Token Tuning

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

[center][img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/9633/185013j.jpg[/img][/center][center]When this card is normal summoned, pay Life Points in multiples of 400 (max. 4800) to special summon a "Darkness Token"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) The Token's level is increased by 1 for each 400 Life Points you paid to Special Summon it.[/center][center]
[/center][center](Token Coming Soon)[/center][center][img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/1207/185013h.jpg[/img][/center][center][center]1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters[/center][center]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's Extra Deck during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Synchro Summoned or flipped face-up. While this monster remains face-up on the field all monsters on you opponents side of the field have 0 ATK. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, return one card from you graveyard to your hand.[/center][/center][center](Support Spells/Traps Coming Soon)[/center]

[War Chess]

The OCG and the structure of the effect are messed up. Try like this :
Once per turn[s], during your main phase,[/s] you can [b]pay Life Points in multiples of 100 (max. 1200)[/b] to Special Summon a "Darkness Token"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level ? /ATK 0/DEF 0) The Token's level is increased by 1 for each 100 Life Points you paid to Special Summon it.

But this card is broken IN MY OPINION.
It makes Synchro Summon way easy as the Life Points cost is not too much and it can be done each turn.'
I didn't like it, sorry.

6.5/10

NOTE -- THIS IS MY OPINION, and I'm not good in TCG. So don't consider my comment. CONSIDER the OCG and effect structure.

The OCG and the structure of the effect are messed up. Try like this :
Once per turn[s], during your main phase,[/s] you can [b]pay Life Points in multiples of 100 (max. 1200)[/b] to Special Summon a "Darkness Token"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level ? /ATK 0/DEF 0) The Token's level is increased by 1 for each 100 Life Points you paid to Special Summon it.

But this card is broken IN MY OPINION.
It makes Synchro Summon way easy as the Life Points cost is not too much and it can be done each turn.'
I didn't like it, sorry.

6.5/10

NOTE -- THIS IS MY OPINION, and I'm not good in TCG. So don't consider my comment. CONSIDER the OCG and effect structure.

The OCG and the structure of the effect are messed up. Try like this :
Once per turn[s], during your main phase,[/s] you can [b]pay Life Points in multiples of 100 (max. 1200)[/b] to Special Summon a "Darkness Token"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level ? /ATK 0/DEF 0) The Token's level is increased by 1 for each 100 Life Points you paid to Special Summon it.

But this card is broken IN MY OPINION.
It makes Synchro Summon way easy as the Life Points cost is not too much and it can be done each turn.'
I didn't like it, sorry.

6.5/10

NOTE -- THIS IS MY OPINION, and I'm not good in TCG. So don't consider my comment. CONSIDER the OCG and effect structure.

The OCG and the structure of the effect are messed up. Try like this :
Once per turn[s], during your main phase,[/s] you can [b]pay Life Points in multiples of 100 (max. 1200)[/b] to Special Summon a "Darkness Token"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level ? /ATK 0/DEF 0) The Token's level is increased by 1 for each 100 Life Points you paid to Special Summon it.

But this card is broken IN MY OPINION.
It makes Synchro Summon way easy as the Life Points cost is not too much and it can be done each turn.'
I didn't like it, sorry.

6.5/10

NOTE -- THIS IS MY OPINION, and I'm not good in TCG. So don't consider my comment. CONSIDER the OCG and effect structure.

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

you do have a point (why was your post, posted so many times?) if i were to increase the life points needed would it seem apropriate?

Card Updated

[CDDRodrigo]

OCG fix time!

[b]Tune Darkness[/b]
When this card is Normal Summoned, you can pay Life Points in multiples of 400 (max. 4400) to Special Summon 1 "Darknes Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). The token's Level is increased by 1 for each 400 Life Points you paid.

[b]Banshee Desdemona[/b]
This card can only be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon. This card returns to the Extra Deck at the end of the turn it was Synchro Summoned or flipped face-up. The ATK of all face-up monsters your opponent controls become 0. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand.

Okay, so you've done two awesomely powerful cards, that are potentially staples. The fist one is a free Synchro of whatever you want. The second can get you a free card from the grave. Original, creative, but overpowered. I'll give you a 6/10