{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 [b]Dis[/b][b]ntergration of creation[/b] [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/5447/149508.jpg[/img] Monsters are removed from play during the second End Phase after the turn they are Summoned [b]Cubical Dimensional Trap[/b] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/9705/149508pa.jpg[/img] Once per turn , your opponent must pay 800 Life Points for one of their monsters to attack. [b]Dimension Of Confusion[/b] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/5447/149508.jpg[/img] You must pay 700 Life Points to activated this card.As long as this card is on the field, all monsters on the field reduce 400 ATK and DEF during every End phases. [b]Spiralling Dimension[/b] [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5447/149508.jpg[/img] You must pay 900 Life points to activated this card.Each turn, all monsters on both side of the Field increase their ATK by 400.This card is destroyed during the third End Phase after the turn this card is activated. [b]Anti-Magnetic Cyborg[/b] [img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/5081/149508k.jpg[/img] You just can Special Summoned this card when "Spiralling Dimension" is on the field by pay 700 Life points.Once per turn, you can increase this card ATK by 200 by pay 200 Life points. [b]Anti-Matter Trooper[/b] [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/5447/149508.jpg[/img] You just can Special Summoned this card when "Disintergration Of Creation" is on the field by pay 800 Life points.This card's ATK is equal to the number of your banished cards x 800. [b]Master of Disintergration[/b] [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/3019/149508n.jpg[/img] Once per turn , you can remove from play one card on the field. If there are less than 3 banished cards, destroy this card. [b]Soul Slasher [/b] [img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5447/149508.jpg[/img] You can only Special Summon this card from your hand by removing 3 Machine type cards from your graveyard. This card gains ATK equal to the number of cards removed from play x 900. Any monster(s) sent to the Graveyard are removed from play. [b]Soul World[/b] [img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5447/149508.jpg[/img] Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, remove from play 1 monster from your Deck. You can pay 4000 Life Points to send this card to the Graveyard and Special Summon 2 monsters removed from play by this effect (Ignoring the summoning condition) [b]Soul Creator[/b] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/5428/149508e.jpg[/img] This card cannot be remove from the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can select 1 of your remove from play monster(s), then remove 1 card from your deck and Special Summon that monster. You can tribute this card to Special Summon The Creator from the Graveyard (Ignoring the Summoning Condition) [b]Dimensional Breach Soldier[/b] [img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/2801/149508x.jpg[/img] When this card is removed from play , return this card to your side of the field on the next standby phase. [b]Fire Warrior of Disintergration[/b] [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/5447/149508.jpg[/img] This card's ATK is increase by the number of your banished cards x 200. [b]Fast Disintergration Trooper[/b] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/4482/149508y.jpg[/img] [i]Fast teleportation is the key to the successful assault. [/i] [b]Rapid Re-Intergration[/b] [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/4482/149508y.jpg[/img] If there 2 or more monsters on your opponent side of the field , you can Special summon "Fast Disintergration Trooper" from your deck or your hand to your side of the field."Fast Disintergration Trooper" 's ATK increased by 200 until the next End phase. [b]Pan-Dimensional Alchemist[/b] [img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5447/149508.jpg[/img] You just can Special Summon this card from your hand by pay 1000 Life Points when theres no monster on your side of the field. As long as this card is on your side the field, both players must banish 1 card from their deck once per turn. [b]Corrupting Dimension[/b] [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5447/149508.jpg[/img] Decrease the ATK of all face-up monsters on the field by 200 x the numbers of banished monsters . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Well, your first spell looks like it should be a field or continuous spell, not a normal spell. Pic also isn't that good, just saying. There are no such things as field traps, I'd make it continuous, and it's too strong. Either make it effect both players, lower the cost or make it once per turn. Your field spell is...interesting. I can't figure out a Deck that would use this, but you could easily create your own set around this. That's all i got. Good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 [quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1295962771' post='4959490'] Well, your first spell looks like it should be a field or continuous spell, not a normal spell. Pic also isn't that good, just saying. There are no such things as field traps, I'd make it continuous, and it's too strong. Either make it effect both players, lower the cost or make it once per turn. Your field spell is...interesting. I can't figure out a Deck that would use this, but you could easily create your own set around this. That's all i got. Good luck. [/quote] Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Card 1 - 'D.D. Scout Plane' would love it, as would Spirits. Card 2 - A one sided 'Toll'. Card 3 - Too much of a nuisance to keep track of than it would actually have use for. I think the only deck it would see play is a Vanilla 1900 ATK beatdown alongside 'Non-Spellcasting Area'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 Fixed with 2 new card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Added 7 Cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 WHY GOD!!WHY !!??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Added 2 new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Zektor Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 most of the cards are good, some OCG errors, and the pic that is drawn is meh, but anyway 8/10 +rep plz you said in a pm :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 @Genex FireFox " Thanks for the average rating , now i can believe in myself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman†Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Good job, love these cards. Pics are rather cool, and effects are AWSOME. (I don't care 'bout OCG) I rate them a whopping 8/10. Good job. Below this text, I have the proper way each card's effect should be. Hope you like these! P.S. I would've gave you a friendly rating without the rep, I'm just the nice kind of guy. =3 1st thing, "Once per turn , your opponent must pay 800 Life Points for one of their monsters to attack." This is a little overpowered, so it should be something like this, "Once per turn , your opponent must pay 800 Life Points for one of their monsters to attack. You must tribute 1 monster (How many stars u want) or less to continue this effect." 2nd thing, a little OP'ed on this one, and some grammar issues, "You must pay 700 Life Points to activated this card.As long as this card is on the field, all monsters on the field reduce 400 ATK and DEF during every End phases." Should be, "You must pay 700 Life Points to activate this card. As long as this card is on the Field, all monsters on the Field are reduced by 400 ATK and DEF during every End phase. 3rd thing, "You must pay 900 Life points to activated this card.Each turn, all monsters on your side of the Field increase their ATK by 400.This card is destroyed during the third End Phase after the turn this card is activated." Should be, "You must pay 900 Life points to activate this card. Each turn, all of the monsters on your side of the Field get their ATK increased by 400. This card is destroyed during the third End Phase after the turn this card is activated." 4th thing, "You just can Special Summoned this card when "Spiralling Dimension" is on the field by pay 700 Life points.Once per turn, you can increase this card ATK by 200 by pay 200 Life points." should be, "You can only Special Summon this card when "Spiralling Dimension" is on the Field. Once per turn, you can increase this card's ATK by 200 by paying 200 life points." 5th thing, "You just can Special Summoned this card when "Disintergration Of Creation" is on the field by pay 800 Life points.This card's ATK is equal to the number of your removed from play cards x 800." Should be, "You can only Special Summon this card when "Disintergration of Creation" is on the Field. This card's ATK is equal to the number of cards that were sent to the Graveyard." 6th thing, "Once per turn , you can remove from play one card on the field. If there are less than 3 card in the removed from play zone, destroy this card." Should be, "Once per turn, you can send one card to the Graveyard. If there are less than 3 cards in the Graveyard, destroy this card." That's it, I'm assuming before you did the rest you figured out how to do nice effects. (AKA No OCG) Good job man, Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 @Marksman: Do you know RFG ? (AKA Removed from play) http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Removed_from_play http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Removed_from_Play_Zone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman†Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 [quote name='{VNS}MKCyrax' timestamp='1296308064' post='4971009'] @Marksman: Do you know RFG ? (AKA Removed from play) http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Removed_from_play http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Removed_from_Play [/quote] Well, Now i can see why you put that there, Instead of graveyard. (That means no, I didn't until now. >.>) So lots of that is prob fine...Fail on my part, But i thank your for showing me that, Now i won't get Confused again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Added 2 new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman†Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Fast Disintergration Trooper = 8/10, just for the heck of it.. Rapid Re-Intergration = A little OCG in this one, but it's for a card that i rated 8/10, so....7/10? =3 Nice cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Okay lets see might want to get some better pictures on some. Fix the OCG mistakes, and some cards are a little OP'd fix them and these card could be really useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smashsquatch Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 These cards have pretty cool ablities that make it useful and also can hurt you in a way! You also kind of have a few OCG errors on a few cards but either way these are pretty good. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Bumpity Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackQ Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 these are very interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 New Bump with pic for Master Of Disintergration Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Bonus pic+ Bump [IMG]http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/72/mod3h.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://img816.imageshack.us/img816/6387/mod2zz.png[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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