The Greatness Posted January 26, 2011 Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 (Skip this if you really don't care, even though I want you to read it lol) I'm making a fan fic so I plan to use these cards in my fic through one of the main characters.. so thats why you might see 2-3 staples in there and I must make a 40-50 card deck for this character so its a limited set unless you want me to make more (doubt it). So give me your opinions and I know its OPed here adn there but I have some cards that whip the s*** of itself lmao (only 2 ) These first 28 cards are the main key cards.. I just need to make a couple of more Spells and Traps plus some small effect and normal monsters and its set. Here goes nothing: [Spoiler=A New Generation of Pain][img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/4199/74365.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]Activate this effect when your opponent attacks with a card that is has a Level of 7 or higher and choose 1 of the following effects: • If you would inflict more than 1000 damage, you can negate the attack and remove the attacking card from play. • Inflict appropriate battle damage and end your opponents Battle Phase. During your Battle Phase you can Tribute up to all the monsters you control to inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the Tributed monsters total ATK. Inflict 500 Life Points for each card Tributed.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Dimension Kid][img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/8358/74365g.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]This card can be Special Summoned from your Deck, hand, Graveyard, or removed from play if you have 5 or more cards removed from play. You can Tribute this card to send 1 card from your Graveyard, Deck, or removed from play to your Deck. If this card was removed from the field by a cards effect (including its own), you can Special Summon it during the End Phase.[/spoiler]My Personal Favorite (and its a staple)(There's a character in my fic with a Deck revolved around him )[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Glorified Power][img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/5666/74365o.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]All cards that would be removed from play are sent to the Graveyard instead. When a "Third Millennium" monster with a Level of 4 or lower is destroyed you can pay 500 Life Points to send it to your Deck. Shuffle your deck. When a Synchro monster is Summoned, the opponent of the respective owner gains Life Points equal to half the Synchro's ATK. All cards that are not Synchros with a Level of 7 or higher cannot be played unless it is a "Third Millennium" monster. All monsters with a Level of 4 or lower gain 500 ATK and DEF each turn. Each time a "Third Millennium" monster is Summoned inflict 800 damage towards your opponent[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=High Tech Device][img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/4199/74365.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]You can only activate this card when you control at least 1 "Third Millennium" monster with a Level of 4 or lower. You can remove 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT monster in your Graveyard from play to equip this card to a monster you control with a Level of 4 or lower. The equipped monster gains ATK and DEF equal to the ATK of the monster you removed from play. If the equipped card would be destroyed by a card's effect, destroy this card instead and negate the effect and remove the card from play.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=It's Hero Time!][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/4199/74365.jpg[/img][Spoiler=Lore]If you control a card with "Hero" or "Heroine" in its name you can activate this card. Select 1 monster you control. That monster gains 1000 ATK during your opponents Battle Phase only. Your opponent cannot attack more than 1 monster you control unless it is the selected card. When the selected card is removed from the field you can Special 1 card with "Hero" or "Heroine" in its name from your Deck. You can pay 1000 Life Points to put this card on the top of your Deck instead of putting it in the Graveyard.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=One Man Army][img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/4493/74365l.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]You can activate this card if you control exactly 1 monster while your opponent controls at least 2 monsters. You can remove 1 card from your Graveyard from play for each card in your opponent's hand. You can Special Summon 1 card with a Level of 4 or lower for each card in your opponent's hand. Half the total ATK of the Special Summoned monsters are applied to the card's ATK and DEF originally on the field. During your Battle Phase, the card you control with the highest ATK or DEF is the only one who can attack. When this card is destroyed inflict damage to each monster you control x200.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Ace Hero][img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/8358/74365g.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 1 "Third Millennium Super Hero" and removing it from play. This card is not affected by card effects while you control another "Third Millennium" monster.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Android][img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/4511/74365m.jpg[/img][Spoiler=Lore]Once per turn you can remove from play 1 Spell card in your Graveyard to Special Summon a card with a Level of 4 or lower from your Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle (damage calculation is applied normally).[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Android Warrior]SORRY NO IMAGE BUT SEE LORE [Spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Third Millennium Android" from the field. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each card removed from play. When an effect is activated you can Tribute this card to negate it. If this card was destroyed by its own effect is is Special Summoned during the End Phase. This card can only conduct its Battle Phase while "Third Millennium Android" is removed from play and by paying 800 Life Points.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Creep][img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/2045/74365e.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]This card can be Normal Summoned or Special Summoned by any effect with the addition of removing from play 2 "Third Millennium" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is on the field return all Trap and Spell cards to their respective owners hand. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each card returned to their owners hand. This card is not affected by Trap or Spell cards when there is another "Third Millennium" monster on the field. When this card is removed from the field inflict damage equal to half this cards ATK.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Cyborg][img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3703/74365r.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summoned it cannot be negated. You can inflict damage equal to the number of cards on the field x100 to send all cards from your removed from play back to your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed remove it from play.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Dice, the Robot Ranger][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/4199/74365.jpg[/img][Spoiler=Lore]This card can be Normal Summoned or Special Summoned by any effect with the addition of removing from play 2 "Third Millennium" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is on the field return all Trap and Spell cards to their respective owners hand. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each card returned to their owners hand. This card is not affected by Trap or Spell cards when there is another "Third Millennium" monster on the field. When this card is removed from the field inflict damage equal to half this cards ATK.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Diceman][img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4017/74365q.jpg[/img][Spoiler=Lore]This card can be Normal Summoned by removing the first 2 cards of your Deck from play. While this card is on the field and at least 1 "Third Millennium Ranger" is removed from play, send all cards removed from play from both players to the Graveyard. You can Tribute this card to Special Summon all "Third Millennium Rangers" you own from your Deck, removed from play, Graveyard, and hand. If this card was destroyed by its own effect, destroy all Spell and Trap cards you control.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Hero][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/1166/74365h.jpg[/img][Spoiler=Lore]When a monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can remove this card from play to Special Summon it back to the field and end the Battle Phase. If this card was removed from play by its own effect, Special Summon it during the End Phase.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Heroine][img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/3750/74365u.jpg[/img][Spoiler=Lore]Once per turn while this card is on the field and your opponent controls more monsters than you do, you can destroy 1 card.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Karate Kid][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/8358/74365g.jpg[/img][Spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summoned, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate any effects before or after this card is Summoned until the End Phase. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all face-down monsters on the field, negating their effects. Inflict 200 damage for each card destroyed.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Mecha Ninja][img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9964/74365y.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 1 "Third Millennium Ninja" you control. This card cannot be targeted by a cards effect when it is Summoned. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand and remove it from play to destroy 1 card on the field. During the Battle Phase, you can pay up to 500 Life Points to increase this cards ATK by the amount of Life Points paid.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Ninja][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/322/74365v.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]When your opponent activates a card effect (even when this card is being Summoned), you can remove this card from play to negate the effect of the card and remove it from play. You can pay 200 Life Points to Special Summon this card during the End Phase for each monster on the field.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Ranger][img]http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/4493/74365l.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]While this cards ATK is lower than 1 of your opponents monsters, this card can attack directly. This card is not affected by Trap cards.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Super Cyborg][img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/3721/74365k.jpg[/img][Spoiler=Lore]This card can be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 cards in your Graveyard while "Third Millennium Cyborg" is removed from play. This card cannot be targeted by Spell or Trap cards. For each turn this card is on the field pay 800 Life Points. If you do not this card is destroyed.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Super Hero][img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8632/74365a.jpg[/img][Spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Normal Summoned by offering "Third Millennium Hero" as a Tribute. When a card on you control is selected as an attack target, you can change the attack target to this card instead. If this card is destroyed by battle due to its own effect, Special Summon it during the End Phase.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Super Heroine][img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/2045/74365e.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]While this card is in your Graveyard, once per turn you can remove the top card of your Deck from play to remove 1 card on the field from play. While this card is removed from play you can Special Summon 1 monster with a Level of 4 or lower from your Graveyard.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Super Tuner][img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/1371/74365sg.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Normal Summoned when another Tuner is not on the field. Once per turn you can send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Deck. If this card is destroyed you can Special Summon 1 "Third Millennium Tuner".[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Synchro][img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/1374/74365lh.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]1 "Third Millennium" Tuner + 1 or more "Third Millennium" non-Tuner(s) When your opponent activates a card effect, you can remove from play 1 Tuner card from your Graveyard from play to negate the effect. When a card you control is destroyed by battle while this card is on the field your opponent inflicts the Battle Damage as well. This card can only conduct its Battle Phase by removing from play 1 "Third Millennium" monster in your Graveyard from play and paying 800 Life Points.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Third Millennium Tuner][img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/2721/74365i.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]When this card is used for the Synchro Summon of "Third Millennium Synchro" destroy all monsters you control. "Third Millennium" your opponent loses Life Points equal to the number of cards destroyed by this cards effect x500.[/spoiler]I'm probably going to have to make other Tuner cards besides the ones you see here exclusive with the fic.[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Time Everlasting][img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/3703/74365r.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]This card can only be activated when a "Third Millennium" monster is on the field. Remove up to 3 card(s) in your Graveyard from play once per turn to draw the same amount of cards you removed from play. Inflict 200 damage for each card you drew from this effect. When this card is removed from the field you can pay 1000 Life Points to place 1 "Everlasting Time Machine" from your Deck, Graveyard, or hand on the field.[/spoiler]No I didn't forget about "Everlasting Time Machine"... That one is only going to pop up in the fic.[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Too Much Power][img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/4199/74365.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]You can only activate this card effect when you successfully destroy 1 of your opponents cards. Negate all the effects of "Third Millennium" monsters cards in your Deck, Graveyard, hand, removed from play, and field. You can destroy all cards you control to Special Summon 2 Synchro monsters from your Extra Deck. Their effects are negated. This card is not destroyed until both Synchro monsters Summoned are in the Graveyard.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Wrong Evolution][img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4199/74365.jpg[/img][Spoiler=Lore]This card can only be activated when you control a "Third Millennium" monster. Select up to 3 "Third Millennium" monster(s) you control and remove it from play. You can Special Summon any "Third Millennium" from your Deck with a Level of 5 or greater for each card you removed from play. No card effects can be activated to negate the effect of this card or to negate the Special Summon(s). You inflict damage equal to the total Level of monster(s) Special Summoned x200.[/spoiler]HEY LOOK A LIGHTSWORN!!! And it's not even a monster.....[/spoiler] (There's no image for Android Warrior because I haven't gotten the pic approved (I haven't asked this person if I could use it.. Sorry!!) These card images are all from Kai Hiwatari!! That's it folks! Please comment and rate.. I need the feedback and plus not many people comment on my cards if you see from my previous posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted January 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 Sorry edit messed up my post............ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xFirestarx Posted January 26, 2011 Report Share Posted January 26, 2011 When you click on the pictures while you in card maker, Click a picture - then reload page, click a picture and so on. Then the pictures won't be the same. (That's what happened to your post) Read all the lores, and liked them. Looks like i'll enjoy the fanfic. Good job, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Thanks I'll try to get this fixed then and thanks for your early fic support! It'll come out once I have the 4 main characters Decks set up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xFirestarx Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Cool, I'll be looking forward too the fan fiction! I'm excited about the fixed versions too. P.S. Your welcome. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Ok it's now fixed!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xFirestarx Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Love the fixed versions! I think it's sad that i'm the only commenter so far... Good job on them! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 I really like the Hero and Heroine cards (+rep). And on that note, where did you find the pictures for them? I'd appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Well thanks. I usually don't get so many anyway lol. You should check out the next set I'm building.. it's going to be based around Summoning cards to the field and getting quick hits on your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 [quote name='TDA-great' timestamp='1296094317' post='4964130'] Well thanks. I usually don't get so many anyway lol. You should check out the next set I'm building.. it's going to be based around Summoning cards to the field and getting quick hits on your opponent. [/quote] I'll have to do that. Could you perhaps PM me the links to where you got the pictures? I could easily +rep you for that, as well. Good pictures are just hard to come by. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Look at the last paragraph. Oh and Kai Hiwatari and Doomed are where the good pics are lol. You can also use renders from Planet Render or any other render gallery and use BG from Deviantart to put 2 and 2 together.[url="../../user/117231-kai-hiwatari/"][/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 What The... Great card ..but i see megaman EXE and Digimon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 [quote]What The... Great card ..but i see megaman EXE and Digimon [/quote] I forgot to say it in info. The person I took these pics from, Kai Hiwatari, had a Megamen archetype in his archive but I still put them lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Okay, I've looked at all the cards are here are my thoughts: Like you said, a lot of these cards are HORRIBLY overpowered. There's a lot of field clearing and field presence advantage to be gained from these cards with little to no drawbacks. The Synchro require many specific monsters which can make them much harder to get out - and their effects are hardly worth the effort. Some of the effects are quite powerful and others are very bland and unoriginal. Your OCG is way off - almost to the point where you don't know what the card is supposed to do. The images are good (noticed the Mega Man EXE theme). As is, I would give these about a 6/10. There are SEVERE balance and OCG issues to be fixed on these cards. (I can help with individual cards if you wish) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Hm thanks for the honesty here.. I'll try to improve these cards over time and I'll close this thread once I decide my cards are better and I'll start a new one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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