Serenity the Candyman Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 [spoiler= Serenity (Final Form)] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/750/73464fc.jpg[/img] Lore:If this card is in your hand during the first 5 turns of the game, remove this card from the game. This card can only be Special Summon by removing 5 DARK Monster Cards from your Deck and removing them from the game. When this card is sent to Graveyard from anywhere, you can select 1 card on the field and put it in the Graveyard instead of this card. At the End of the game, if this card is on your side of the field, you lose the Duel regardless who won. [/spoiler] Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GaeBulg Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 maybe add in "if this card is in your hand, reveal it to your opponent" lol...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Thank you for your comment....I was hoping for more, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 Finally he's got his name change... and 1000th post (pulls cork on party popper...) Wierd card that needs a bit of a re-write. Obviously the first part is just sheer luck if it's in the top 1/4 of your Deck or not. As for the auto-lose, I don't think its powerful enough to justify it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 [quote name='Bahamut ZERO' timestamp='1296210168' post='4967655'] Finally he's got his name change... and 1000th post (pulls cork on party popper...) Wierd card that needs a bit of a re-write. Obviously the first part is just sheer luck if it's in the top 1/4 of your Deck or not. As for the auto-lose, I don't think its powerful enough to justify it. [/quote] Well, the last effect iis there because he can make 1 card be destroyed in his place, which is really OP'd. I was trying to make it as balanced as possible and Give a new idea to what iif a card was like that out there, how would you play it so that he is gone before you the game ends. Its a plot twist! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronzegoldquake Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 I think its a little up'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 [quote name='Bronzegoldquake' timestamp='1296231975' post='4967964'] I think its a little up'd [/quote] Care to explain? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronzegoldquake Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 [size="2"]hahah sorry-that was a little brief. The first two effects make it hard to summon. It really only has 1 useful effect, "[font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]When this card is sent to Graveyard from anywhere, you can select 1 card on the field and put it in the Graveyard instead of this card." and even that isn't that amazing or powerful. Then the last effect is very harsh-you can't win with this card on the field-so its not very useful. Some of the ideas are good but if your going to give it so many drawbacks, its good effects better be amazing[/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GaeBulg Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 Book of moon it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 [quote name='Bronzegoldquake' timestamp='1296234036' post='4968021'] [size="2"]hahah sorry-that was a little brief. The first two effects make it hard to summon. It really only has 1 useful effect, "[font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"]When this card is sent to Graveyard from anywhere, you can select 1 card on the field and put it in the Graveyard instead of this card." and even that isn't that amazing or powerful. Then the last effect is very harsh-you can't win with this card on the field-so its not very useful. Some of the ideas are good but if your going to give it so many drawbacks, its good effects better be amazing[/font][/size] [/quote] Well the effect that you said that isnt quite as powerful as you want, Think about what could happen. If It is Attacked and Destroyed, send 1 card on the field to the Graveyard., its still there. Your opponent plays a card that would send it to the graveyard from your hand or deck. 1 card and it is safe. Yes I know the last effect is harsh, but that was the point of it. If this card existed, and was played, I wanted people to start thinking how they could still win with this card on yourside of the field.[quote name='GaeBulg' timestamp='1296234162' post='4968024'] Book of moon it [/quote] Wouldn't work.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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