Testing, Testing 1,2,3!!

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[center]This wonder, should I keep this effect or should I remove them completely
Images request credit goes to Buddha
[spoiler='Rapture'][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/2301/293373o.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']All "Phantom Demon" monsters gain 400 ATK and DEF for every other "Phantom Demon" on your side of the field. If a "Phantom Demon" monster you control is destroyed by a LIGHT monster through battle or by the effect of a LIGHT Effect Monster, all Damage to your Life Points is halve. Once per turn, you can tribute this card with 1 Tuner Monster, 1 Ritual Monster and all "Phantom Demon" monster you control to Special Summon 1 "Azrael,The First Of The Fallen Phantom Demon" from your Extra Deck.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Azrael,The First Of The Fallen Phantom Demon'][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/9307/293373k.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']This card can only be summoned by the effect of "Rapture". This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards Tributed in this cards summoning x 1000. This card is unaffected by Spell card. During the End Phase of a turn this card destroyed a monster in battle, you can Tribute this card to inflict Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of Zombie-Type "Phantom Demon" monster in your Graveyard x 500.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/center]


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[Ruby_Mansi]

Sweet

[Gabriel Maeso]

Cool, nice pics, good cards, exelent ideias, and for some reason Azrael reminds me of Death from Castlevania Portrait of Ruin.

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@Kelly~Kotori~Alexis, thanks
@Gabriel Maeso, thanks man, and I haven't played castlevania in a long time so I forgot which one is he.
so ANYWAY, [b][size="7"]BUMP[/size][/b]

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[center][b][size="7"]BUMP!!![/size][/b][/center]

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[Ginko]

All "Phantom Demon" monsters gain 400 ATK and DEF for every other "Phantom Demon" on your side of the field. If a "Phantom Demon" monster you control is destroyed by a LIGHT monster [b]IN[/b] battle or by the effect of a LIGHT Effect Monster, all Damage to your Life Points is halve[b]D[/b]. Once per turn, you can tribute this card [b]ALONG[/b] with 1 Tuner Monster, 1 Ritual Monster and all "Phantom Demon" monster[b]S[/b] you control to Special Summon 1 "Azrael,The First Of The Fallen Phantom Demon" from your Extra Deck.

i just think it flows better if said like this (very few errors, very nice.)

This card can only be summoned by [b]THE FIELD SPELL CARD "RAPTURE"'S EFFECT. [/b]This card[b]'[/b]s ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards Tributed in this card[b]'[/b]s summoning x 1000. This [b]MONSTER[/b] is unaffected by [b]YOUR OPPONENT'S (unless you meant every spell card on either player's field, then its ok)[/b] Spell card[b]S[/b]. During the End Phase of a turn [b]THAT[/b] this [b]MONSTER[/b] destroyed [b]YOUR OPPONENT'S[/b] monster [b]BY[/b] battle, you can Tribute this card to inflict Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of Zombie-Type "Phantom Demon" monster in your Graveyard x 500.

you mainly have small punctuation and tense errors
note that these corrections are only how i would write out the cards and not what you should do

very nice cards, can't wait to see more

[Skythief]

OCG has already been corrected
Good idea, good effects and pics, but this archtype must be kinda ritual-oriented to make it possible, actually. The only other ritual monster that is more or less frequently played is Demise, and with Demise your field spell won't stay on the field.
9/10