Kuroda Kaito Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 [center]Well this is my newest Set it is about the Magic warrior of Ceferon base on Magic Knight Rayearth which my sister read, i suddenly love the idea when she tell me the story (This is a true story). This is about the fight between good and evil, light and dark, friend and enemy in the land of wonder - Ceferon - the world where mind-power is the strongest .The Magic Warriors will have their own pet as the Mythical Beast which will help them in battle and the Robot which is the combination between the Magic warrior with their beast. The Evil-side also be the same but with Darkness Power. But not at all after destroy the Evil they have to fight again to protect their home land from the other countries. And this will be my best Set ever so hope for your support [font="Franklin Gothic Medium"][size="4"]LOGO :[/size][/font] [img]http://i858.photobucket.com/albums/ab148/VanitusSpriter/Kai_Logo2.png?t=1296899738[/img] [spoiler=Booster Pack by me ^^][img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/803/boosterk.png[/img][/spoiler] [img]http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/1650/20226380.png[/img] Booster Box by the great E-Hero Kyle [font="Franklin Gothic Medium"][size="3"]Newest Addition[/size][/font] [img]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa394/KurodaKaito/imera.png[/img] [img]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa394/KurodaKaito/poison-parasite.png[/img] [img]http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/1883/coromasaber.png[/img] [spoiler=The Warriors] [spoiler=Hikari, the angel of Heaven] [img]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa394/KurodaKaito/hikari.png[/img] Lore: When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, you can remove from play 2 Warrior-Type Monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Mythical Beast - Saber Dragon" from your Deck or hand. When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, draw 1 card. At the end of your Battle Phase, switch this card to Defense Position.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Kaoru, the ninja of Fire] [img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/9039/kaoru.png[/img] Lore: When this card is Summon, you can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Mythical Beast - Pyro Dragon" from your Deck or hand to your field. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Kaito, the Assasin of Earth] [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/2586/kaito.png[/img] Lore: When this card is Summon, you can discard 3 cards from your Deck to your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Mythical Beast - Rage Kaiser" from your Deck to your field. When "Mythical Beast - Rage Kaiser" is successfully Special Summoned, this card's ATK will be increase by 500 points until the end of that turn.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Dark Warrior - Emira] [img]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa394/KurodaKaito/imera.png[/img] Lore : When this card is Summoned, you can let this card lose 500 ATK to destroy 1 Monster whose has the attribute beside DARK. After that, Special Summon 1 "Dark Beast - Poison Parasite" from your Deck or hand to your field.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Beasts] [spoiler=Mythical beast - Saber Dragon] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/5831/saberdragon.png[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by "Hikari, the angel of heaven" 's effect. When this card is successfully Special Summon, destroy 1 of your opponent's Monster which has the ATK lower than this card's. When this card destroy your opponent's Monster when there is 1 "Hikari, the angel of Heaven" on the field, increase this card's ATK by 500 in the Damage Step.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Mythical Beast - Pyro Dragon] [img]http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/8800/pyrodragon.png[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by "Kaoru, the Ninja of Fire". When this card destroy your opponent's Monster, inflict 800 points of Damage to your opponent's Life Point.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Mythical beast - Rage kaiser] [img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6114/ragekaiser.png[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Special Summon by "Kaito, the Assasin of the Earth" effect. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, pay 800 Life Points to increase this card's ATK and DEF by 800 points. When this card destroy your opponent's Monster, select 2 Monsters on your opponent's field, the 2 selected Monsters will be destroy after 3 turns.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Dark Beast - Poison parasite] [img]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa394/KurodaKaito/poison-parasite.png[/img] Lore : This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by "Dark Warrior - Emira" effect. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, you can pay 500 Life Points to increase this card's ATK by 800 and decrease one of your opponent's Monster ATK by 800. When this card is destroyed, you lose 800 Life Points.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Robots] [spoiler=Stargazer] [img]http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1375/stargazer.png[/img] Lore: "Hikari, the angel of Heaven" - "Mythical Beast - Saber Dragon" This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Fusion Summon. Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 500 points for each LIGHT Monster on both players' field. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Dranzer, the Inferno Robot] [img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/2212/dranzer.png[/img] Lore: "Kaoru, the ninja of Fire" - "Mythical Beast - Pyro Dragon" This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set except by Fusion Summon. Once per turn, you can pay 800 Life Points to draw 3 cards from your Deck and discard 2 cards from your hand to your Graveyard, place 2 Inferno-Counters on this card. When this card destroy your opponent's Monster, remove 1 Inferno-Counter to draw 2 cards from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Blazing Kaiser] [img]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/5492/blazinekaiser.png[/img] Lore: "Kaito, the Assasin of the Earth" - "Mythical Beast - Rage Kaiser" This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set except by Fusion Summon. For each FIRE Monster on your field, place 1 Inferno-Counter on 1 of your opponent's Monster (max.1). When this card destroy your opponent's Monster, by removing 1 Inferno-Counter on 1 of your opponent's Monster, that Monster will battle with 1 other Monster which also have the Inferno-Counter on it by this card's effect.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Coromo Saber of Darkness] [img]http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/1883/coromasaber.png[/img] Lore : "Dark Warrior - Emira" - "Dark Beast - Poison parasite" This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Fusion Summon. When this card is successfully Fusion Summon, you can let this card lose 1000 ATK to decrease all of your opponent's Monsters ATK by 1500. When this card destroy your opponent's Monster which has been decrease its ATK by this card's effect, this card can attack twice again. When this card is destroyed, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon back "Dark Warrior - Emira" and "Dark Beast - Poison Parasite" from your Graveyard to your field.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spell / Trap] [spoiler=Gigantic hand of Heaven] [img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/207/gigantichand.png[/img] Lore: This card can only be activate when there is 1 "Hikari, the angel of Heaven" on your field. Destroy 2 Monsters whose ATK is lower than "Hikari, the angel of heaven".[/spoiler] [spoiler=Holy Light magic Seal] [img]http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/3592/holyseal.png[/img] Lore: This card can only be activate when there is 1 "Hikari, the angel of Heaven" on your field. When "Hikari" become at attack target of your opponent's Monster, pay 800 Life Points to negate that attack.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Inferno Blade] [img]http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/7317/infernoblade.png[/img] Lore: This card can only be equip to "Kaoru, the ninja of fire". When this card is successfully equipped to "Kaoru the ninja of Fire", increase "Kaoru" ATK by 500. Once per turn, you can return this card back to the top of your Deck to Special Summon 1 FIRE Monster whose ATK is 1500 or lower from your Deck to your field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Corona Blaster] [img]http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/2383/corona.png[/img] Lore: When this card is activate, increase "Kaoru"s ATK by 800 points and "kaoru" can attack twice that turn. When "Kaoru" destroy your opponent's Monster while this card is activate, destroy 1 of your opponent's Monster whose ATK is lower than your Life Points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Demon Chain Sealing] [img]http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4918/demonchain.png[/img] Lore: This card can only be activate when "Kaito, the assasin of the Earth" become an attack target of your opponent's Monster. That Monster cannot attack for 4 turns. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Mighty Typhoon of Doom] [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/328/typhoon.png[/img] Lore: This card can only be activate when there is 1 "Kaito, the assasin of the Earth" on your field. Destroy 2 Spell or Trap Cards on the field by paying 800 Life Points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Invisible Light Shield] [img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/3841/lightshield.png[/img] Lore: This card can only be activate when "Kaito, the assasin of the Earth" become an attack target of your opponent's Monster, negate that attack and "Kaito, the assaasin of the Earth" lose 800 ATK until the end of your next turn.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Ceferon, the world of Wonder] [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/6176/ceferon.png[/img] Lore: When this card is activate, "Kaito, the assasin of the Earth", Hikari, the angel of Heaven" and "Kaoru, the Ninja of Fire" ATK increase by 500 points in Damage Phase. All other Monster except they will lose 800 ATK and DEF.[/spoiler][/spoiler] Once again, hope for your support . Thank you [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted January 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Come on people, i need a comment to improve my OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted January 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 New images added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â™ >:Stick-Man:<â™ Posted January 23, 2011 Report Share Posted January 23, 2011 1st card: When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, you can remove from play 2 Warrior-Type Monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Mythical Beast - Saber Dragon" from your Deck or hand. When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, draw 1 card. At the end of your Battle Phase, switch this card to Defense Position. 2nd card: When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, you can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Mythical Beast - Pyro Dragon" from your Deck or hand. 3rd card: This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by "Hikari, the Angel of Heaven's" effect. When this card is Special Summoned successfully, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than this card's ATK. When this card attacks a monster your opponent controls and you control 1 "Hikari, the Angel of Heaven", increase this card's ATK by 500 during the Damage Step only. As you can see over the OCG corrections I have made, you have many OCG errors. Great set idea, I simply love it as well as the warrior-pet-robot thing you got going on. And your template of the cards, simply amazing. Although you must work better on your OCG, that's the only mistake I see within this epic set. Get better at that and you got your self one heck of a set. Never heard of the book or any of this, but like before; I like it. Right now you get a 7' for many OCG errors, but that score will improve as you improve in your card making skills. Excellent job though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted January 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2011 thanks for the advices, i'll fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted January 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2011 Adding new cards ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted January 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted January 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 Bring Up My Post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyrannylol Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 love the cards, only thing i think is missing you don't have the "type" such as Beast-Warrior ect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted February 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 New card added ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted February 3, 2011 Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 These cards look amazing. They're really creative and I applaud you for the effort. However, your OCG and at times your spelling needs improvement. You still need to follow Master's advice for fixes on your cards. Until there is evidence that you will actually use corrections that people are suggesting I don't really see the point in suggesting further corrections. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 New cards added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reborn11 Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 Err,i don't like card borders like this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 BUMPAGE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted February 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dokktorawesome Posted February 7, 2011 Report Share Posted February 7, 2011 no offense template sucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reborn11 Posted February 7, 2011 Report Share Posted February 7, 2011 It's nice on how you made the cards look cool but still it doesn't look like YU-GI-OH!cards,and can you stop bumping? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted February 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2011 [quote name='yugiohbakuganpokemon' timestamp='1297081657' post='4994966'] no offense template sucks [/quote] Well if you say that this template is sucks then try to create one. I put a lot of effort to make it you know, if you dont like it at least say something that is less harsh please. [quote name='reborn11' timestamp='1297085806' post='4995017'] It's nice on how you made the cards look cool but still it doesn't look like YU-GI-OH!cards,and can you stop bumping? [/quote] Why should i stop bumping ??? Bump is a style to make your thread to the top post so people can watch it more easier. Well this is my own SET so i can do everything i want to make it look good, this is my own template so i use it to make this set!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reborn11 Posted February 7, 2011 Report Share Posted February 7, 2011 Dude,i am just saying,what i don't like and what i like,i didn't tell you to chance it. When you bump you should at least contain some information,like in BEN 10 CARDS,go see how you should bump if you do. Well,you don't have to cuz i am not even sure if i am right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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