Obelisk12 Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 This is my FIRST Realistic card. I hope you like it.------------------------------------------------------------------------- Please Rate and Comment!!!! Thanks:D:D:D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 hmmm...it's kinda underpowered actually. maybe u should make it 'dark magician girl's apprentice' nice pic and ocg. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 I lke it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Obelisk12 Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Thanks. So is it a good card for my FIRST Realistic Card. Thanks for the comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xth Haseo Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 I think it's decent but the name does need to be changed to DMGs Apprentice or DMGs Servant even. She looks more like a fairy then a spellcaster though...really reminds me of Injection Fairy Lily. I think you should add special summon from the deck to that and lose the +500 ATK so that she isn't limited to having to special summon DMG just from the graveyard. It would make her alot more usefull considering she only gets 400..that's a maximum of 1200..not very useful other then her special summoning effect. Bump the 400 up to either 500 or 600 it would make her maximum ATK potential be 1500 or 1800 respectfully. If you plan to keep her as a defensive creature..considering she needs to be destroyed by battle as a main effect..she needs a DEF increase not an ATK increase...keep that in mind. I give this card a 6 out of 10. It's usefull but by no means would it belong in a Tournament worthy deck in it's current state. Please take into consideration the options I mentioned above. One more thing DMG needs to stay on the field which makes Valkyria much more usefull then this card. Check out my card listing of my new pack for further examples on how I think cards should be written with decent effects while still maintaining a balanced not ban worthy effect properly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 It's cool ^_^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 I think the idea of this card could be improved on, the quality of the picture could be improved on, and the uniqueness fo the effect needs work. Once you correct all your errors and gain the needed experience for cardmaking, your work will be about perfect! For effort, I think you did a pretty good job! I'm really looking forward in seeing you make more cards! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 The pictures nice ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Obelisk12 Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Thanks. I like the pic a lot. I will take into consideration what you have all said and make my 2nd Realistic card the BEST you will ever see (maybe) lol THANKS ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 I hope so, good work ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Hmmm, Dark Magician Girl has been replaced by this as Dark Magician's apprentice? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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