pyrowiz23 Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 gimme thoughts/opinions pleaze! [img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/5885/293189.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 1000 points direct dmg for a level 4 sacrifice ??? OCG correction: You can Tribute this card to Special Summon 2 ''Meta Death'' Tokens (Machine-Type/Dark/ATK 500/DEF 700) and consider deleting the last sentance + It would look beter if you got rid of the black stripes in the pic But that is just my opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youri012 Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 I agree with Powerbond, and i say it too, delete the last sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pyrowiz23 Posted January 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 thanx for the feedback corrections have been made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 You need to add a level for the tokens. DARK in capitals. Not a bad card, but not very original either 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Whoops It seems i've made a mistake in the token Info sorry it should be like this (Machine-type/DARK/LEVEL 1/ATK 500/DEF 700/) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Look at all other cards that summon tokens, they have levels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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