The Elite Archer

[Flakman4000]

Okay, its been awhile since I last posted a topic, 'cause I never did post a topic (Random dude: You suck at jokes!). Anyway as you saw my topic description, it said my first written card (tell me if it has to be a deck). So here it is

The Elite Archer
Attribute: EARTH
Level 7
Warrior/Effect
ATK 2000/DEF 1200
If this card is flipped or special summoned inflict 500 points of damage. Once every two turn you can inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. For each EARTH warrior monster on the field, this monster gains 100 ATK points. If your life points are lower than 1000, destroy this card by discarding a card from your hand and gain the destroyed monster's original ATK points to your life points.

Please comment on the comment section [font="Arial Black"]below[/font] to see if I need to improve on anything.

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

[i]When this card is flipped face up or Special Summoned, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. Once every two turns, during your ? Phase, you can inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. This card gains 100 ATK for each EARTH Warrior-type monster on the field. If your Life Points are lower than 1000, you can destroy this card by discarding 1 card from your hand, and gain Life Points equal to this cards original ATK.[/i]

3000 ATK seems a bit high for an archer, or just for an 'ordinary' Lv8 monster in general. Espcially since its has a small ATK increase.

The burn damage makes sense, but the (massive) heal effect just doesn't. But 3000 LP gainage seems wrong (plus I can just summon it back with 'Monster Reborn' or something anyway).

[Flakman4000]

thanks

[Flakman4000]

bump

[Flakman4000]

Bump!