mihairoextreme Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/699/334784v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/9189/334784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/9189/334784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/3699/334784h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/2041/334784a.jpg[/img] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/5646/334784y.jpg[/img] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/9376/334784d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/9189/334784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/2815/334784j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/1371/334784q.jpg[/img] I'M NOT A GOOD CARD MAKER BUT I HOPE YOU LIKE IT . [/quote] PLS COMENT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Doransk Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 I'm sorry to have to do this but... the OCG is godawfully bad, the theme is dull, the pictures are in some places ill-fitting and you seem to have lost your 'turn-off-caps-lock' button for your text in the post itself. I appreciate that you're new, but i've seen some stunning cards from one-stars as well as a host of good ones; these don't fit into either category. All i can say is brush up on your technique and OCG and try and try again. Your first cards will nearly always be flamed utterly. Don't let this put you off. Keep going and get better- i know everyone on this program has the potential to be great, including you. Keep trying hard. Score= 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Take it easy he's new, the cards cannot be flawless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Doransk Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Sorry, but Powerbond, you're new too but your cards are phenomenal- just look at my comment on your tuner card for example. I'm just giving constructive criticism to improve his cards. And to you, mike (can i call you mike?), just remember everyone has cards everyone else dislikes- i am no exception, as are no other people that use this program. You WILL in the future make some good cards, i know you will. Just do as i and others commenting on your stuff advise; brush up on OCG, think freely and originally, balance your cards and then you will be successful. It takes time- don't get put out by harsher comments, just learn from them and carry on. I know this sounds very patronising, this whole mini-speech, but i mean all of it. I look foward to seeing new cards by you in the future! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLegenderyKingVildeChaya Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 The OCG (Official Card Grammar) is BAD and I don't even care about OCG just keep trying and you'll be as good as can be. really its not hard(in fact its easy).......heres a few tips. TIPS: 1 Look at real cards and you'll see things like: its Field not battle zone 2 Look at the forum and see people's cards to get an idea of card making 3 Look at comments and see what OTHER did wrong so YOU don't 4 The showcase section has some great pics like Father Wolf and Wanderly's pics If this helped + rep would be greatly appreciated (its the green "+" on the bottom right corner of the comment) Its not you've been on here for a couple years and still don't make cards well your new just keep on trying Looking forward to seeing more of your cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JC Drakengard Posted January 26, 2011 Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 Here, i got bored and fixd the OCG. Cause i think this could be a cool Archtype if worked now. Demon Penguin {may i suggest the name Penguin Fiend} (Beast/WATER/3 stars/ ATK 200/ DEF 1200) Whenu can this monster is summoned, you can Special Summon a monster with "Penguin" in its name from your hand. Killer Penguin (Beast/WATER/4 stars/ ATK 1000/ DEF 900) For each monster on the field, this card gains 200 ATK points. Ninja Penguin (Beast/WATER/5 stars/ ATK 2000/ DEF 1800) The Ninja Penguin's Sister (Beast/WATER/4 stars/ ATK 2000/ DEF 1800) Angel Penguins (Beast/WATER/4 stars/ ATK 700/ DEF 2000) When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard with "Penguin" in its name. Penguin King (Beast/Fusion/WATER/7 stars/ ATK 2800/ DEF 2000) Killer Penguin + Ninja Penguin Ice Soul (Fairy/WATER/6 stars/ ATK 2300/ DEF 1700) Ice Dog (Beast/WATER/3 stars/ ATK 0/ DEF 2000) Ice Fusion {may i suggest 'Artic Fusion'} Send Fusion Material Monsters that are listed on a Fusion Monster Card from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard, and Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck. Ice World {May i suggest North pole} As long as this card remain on the field, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap Cards. All monster(s) with "penguin" in its name gain 1000 ATK points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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