Antwo13 Posted January 24, 2011 Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 Look who just stopped by for a Galactic Duel. [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/2v9otwi.jpg[/img] 1 "Alien" Tuner-Monster + 2 "Alien" non-Tuner Monsters Once per turn you can return 1 removed from play "Alien" Monster to the top of your Deck and place 2 A-counters on a Face-Up Monster. You can remove 3 A-counters from anywhere on the Field to remove 1 Card on the Field from play. If this card would be Destroyed you can discard 1 "Alien" Monster instead. [img]http://i53.tinypic.com/142h1yt.jpg[/img] When this card is destroyed by an opponent's Card Effect, you can remove 1 "Alien" monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon this card and distribute 2 A-counters amoung Face-Up monsters your opponent controls. (A monster that battles an "Alien" monster loses 300 ATK for every A-counter on it.) [img]http://i52.tinypic.com/2gxmblh.jpg[/img] If this card was Destroyed by a Monster with an A-counter, Special Summon this Card at the start of you next turn. If this card battles a monster with 3 or more A-counters it is automaticly Destroyed during the Damage Step. [img]http://i54.tinypic.com/fnr29w.jpg[/img] You can Discard this Card from your Hand to place 2 A-counters on a Face-Up Monster your opponent controls. You can remove 2 "Alien" Monsters from your Graveyard to special summon this card from your Graveyard and then place 2 A-counters on a card. (A monster that battles an "Alien" monster loses 300 ATK for every A-counter on it.) ArtWork: ~[url="http://polyraspad.deviantart.com/"][color="#121516"]Polyraspad[/color][/url] @ DEVAINTART and ~[url="http://davidrapozaart.deviantart.com/"][color="#196ba7"]DavidRapozaArt[/color][/url] @ DEVIANTART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted January 24, 2011 Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 [center]Ok seeing as I'm probebly YCM's nr 1 "Alien" fan I'll give you a few pointers on these. [b]Alien Deity[/b] OCG fix: [i]"[b]Alien Ammonite[/b]" + 2 "Alien" non-Tuner Monsters Once per turn[b],[/b] you can return 1 removed from play "Alien" [b]m[/b]onster to the top of your Deck and place 2 A-[b]C[/b]ounters on a [b]f[/b]ace-[b]u[/b]p [b]m[/b]onster. You can remove 3 A-counters from anywhere on the [b]f[/b]ield to remove 1 [b]c[/b]ard on the [b]f[/b]ield from play. If this card would be [b]d[/b]estroyed[b],[/b] you can discard 1 "Alien" [b]m[/b]onster instead.[/i] Ok to start of, ALL top/boss cards in the Alien Archtype aren't truely Aliens but "Cosmic [i]noun[/i] *Name with a "[b]'[/b]" in it*". Secondly all Synchros can only be Summoned with the Only Tuner monster there is, namely Ammonite. Beside those, its actually a nice Alien Card. A 8/10 after the fixes. [b]Licker[/b] Besides the horrible name its pic is wrong, all Aliens are not the movie kind, but have spheres on thier bodies and possibly an exo-skeleton. OCG fix: [i]When this card is destroyed by [b]your[/b] opponent's [b]c[/b]ard [b]e[/b]ffect, you can remove 1 "Alien" monster from your Graveyard [b]from play[/b] to Special Summon this card and distribute 2 A-Counters amoung [b]f[/b]ace-[b]u[/b]p monsters your opponent controls. [b](If a monster with an A-Counter battles an "Alien" monster, it loses 300 ATK and DEF for each A-Counter during damage calculation only.)[/b][/i] Otherwise a decent Alien monster. A 7/10 after the fixes. [b]Pet Devourer[/b] 1st of all ALL ALIEN MONSTERS ARE REPTILE-TYPES!!! NO EXCEPTIONS!!! Ok now we have that cleared, I have to say that Aliens have no fur. OCG fix: [i]If this card was [b]d[/b]estroyed [b]in battle[/b] by a [b]m[/b]onster with an A-[b]C[/b]ounter [b]on it[/b], Special Summon this Card [b]during your next Draw Phase[/b]. If this card battles a monster with 3 or more A-[b]C[/b]ounters it, [b]destroy that monster[/b] during the Damage Step. [/i] Ok besides the things I already pointed out, this is actually a pretty good idea. Combined with Molting Escape its even deadly. A 8.5/10 after the fixes. [b]Skull[/b] 1st of all "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Alien_Skull"]Alien Skull[/url]" is already an existing card. Then the img doesn't even look like an E.T. let stand an Alien Monster, and there's the Fiend problem. OCG fix: [i]You can [b]d[/b]iscard this [b]c[/b]ard [s]from your Hand [/s]to place 2 A-[b]C[/b]ounters on a [b]f[/b]ace-[b]u[/b]p [b]m[/b]onster your opponent controls. You can remove 2 "Alien" Monsters from your Graveyard to [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummon this card from your Graveyard[b],[/b] then place 2 A-Counters on a card. [b](If a monster with an A-Counter battles an "Alien" monster, it loses 300 ATK and DEF for each A-Counter during damage calculation only.)[/b][/i] Meh, pretty generic. I don't like it. A 6.4/10 after fixes. Try doing some research on the archtype you want to help before making te cards. [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Antwo13 Posted January 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 Thanks for the tips and I think the Aliens don't have to be all reptile type though, and the reason i had left the name ALIEN Diety is so when he battles monsters with A-counters lose Attack. Besides the Alien Pet isnt realy an alien hes just some nasty pet monster creature. But still great advise and i will make changes soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xFirestarx Posted January 24, 2011 Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 Good job, I really love these cards. The only problem i have is the alien skull, I don't get the name....If its suppose 2 be a alien skeleton or something than i'd show more skeleton...But i'm a newbie, I wouldn't listen to me...Anyway overall, I loved these. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Antwo13 Posted January 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 thanks and yeah i ended up changing the name, I didnt realize how some names just didnt fit with the Picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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