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  1. 1. How are my cards

    • terrible don't waste your time try something else
      5
    • you need work.....alot
      4
    • you COULD be good just try hard
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    • there okay
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    • since its your first its good
      0
    • its just plain good
      0
    • these are great
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    • just WOW
      1
    • these are the best I ever saw
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TheLegenderyKingVildeChaya Newbie

TheLegenderyKingVildeChaya

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image credit goes to Wanderly
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TheLegenderyKingVildeChaya Newbie

TheLegenderyKingVildeChaya

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[quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1295931208' post='4959158']
Not gonna vote because

1. This isn't really a set, a set would generally have at least 10 cards in it.
2. The same card got posted 3 times, probably a Cardmaker error.
3. Vanillas are boring and suck without support.
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I know my computer just stopped in middle
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Ieyasu Tokugawa

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That's better. They aren't very good, though better then some of the new member cards I've seen.

Like I said earlier, Normal Monsters suck unless you give them some good support, or they're tuners.

For Aqua Fairy, its just "All WATER monsters gain 400 ATK." And WATER monsters already have Star Boy.

Aqua Ghost should say "This card gains 400 ATK for every Aqua-type monster on the field." Lower the ATK by 200 so that he starts out with 900 ATK when alone. That's better for a level 2.

Baby Dragon should specify when it gets the attack boost, every Standby Phase? End Phase? Draw Phase? Otherwise it's too ambiguous.

For Dark Slug see above.

Dragon Slaying Sword sucks without DNA surgery, and that isn't run very much anymore.

Duplicate Spell doesn't need to specify tokens, those are already monsters. I'm sure there's another way to say it, just not sure how.

The last card is Duplicate Spell again.
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[quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1295932380' post='4959179']
That's better. They aren't very good, though better then some of the new member cards I've seen.

Like I said earlier, Normal Monsters suck unless you give them some good support, or they're tuners.

For Aqua Fairy, its just "All WATER monsters gain 400 ATK." And WATER monsters already have Star Boy.

Aqua Ghost should say "This card gains 400 ATK for every Aqua-type monster on the field." Lower the ATK by 200 so that he starts out with 900 ATK when alone. That's better for a level 2.

Baby Dragon should specify when it gets the attack boost, every Standby Phase? End Phase? Draw Phase? Otherwise it's too ambiguous.

For Dark Slug see above.

Dragon Slaying Sword sucks without DNA surgery, and that isn't run very much anymore.

Duplicate Spell doesn't need to specify tokens, those are already monsters. I'm sure there's another way to say it, just not sure how.

The last card is Duplicate Spell again.
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thanks i'll fix them and I don't do cards twice on purpose so you don't have to tell me
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Ginko Newbie

Ginko

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no offense, but these cards are terrible.
not only is the ocg on your effect cards are terrible, but the grammar on all the vanilla cards are also trash
i like the pictures, but that's the only good point
you definitely need to work on the grammar, and, you put this in the wrong topic: this is for finished sets, you should've put these in "realistic cards"
work on it
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[quote name='VildeChaya' timestamp='1296433795' post='4975229']
this is in finished sets
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THAT'S THE PROBLEM!
this isn't a set at all, its a random compilation of all the cards you made
therefore, it should've been a topic in realistic cards instead of finished sets
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