.Leo Posted January 24, 2011 Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 [center]Welcome to my new archetype, the Vicious Souls! This archetype will feature many different Fiend type monsters (other types will be included) with low ATK and effects that revolve around milling and being able to have good hand and field advantage while using the effects of various Vicious Soul monsters! This will also be my new role playing deck, so if you have a fun role play that you would like me to join, just PM me a link to the OoC Thread and I will consider joining . Hopefully you enjoy this archetype! I have put effort into setting this thread up and making this cards so I hope you view and comment on them. Image Credits: So Legit you Quit Father Wolf Future Paradise .Buddha .Supervillian (If I have forgotten any Image Credits or got the image credits wrong please post it down below, I would appreciate it :3.) Updates! ~Updated with the Standard Vicious Soul Deck in the "Decklist Corner" Section. ~Updated with the monster cards "Vicious Soul Machine Bot", "Vicious Soul Dark Energy" and "Vicious Soul Slasher" and the Synchro Monster "Vicious Soul Volcano Brute." [Spoiler=Old Updates] ~Updated with the Excess Monster "Vicious Soul Flame Ace" and the Spell Card "Vicious Offerings." ~Updated by adding "Decklist Corner." ~Updated with the Monster Cards "Vicious Soul Zombie Master" and "Vicious Soul, Wolf of Thoughts." ~Updated with the Spell Cards "Vicious World" and "Lonely Combatent"! ~Thread posted with the cards "Vicious Soul Zora", "Vicious Soul Arcana", "Vicious Soul Hell Mace" and "Vicious Soul Demon Eye".[/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Vicious Souls -8- NEW!~] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/2dhsjer.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/2j0xb92.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/bjbor4.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/1zltxl2.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/2zqty07.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/34iitt4.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/243ivzb.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/2vuiuxk.jpg[/IMG] [Spoiler=Effects] [b]Vicious Soul Arcana:[/b] This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, you can discard 1 "Vicious Soul" monster from your hand to the Graveyard destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. [b]Vicious Soul Hell Mace:[/b] If this card is sent from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard, Special Summon it. If this card is Synchro Summon after being Special Summoned by this effect, remove it from play. [b]Vicious Soul Zora:[/b] When this card is Summoned, select 1 "Vicious Soul" monster you control except this card. If that card attacks and destroys a monster this turn, you can send 1 "Vicious Soul" monster from your Deck to your Graveyard. The selected monster gains 300 ATK. [b]Vicious Soul, Wolf of Thoughts:[/b] When this card is Summoned, declare 1 "Vicious Soul" monster. If you draw the declared card, you can Special Summon it. If it is a Tuner, its Level is treated as 1. [b]Vicious Soul Zombie Master:[/b] When this card is discarded from your hand to the Graveyard, you can draw 1 card. If this card is Special Summon by an effect that has "Vicious Soul" in the description, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. [b]Vicious Soul Machine Bot:[/b] When this card destroys a monster by battle, select 1 "Vicious Soul" monster in your Graveyard. Reduce this card's ATK to 0 and Special Summon that monster. [b]Vicious Soul Slasher:[/b] This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points, send 1 "Vicious Soul" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. [b]Vicious Soul Dark Energy:[/b] Once per turn, you can discard 1 Spell Card from your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Vicious Soul" from your Graveyard.[/Spoiler][/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Vicious Soul Spell Cards (3)] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/14d12qv.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/ws34h5.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/fjjp02.jpg[/IMG] [Spoiler=Effects] [b]Vicious World:[/b] "Vicious World" can only be activated if you control a "Vicious Soul" monster. As long as you control a "Vicious Soul" monster, once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can discard 1 card from your hand to draw 1 card. If you discarded a "Vicious Soul" monster, you add 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand. [b]Lonely Combatent:[/b] Activate only if you control 1 "Vicious Soul" monster and have 3 or more cards in your hand. Discard all cards in your hand and Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Vicious Soul" monster from your Graveyard. [b]Vicious Offerings:[/b] Select 1 "Vicious Soul" Excess monster you control. Overlay 1 "Vicious Soul" monster from your Graveyard to the selected monster.[/Spoiler][/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Vicious Soul Trap Cards] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Vicious Soul Synchro Monsters (2) NEW!~] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/2mrcu2v.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/2cwqtrm.jpg[/IMG] [Spoiler=Effects] [b]Vicious Soul Demon Eye:[/b] 1 "Vicious Soul" Tuner Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters When this card is successfully Synchro Summoned, add 1 "Vicious Soul" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. During each or your Battle Phases, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If the card you Tributed had less ATK then the card destroyed, this card cannot attack this turn. [b]Vicious Soul Volcano Brute:[/b] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Vicious Soul" monsters During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card destroys a monster in Defense Position, add 1 "Vicious Soul" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If it was a Tuner, when it is Summoned, it cannot be used to Synchro Summon a monster with this card.[/Spoiler][/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Vicious Soul Excess Monsters (1)] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/a25e1j.jpg[/IMG] [Spoiler=Effect] [b]Vicious Soul Flame Ace:[/b] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Excess Summoned by Overlaying 2 or more "Vicious Soul" monsters. Once per turn, if there is more than 3 "Vicious Soul" monsters Overlayed to this card, you can discard 1 "Vicious Soul" monster to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. This card cannot attack this turn.[/Spoiler][/Spoiler] [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/237449-leomence-presents-vicious-souls-8-added-2-monster-cards/page__view__findpost__p__4963818]Decklist Corner[/url][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 BUMP!~ Please comment guys! I would appreciate all of your comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Lol at Hell Mace being Synchro Summoned. Should be "If this card is used for a Synchro Summon..." There's not much to go off of yet, but it seems decent so far. Only reason it's UP'd is because of the lack of "Vicious Soul" monsters. It also doesn't help that Hell Mace can't be Summoned when sent to the Graveyard by Zora's effect, but that might make it a little OP'd, though I can see Hell Mace being one of the few tuners in a Lightsworn Deck, which is the main deck I'd be using if it wasn't so expensive. And I know how it feels to get no comments, some of my topics didn't get replies for over a week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Damn, guess that is what I get for staying up to late =P. True, I will expand the amount of Vicious Soul monsters later this week, but I want a couple spell cards first, namely a field spell. Tbh, I find I can post threads and the won't get a single comment unless I ask people to =P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Updated with Vicious World and Lonely Combatent! Comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Your field might be OP'd for the same reason as Magician of Faith, really easy to recycle Monster Reborn and Dark Hole, cards that should only be used once. And on top of that, you get a free draw. All you need to do is discard one of your Archetype guys, retrieve Monster Reborn and you get to SS the guy you just discarded as well as have a new card in your hand, and you can keep going over and over. Also, field spells tend to be usable to both players at the same time, might want to keep that in mind. Lonely Combatant makes it seems like this archetype can work in tandem with Dark World monsters, what with the discarding stuff and all. Sadly, your spells are the only thing that makes this work so far, and i don't think a Dark World/Vicious Soul deck is viable right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 I do see what you are getting at, as it can be fuel to get back free Monster Reborns and Dark Hole. Any suggestions on how I could improve the card and make it more balanced? True, this deck is not viable atm, since we don't have enough cards yet ;D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 [quote name='+LeoMence' timestamp='1296089394' post='4963796'] I do see what you are getting at, as it can be fuel to get back free Monster Reborns and Dark Hole. Any suggestions on how I could improve the card and make it more balanced? [/quote] To tell the truth, I can't think of anything besides limiting it to Quick Plays or Continuous, but I don't see that being to useful in a Deck like this. Another option would be to add it from the Deck, or you could just redo the effect. Up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 I will think about it for a while. I will take your ideas into consideration ;D. [center][b][u]Deck List Corner![/u][/b] [Spoiler=Standard Synchro Vicious Souls (40 Cards)] Monsters -20-: Vicious Soul Zora [3] Vicious Soul Arcana [3] Vicious Soul, Wolf of Thoughts [3] Vicious Soul Dark Energy [3] Vicious Soul Hell Mace [2] Vicious Soul Zombie Master [2] Vicious Soul Slasher [2] Effect Veiler [1] Glow Up-Bulb [1] Spell Cards -13-: Vicious Soul [3] Pot of Duality [3] Book of Moon [3] Lonely Combatent [2] Dark Hole [1] Monster Reborn [1] Trap Cards -7-: Bottomless Trap Hole [2] Solemn Warning [2] Mirror Force [1] Solemn Judgment [1] Royal Oppression [1] Synchros -15-: Vicious Soul Volcano Brute [3] Vicious Soul Demon Eye [2] Goyo Guardian [1] Brionac [1] Black Rose Dragon [1] Scrap Dragon [2] Stardust Dragon [2] Mist Wurm [1] Ally of Justice Catastor [1] Magical Android [1][/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Excess Vicious Souls] [/Spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Update has been made. I plan on working to make Vicious World a little more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Updated with the Excess Monster "Vicious Soul Flame Ace" and the Spell Card "Vicious Offerings." I plan on taking this Archetype to an RP soon. Will make a couple more cards before that though =P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minato Namikaze Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 with excess instead of saying if there is it should say if there are and you need a period at end of effect other than that they look pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Thanks Minato Namikaze~ There is a period, but MSE kinda screwed up with the text size a bit so you can't see it ;D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minato Namikaze Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 kk great lookin cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Added 3 more cards!~ This archetype should be role play ready soon, I will make a build tonight then start RPing tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 BUMP!~ Will finish Standard Vicious Soul Deck tonight! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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