Xcess Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/2368/345641.jpg[/img] Discard 2 cards and pay half your Life Points. Special Summon up to 2 removed from play monsters. During the End Phase, destroy all monsters that were Special Summoned by this effect. Send Fusion Material Monsters that are listed on a Fusion Monster Card from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard, and Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck. Rate and comment pls, and be sure to leave some tips for my next card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Doransk Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Wow... you say this is your first card?!? If so, a massive well done to you! The OCG is almost spotless (Life Points, with caps/ put 'During the End Phase, destroy all cards Special Summoned by this effect' at the end of the card effect), which is a rare thing in a newbie- i was crap at it when i was one-star, and still make big errors today. The effect is conditional but brilliant in the right deck (d.d, infernity etc, etc), so well done for that. however, half your Life Points for one fusion is pretty extreme, so maybe make it 2000 LP instead, or 3000. But, despite these minor failings, an incredible first attempt. +1 Rep for you, my friend! Total Score= 9/10 (incredibly good for a one-star) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 tnx for the comment Note: my (half life points effect is indeed pretty extreme especialy if you activate it with full life points, but the point is activating the card in any point of the duel even if you have 100 points ) BTW: BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 For your first card, it's pretty good. 8,5/10 because you're new (if not 8/10). Now my OCG correction: [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]Discard 2 cards and pay half your Life Points. Special Summon up to 2 removed from play monsters. During the End Phase, destroy all monsters that were Special Summoned by this effect. Send Fusion Material Monsters that are listed on a Fusion Monster Card from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard, and Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck.[/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif] [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]That should be correct.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 EDITED Tnx for the tip,I'll be sure to keep it more short and understandable next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Half life points is actually a pretty good cost, you get 2 monsters for a turn, then you get a fusion monster. I'm glad you didn't add the "This is treated as a fusion summon". That would have gotten plenty of E-Hero abuse. For a first-timer, not bad at all. Usually even the new people who have decent OCG make terrible cards, like my first cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 TY Note: Actually, the only diffrence between this card and the original Polymerization is the price and the opportunity to Special Summon removed from play monsters for the fusion ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 [quote name='Powerbond' timestamp='1295628585' post='4948789'] TY Note: Actually, the only diffrence between this card and the original Polymerization is the price and the opportunity to Special Summon removed from play monsters for the fusion ^^ [/quote] It still gets E-Hero abuse since people use Miracle Fusion to remove monsters from play, then you use this to bring 2 monsters back and fuse them together again, then you get another fusion monster on top of that one. Also, I just noticed this but it would probably be better to do the fusion effect of your card during the End Phase as well, otherwise you get 3 monsters right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 If i add (the Special Summoned monsters cant atack) or (this card can only be activard during your End Phase) ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 That works too, since I can't think of anybody who would still abuse it except E-Heroes, and they can't use this anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 [quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1295628807' post='4948792'] It still gets E-Hero abuse since people use Miracle Fusion to remove monsters from play, then you use this to bring 2 monsters back and fuse them together again, then you get another fusion monster on top of that one. Also, I just noticed this but it would probably be better to do the fusion effect of your card during the End Phase as well, otherwise you get 3 monsters right away. [/quote] It actually has a common efect to: [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/index.php?title=Return_from_the_Different_Dimension&image=Returnfrom_theDifferentDimensionDPKB-EN-SR-1E-jpg][img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100723104233/yugioh/images/thumb/0/08/Returnfrom_theDifferentDimensionDPKB-EN-SR-1E.jpg/238px-Returnfrom_theDifferentDimensionDPKB-EN-SR-1E.jpg[/img][/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Well I want to thank you all for helping me put the finishing touches to my first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.