SunshineSoldier Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Here I go! [spoiler='LV. 3'][img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/4403/342593q.jpg[/img] Lore: If there is another "Demon Ballad" monster on the field, This card cannot be destroyed by Battle. If this card is destroyed, inflict 700 points of damage to your opponent's lifepoints. Once per turn, you may select one "Demon Ballad" monster in your graveyard and remove it from play to inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent's lifepoints. As long as this card remains face-up on the field all "Demon Ballad" monsters you control gain 300 Defence points.During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 5" from your hand or Deck. [/spoiler] [spoiler='LV. 5'][img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/8253/342593.jpg[/img] Lore: If there is another "Demon Ballad" monster on the field, This card cannot be destroyed by Battle. If this card is destroyed, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's lifepoints. Once per turn, you may search your deck for a "Demon Ballad" monster and send it to your graveyard for this card to gain 600 ATK points until the end phase. If this card destroys a monster by battle, Inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. As long as this card remains face-up on the field all "Demon Ballad" monsters you control gain 500 Defence points. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 7" from your hand or Deck. [/spoiler] [spoiler='LV. 7'][img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/6526/342593z.jpg[/img] If there is another "Demon Ballad" monster on the field, This card cannot be destroyed by Battle. If this card is destroyed, inflict 1500 points of damage to your opponent's lifepoints. Once per turn, you may search your deck for a "Demon Ballad" monster and remove it from play for this card to gain 800 ATK points until the end phase. If this card destroys a monster by battle, Inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the destroyed monster's level. x200 As long as this card remains face-up on the field all "Demon Ballad" monsters you control gain 800 Defence points. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schrödinger Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Quick OCG fixes If you control another "Rival Demon Ballad" monster other than "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 3", this card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed, inflict 700 damage to your opponent. Once per turn, you can select 1 "Demon Ballad" monster in your Graveyard and remove it from play to inflict 800 damage to your opponent. As long as this card remains face-up on the field all "Rival Demon Ballad" monsters you control gain 300 DEF.During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 5" from your Hand or Deck. If you control another "Rival Demon Ballad" monster other than "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 5", this card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Once per turn, you can select 1 "Rival Demon Ballad" monster from your Deck and send it to your Graveyard to have this card to gain 600 ATK until the End Phase. If this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 300 damage to your opponent. As long as this card remains face-up on the field all "Rival Demon Ballad" monsters you control gain 500 DEF. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 7" from your Hand or Deck. If you control another "Rival Demon Ballad" monster other than "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 7", this card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed, inflict 1500 damage to your opponent. Once per turn, you can select 1 "Rival Demon Ballad" monster from your Deck and remove it from play to have card to gain 800 ATK until the End Phase. If this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's level x200 As long as this card remains face-up on the field all "Rival Demon Ballad" monsters you control gain 800 DEF. Interesting concept, maybe a little wordy with unnecessary effects. I don't like to give ratings but these cards are very interesting, and I really like the art. Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunshineSoldier Posted January 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Thankyou! have a + rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Heavens Guardian Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Random Effects Good OCG minor Fixes(Someone ese did it) Great Idea Great Pics Great Idea 8.5/10 Its Just the random effects they really dont work together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunshineSoldier Posted January 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 [quote name='Gunnybear' timestamp='1295677121' post='4950315'] Quick OCG fixes If you control another "Rival Demon Ballad" monster other than "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 3", this card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed, inflict 700 damage to your opponent. Once per turn, you can select 1 "Demon Ballad" monster in your Graveyard and remove it from play to inflict 800 damage to your opponent. As long as this card remains face-up on the field all "Rival Demon Ballad" monsters you control gain 300 DEF.During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 5" from your Hand or Deck. If you control another "Rival Demon Ballad" monster other than "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 5", this card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Once per turn, you can select 1 "Rival Demon Ballad" monster from your Deck and send it to your Graveyard to have this card to gain 600 ATK until the End Phase. If this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 300 damage to your opponent. As long as this card remains face-up on the field all "Rival Demon Ballad" monsters you control gain 500 DEF. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 7" from your Hand or Deck. If you control another "Rival Demon Ballad" monster other than "Rival Demon Balladier LV. 7", this card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed, inflict 1500 damage to your opponent. Once per turn, you can select 1 "Rival Demon Ballad" monster from your Deck and remove it from play to have card to gain 800 ATK until the End Phase. If this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's level x200 As long as this card remains face-up on the field all "Rival Demon Ballad" monsters you control gain 800 DEF. Interesting concept, maybe a little wordy with unnecessary effects. I don't like to give ratings but these cards are very interesting, and I really like the art. Keep it up [/quote] [quote name='Little Red Lady!' timestamp='1295677654' post='4950333'] Random Effects Good OCG minor Fixes(Someone ese did it) Great Idea Great Pics Great Idea 8.5/10 Its Just the random effects they really dont work together [/quote] They are actually part of an Archetype I'm working on. That's probably why it doesn't seem to fit in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schrödinger Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 I'm guessing spell and traps that activate when the opponent takes damage or your monsters gain stats? Kinda like a Marie + Fire Princess slow burn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cjohn Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 overall their great cards, but they have long effects, especially for a level 3. anyway, great job, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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