Merci Posted January 24, 2011 Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 [center][img]http://i56.tinypic.com/34gkdba.jpg[/img] [i]"You are nothing without darkness. You have no power." Zarosis gripped onto his Darkside keyblade and looked back at the man. "No! You're wrong! My power. . . [b]My own existence is my power!"[/b][/i][/center] Allow me to explain. I made a fanfic earlier, [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/216943-kingdom-hearts-zarosis-epilogue-addedfinished/page__p__4530309__fromsearch__1#entry4530309]click here to see[/url], and finished it. But there was only one who bothered to read it. I think that it was because of the quality. So I am going to make a Final Mix version! [spoiler=What to Expect] 1. [b][i]Clearer and higher-quality chapters in a sensible order![/i][/b] 2. [b][i]Extra paragraphs added![/b][/i] 3. [b][i]A new middle chapter![/b][/i] 4. [b][i]And a [u]bonus secret chapter![/u][/i][/b] [/spoiler] Note: Its sequel, Lies Unto Nothingnes, is still being worked on and hasn't been abandoned. [spoiler=Prologue] [center] [i]Who am I?[/i] A being walked through pitch black darkness. It was impossible to see anything whatsoever. As he walked, the being was confused as his mind was filled with thousands and thousands of questions. It gave him a headache. [i]What am I?[/i] Thousands of small pitch-black creatures with yellow glowing eyes suddenly appeared around him. They stared at him but the being didn’t care about them, though they kept giving way for the confused being to walk in any direction he chose. They simply stared and moved about now and then and nothing more. [i]Where is this?[/i] A strange-shaped sword then appeared in his hand. It was red and black, somewhat smoothly skeletal, and its blade ended in the shape of a heart. He stared at the sword for a while in confusion. [i]Sometimes questions can only be answered by force![/i] He then gripped onto the sword tightly, before turning back towards the black creatures around him. He gripped his sword even tighter and charged. He didn’t know why but he just did. The black creatures, in response, lunged at him. He swung his sword at a creature and it disappeared in an orb of darkness, and then did the same with the others. He began destroying every one of them which was in range of his reckless attacks. After a good few minutes of swinging and destroying, only one was left. He lifted up his sword above his head and was about to destroy it when at the last second, an image appeared in his head. It was the image of a boy, teenager maybe, wearing a baggy black sports-like outfit with spiky brown hair. He wondered who the person was for a moment. The image faded and then a voice echoed in his head. [i]You are nothing but a mere shadow. You are Z![/i] The voice declared. He was confused at first but then shook it off as nothing and prepared once again to strike down the last black creature, which was strangely simply standing there, watching him, as if it were wondering whether he would strike or not. [i]Sora. . .[/i] The same word appeared in his head. Slowly, the words ‘Z is’ began to appear in flaming letters above the final black creature, and below it then appeared the word ’Sora’. The three words then slowly floated towards each other before rearranging themselves until they formed the word ’Zarosis’. [i]. . . is not you. . .[/i] The being, taking Zarosis as his chosen name since he had no other lead, quickly snapped out of it, and then suddenly found himself in a huge dark room. It had walls which looked as if they were made of a dark metal, and there was an old red carpet that covered the way from the exit which would have looked magnificent a century ago. In front of him was a huge stone stabbed with the same sword he used to destroy the shadow creatures from before. [i]But. . . .[/i] Zarosis walked up towards the stone and then gripped the sword firmly. [i]You are him![/i] He effortlessly pulled the sword out of the rock and then without another word, he turned and walked through the exit. He continued on through the dark corridor until he had entered the front area, and then he exited the entire castle. He continued walking on, and paused only once. He turned to see the castle again, only to see ruins. He then turned again and then started to walk outside what was now a ruined gate. Despite not knowing what to do or where to go, he carried on, firmly holding the sword in his left hand. He then smirked. “Sometimes, you have to go wherever you need to go, rather than want to go.” He said.[/center] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted March 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 A lot happened. Lost my old laptop. 'Course, I got a new one but all my old files. . . Oh, whatever. LuN is still being worked on. Bump, because I am going to continue this somehow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 Sooo...is there going to be any second chapter to this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 It's on [b]hiatus[/b] for now, because I've decided to return to one of my older Yugioh fanfics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 And once you give up on that, I assume you will start on Chapter 2 for this Fic, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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