GaeBulg Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/8927/350833.jpg[/img] Rate&Feedback **updated the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ярополк Пономарёв Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 [quote name='GaeBulg' timestamp='1296130955' post='4964884'] [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/8927/350833.jpg[/img] Rate&Feedback [/quote] Allow me to fix the OCG, [Quote]When this card is Summoned, destroy 1 face-down Defense Position monster. If there is another "Abascus" card on the field other than this card, this card can attack your opponent's life points directly.[/quote] Other than that it's a cool card with a fair amount of balance and playability. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{VNS}MKCyrax Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 OP'ed decrease the ATK , make it 1900ish and Great art by the way Pretty good for a new member 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Corgi Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 [quote name='{VNS}MKCyrax' timestamp='1296132502' post='4964904'] OP'ed decrease the ATK , make it 1900ish [/quote] Agreed. Allthrough I'm not that nice today. I'll vote [b]7/10[/b] then. Because it's OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Good for 1st card but lsorry for sounding like a broken record, it is OP'd. The Pic is good...And OCG needs work. 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hentrik Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Its good for your first card but it is quite OP'd. Try making the effect the monster attacks directly with half of its attack points or make its attack points like 1800. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GaeBulg Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Thanks for the support guys (: and i guess i could make its attack halved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Some OCG errors this card is Op'ed when there are two of these on the field your opponent gets hit with 4600 points maybe if you lowered the ATK or made the effect halve it it wouldn't be Op'ed pic isn't so good but eh... i give yoou a 7/10 if you fix the Op'ed i'll give you a 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GaeBulg Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 updated the effect. Good?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBigCheese Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 For your first card it's not bad. The pic needs work, I can't actually see what it is, the effect is a little bit random and the OCG needs work. What needs to be said has already been said above. As I said though not bad for your first card keep going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlexHoward Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 [quote name='GaeBulg' timestamp='1296130955' post='4964884'] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/8927/350833.jpg[/img] Rate&Feedback **updated the effect [/quote] That is so Badass! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 ^ I @ I Wow ... This card is kinda good, although the 1st effect is kinda at of random. It's a less powerful version of Zaborg. The second effect, though, hits just the harder. I was thinking like "make it 2400 or 2500 atk" BUT when I read the second effect, I decided that would make it OP version of the monarchs, something we don't want (or at least I don't). With this, its inferiority in sheer strength to most Level 6 cards gives the "omg" effect just somewhat balance. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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