mihairoextreme Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/9189/334784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/7314/334784b.jpg[/img] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/5646/334784y.jpg[/img] [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9544/334784t.jpg[/img] [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/7027/334784r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/9189/334784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/3699/334784h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/8086/334784u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/2815/334784j.jpg[/img] i hope you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 wayyyyy too many ocg errors to even begin to help... heres a hint: distroy - Destroy defence - DEF or Defense attack - ATK of Attack Here is a fix for Splashing Bird When you opponent Normal Summons a Monster, on their side of the field, send that Monster to the Graveyard. Im not perfect at OCG either though... overall: 0/10 reasons.... no flow no ocg effects are up'd two too many vanillas Cards are overpowerd... 1000 ATK for a level 2?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jcmoney Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 [quote name='dtwrules' timestamp='1295550155' post='4946990'] wayyyyy too many ocg errors to even begin to help... heres a hint: distroy - Destroy defence - DEF or Defense attack - ATK of Attack Here is a fix for Splashing Bird When you opponent Normal Summons a Monster, on their side of the field, send that Monster to the Graveyard. Im not perfect at OCG either though... overall: 0/10 reasons.... no flow no ocg effects are up'd two too many vanillas Cards are overpowerd... 1000 ATK for a level 2?? [/quote] your complaining about 1000 ATK? The real problem with the cards overall is OCG. Basically grammar sucks. Also destroy and creature are not two things you use for a hand. Balanced would say FLIP: Your opponent randomly chooses 1 card in their hand and discards it. 1000 ATK for a level 2 isn't really all OP... specially considering that it has no DEF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 I don't want to insult you. And maybe what i'm saying now is harsh. But it's to help you. Your OCG is worthless. And your images are too. Your cards are overpowered. Not original. Because you're new, 5/10. Try to find images [url="http://s825.photobucket.com/home/JazinKay"]here[/url] (if link is not working, copy paste this in your address bar: [url="http://s825.photobucket.com/home/JazinKay"]http://s825.photobucket.com/home/JazinKay[/url]) Now your OCG correction. Little Dragon: FLIP: Destroy 2 monsters your opponent controls. Little White Dragon: All Dragon-Type monsters you control gain 800 ATK. Dragon Guard: For each monster in your Graveyard, this card gains 200 ATK and DEF. Bahamut Dragon: "Little Dragon" + "Dragon Guard" Destroy 2 monsters your opponent controls. Fast Fusion: Send Fusion Material Monsters that are listed on a Dragon-Type Fusion Monster Card from the Field to the Graveyard, and Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck. Sky Field: All Dragon-Type monsters on the Field gain 1000 ATK. Each time your opponent summons (a) monster(s) you gain 500 Lifepoints. Splashing Bird: Activate only when your opponent Summons a monster. Destroy that monster. That should be correct. I will not correct the grammar of your Normal Monster Cards. Better next time, I hope I helped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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