Heavens Guardian Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 New card Idea Plz Rate Comment,Fix OCG. [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/9936/330701.jpg[/img]<BR><BR><BR>Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying Tributing 2 Angel monsters on your side of the field control. Once per turn, by paying 800 Life points you can switch the ATK and DEF of this monster and attack your opponent's Life Points directly. <BR> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTFauKorean Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 not really great at ocg but i dont think there is such thing as angel monsters instead it should be something like (warrior). but i like the art work and it's effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Broken Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 Not bad. A few OCG errors, but the effect is useful. Good job. ^^ 9.5/10Ibelive angel is an archtype. Am I right red? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 k thanx No but i might make a Arch Type and ITS A WARRIOR Noob Look at type its a Starlight Warrior it might be a arch type and Angel is not a arch type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTFauKorean Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 [quote name='Little Red Lady!' timestamp='1295326650' post='4942330'] k thanx No but i might make a Arch Type and ITS A WARRIOR Noob Look at type its a Starlight Warrior it might be a arch type and Angel is not a arch type. [/quote] thats why i used it as an example Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Broken Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 K well my bad. I thought maybe you WOULD make an angel archtype, but nevermind. No need for noob calling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 Ya i am making it a rch type if i get more comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Broken Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 Oh. *feels stupid* so who were you calling a noob o.O? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 some noob korean thats his name*Hits u upside the head*Anymore?Come on anymore comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 lrl pretty god its unusual effect is cool why not add it to the club ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 I might Anybody Else any OCG Errors??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Master Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 This is pretty awesome. Besides the fact that I've seen the pic before is OCG and you only have some orginality here, you get an 8/10! As for OCG: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by [s]destroying[/s] [b]Tributing[/b] 2 Angel monsters on you[s]r side of the field[/s] control. Once per turn, by paying 800 Life points you can switch [b]the[/b] ATK and DEF of this monster and attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Master Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 [quote name='Little Red Lady!' timestamp='1295411136' post='4944230'] Thanx [/quote] Wait, I aplogize. I screwed up on one thing. Change "your field" to "you control." EDIT: I fixed it in my OCG fix. Again, I'm sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Fix OCG thanx now more comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 My OCG isn't that good, but I can pick up a few places where you can improve it: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by [s]destroying[/s] Tributing 2 [b]"[/b]Angel[b]"[/b] monsters [s]on your side of the field[/s] [b]you[/b] control. Once per turn, [s]by[/s] [b]you can [/b]pay[s]ing[/s] 800 Life points [s]you can[/s] [b]to [/b]switch the ATK and DEF of this [b]card[/b] [s]monster[/s] [b]until the End Phase, during the turn you activate this card's effect, you can [/b][s]and [/s]attack your opponent[s]'s Life Points[/s] directly. Some of my corrections may not be perfect, but they are certainly large improvements. I also added the End Phase clause as I assumed the ATK & DEF would reverse afterward? Either way thats optional. Other than the overwhelming amount of corrections needed, I must say, this is a very creative and fun card maple/LRL, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Yep i am making a Arch type its switching battle position arch type some attack like this other switch oppenonts monster and do difernce of deffence and battle damage etc. but they base off of switch psitions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Nice, well, happy cardmaking! Also, 995 posts (well much more if we include non-counted ones) nearly 5 starred in less than 5 weeks? You must be living on these forums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Nope not recently at least I did the first 2 weeks HAHAHAHAH but nowi login in like once a day for 5-15 min Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 I think it's UPed for have the ATK and DEF bit low and paying 800 to switch and attack, since tt will have its DEF as ATK you only dealing 500 damage extra more than the LP you paid, so either remove paying or increase the stats a tab bit like 2500 ATK and 1500 DEF then. Even if it does special summon the requirement Isn't generic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 [color="#A0522D"][center][i][b][u]Original Effect[/u]:[/b] his card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying Tributing 2 Angel monsters on your side of the field control. Once per turn, by paying 800 Life points you can switch the ATK and DEF of this monster and attack your opponent's Life Points directly. [/i] [b][u]OCG Fix[/u]:[/b] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or [b]s[/b]et. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 'Angel' monsters on your side of the field. Once per turn, by paying 800 Life points you can switch the ATK and DEF of this monster and attack your opponent's Life Points directly. [b][u]My Personal Revision of your effect[/u]:[/b] his card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 'Angel' monsters on your side of the field. Once per turn, by paying 500 Life points you can swap the ATK and DEF of this card, until the end phase of the turn this effect is activated this card can attack your opponents Life Points directly. [b][u]Review[/u]:[/b] The picture is mediocre, the character is good but the background is extremely bland :/. The effect is creative in a few minor ways and the OCG is flawed but almost accurate =D. As Thantos stated it is kind of Up'd but IMO its your decision on hoe you fix that or if you do. [b][u]The Rating[/u]:[/b] 8/10 [/color][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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