Headless Warrior (Attempt 2)

[The Greatness]

So if you have an archetype and this card is played by your opponent... I think your going to get a good beating. This was meant for Blackwing, Lightsworn, Crystal Beast, Scrap, and Naturia cards because they are overused... they need to have a real card like this (probably not the same effect and look but a card that destroys archetypes).. sorry if there is a card that already does. Image Credit goes to .Buddha - Check his archive out. Cool pics.

[Spoiler=Headless Warrior][img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/6696/74365x.jpg[/img][Spoiler=Lore]While this card is on the field monsters with the same Archetype as another card on the field cannot be Special Summoned. Spell and Trap cards effects that target a specific Archetype are negated. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each card with the same Archetype in your opponents Graveyard during your Battle Phase only.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote]If there are monsters on the field with a common word in their name destroy them.[/quote]

That might be going a little far, I mean the SS and spell trap negation pretty much screw archetypes already. The second effect makes Black Wirlwind useless (unless targetting a card in the Deck doesn't work.) And Crystal Beasts aren't as much of a threat as a lot of the other decks.

[The Greatness]

So take that effect out?

[xFirestarx]

I agree with metagross, I believe "no monsters can be Summoned that have a common word in their name as a card on the field. If there are monsters on the field with a common word in their name destroy them." is a little overpowered... Other than that, Love the card! good job! 7/10

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Ahh ); this means I cant SS FGD while I control REBMD.

Or anything that has "The" in it's name while I control another monster with "The" in it's name. o.O.

It's 3rd effect isn't much =/ Inverz uses barely any Spell/Trap that specifically designate them. Kills Gusta/Scrap/Gladiator Beast/E-Hero/D-Hero/Infernity/ect. It's effect is continuous so Doom Cal cannot negate. Could be used in an Anti-Meta I guess but it seems slow. Doom Cal is fun.

Biggest issue I have is that wording is far to vague. Just use "While this card is on the field no monsters [b]of the same Archetype[/b] can be Summoned. If there are monsters [b]of the same Archetype[/b] on the field destroy them." That way it cannot be confused with what I have at the top of this comment.

Basically locks down archetypes. That could make it very OP =/. Tone it down a bit.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote name='xFirestarx' timestamp='1296089521' post='4963804']
I agree with metagross, I believe "no monsters can be Summoned that have a common word in their name as a card on the field. If there are monsters on the field with a common word in their name destroy them." is a little overpowered... Other than that, Love the card! good job! 7/10
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Holy crap it's "Summoned"! I read "Special Summoned." Summoned is a little much, SS cripples a lot already, especially since that's how a lot of Decks get themselves on the field. Blackwings have several cards that SS either themselves or others, as well as the Synchros can't be brought out easily anymore. Lightsworns generally count on Lumina to get on the field, the only problem you'd have is JD, which can sometimes be hard to get out anyway. Naturia generally SS a lot. Do you see where I'm getting at?

[The Greatness]

Alright I don't know if I tuned it down too much, too little, or just right so give me a second feedback on the new version.. Sorry I couldn't answer you guys directly after you replied but I was busy fixing a thread of a set I'm working on.