATK/DEF of this card because it just makes sense).[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Link - Hero of Twilight[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]That is a great trade off....but then he summons a banished monster (ANY LEVEL ). Well, just the fact that this card, when destroyed, Special Summons as many of your opponent's banished monsters to their side of the field, it's pointless to even run this card. If it was just the first effect, excluding the special summon 1 of your banished monsters, then i would like it. kinda disappointed because when i read the first line of text, i was actually liking it...[/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Wolf Link[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Last, but not least (for now), we have "Wolf Link". I wish it could do something similar to Wolf Ganon, but then again, it can't be unless you decide to fix it (Which I hope you do). It's stats are good for a level 5, but then i get to the effect and i wish it didn't have this at all. Basically saying that the monsters on your opponent's field are pointless when i have a weaker monster to attack in your banished zone all the time. Oh, and just to add insult to injury if they try to kill it by battle, im decreasing my ATK(just a bit) to banish that monster, even if he gets to the point where i can't decrease his ATK anymore, i'll have banished 7 monsters before i get destroyed by battle, (unless I increase his ATK further). [/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Don't take this the wrong way, but I don't know if people were reading the cards at all. So far, from what I talked about, they are mostly broken or have potential only to reveal disappointment. It's just my opinion so please don't take it to seriously (if you do). I really like Legend of Zelda, so I wouldn't be commenting on this if I didn't. Unfortunately, the problem is, is that the cards are good....no, but they are TOO good, which is why they are broken. I don't like broken cards, and i try not to make them broken. All I can say is that I hope you can fix the cards when you can, because I would hate to think the other cards here that I haven't seen yet are not the same as the first nine.[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Not Impressed. I give it (as of right now) a 1/10 for effort in making the cards, +1 for the Normal Monsters I liked. So 2/10, but I hope you fix the cards soon. Really, I do... [/b][/background][/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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