Nes!o Posted January 26, 2011 Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 [center][img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/7784/351757.jpg[/img] [i][size="4"]Card lore: During the turn this card is Summoned you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or Lower Aqua or Fish-Type monsters from your Graveyard. It cannot Attack the turn it is Summoned.[/size][/i][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bio-Hazard Posted January 26, 2011 Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 [quote name='king of pain' timestamp='1296003668' post='4961000'] [center][img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7784/351757.jpg[/img] [i][size="4"]Card lore: During the turn this card is Summoned you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon all Level 5 or Lower Aqua or Fish-Type monsters from your Grave. They cannot Attack the turn they are Summoned and cannot be removed from the field except by battle. Unless you pay 500 Life-Points for every card Summoned destroy all cards on your side of the field during the End-Phase.[/size][/i][/center] [/quote] Cool. Rating:6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nes!o Posted January 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 just 6? any ideas on how i can make this, and my future cards better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1SDAN Posted January 26, 2011 Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 First off, it's Graveyard not just Grave Second I can See how this can work with Coethalent (I'm WAY into fish cards now bcause of him) But u should Make this monster Lvl 7, remove the "can't b destroyed except by battle, and it'll be worthy of a 9. (Which I would give most printed yugioh cards) So far, 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nes!o Posted January 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 thanx for the comments corrections have been made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1SDAN Posted January 26, 2011 Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 Now, it's defiantly a 9. p.s. the reason I suggested 7 was so it could be summoned w/ one tribute if A Legendary Ocean was on the Field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bio-Hazard Posted January 26, 2011 Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 [quote name='king of pain' timestamp='1296008727' post='4961218'] just 6? any ideas on how i can make this, and my future cards better? [/quote] I would also change the picture. I find it odd how it has somebodys signature on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 26, 2011 Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 OCG fix time! When this card is Summoned, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon as many Level 5 or lower Aqua or Fish-Type monsters as possible from your Graveyard. They cannot attack on the turn they are Summoned and cannot be removed from the field by card effects. During your End Phase, pay 500 Life Points for each card Summoned by this effect or destroy all cards you control. It's OP'd. Virtually 4 free monsters that are immune to any effects. This could produce some OTKs. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nes!o Posted January 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 okay i see what you mean. i'll fix it so that it's not so op'ed. and i'll find a different pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted January 26, 2011 Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 This Special Summon thing... i'd prefer a drawback like this "discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 ..." instead of the pay Life Points effect. But anyway... The Pic..well. That doesnt really look like a Ultimate Fish Lord. (btw. Why "fish" ? its a sea serpent) Since your a Level 1 Member, your OCG isnt too bad and the card is kinda balanced. You recieved a 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bio-Hazard Posted January 26, 2011 Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 [quote name='king of pain' timestamp='1296003668' post='4961000'] [center][img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/7784/351757.jpg[/img] [i][size="4"]Card lore: During the turn this card is Summoned you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon all Level 4 or Lower Aqua or Fish-Type monsters from your Graveyard. They cannot Attack the turn they are Summoned, or be used as Tributes for a Tribute Summon . Unless you pay 600 Life-Points for every card Summoned destroy all cards on your side of the field during the End-Phase.[/size][/i][/center] [/quote] Thats wayyyy better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nes!o Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 let me know whether you liked it before, or after i changed the effect, name etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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