WolfFan16 Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 [font="Verdana"][color="#2E8B57"][center]First time creating naruto cards but i think they came out fine. I just finished the Pain v. Naruto fight and said i need to make sage mode cards and so here they are. [img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/9848/225556a.jpg[/img] Lore:If this card is attacked while in Attack Position, you can change this card to Defense Position. Special Summon 1 "Shadow Clone Token" (Warrior-Type/LIGHT/Level 4/ATK 0/DEF 2000) during each of your Standby Phases in Defense Position as long as this card is in Attack Position. You can tribute this card and 2 "Shadow Clone Tokens" to Special Summon 1 "Naruto - Realized Sage" in Attack position from your hand or Deck. [img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/1428/225556rh.jpg[/img] Lore:This Monster may not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effects of "Naruto - Sage in Training" The Attribute of this card is also treated as WIND, WATER, FIRE, and EARTH. After 5 Turns that this card has been Special Summoned, place this card at the bottom of your Deck and Special Summon 1 "Naruto - Sage in Training" from your graveyard. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. And an unrelated card i made a while ago with a different image [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/5279/225556v.jpg[/img] Lore:"Classic Superman + Classic Batman" This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. When this card attacks, if this card's ATK is lower than the ATK of the attack target, this card gains 1000 ATK during damage calculation only.[/center][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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WolfFan16 Posted February 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 its really not that hard to comment... bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 Pretty good so far. OCG is far more consistent than most people who decide to create Naruto cards. A few slight errors here and there (as far as my knowledge of OCG is concerned). For Sage in Training: Tribute needs a capital. Position needs a capital (see last sentence). Realised Sage: Monster does not need a capital. May not should be changed to cannot. Effects in your second sentence should be changed to effect. You're missing a full stop between [b]"Naruto - Sage in Training"[/b] and [b]The Attribute[/b]. You're sentence that begins with [b]After 5 turns[/b] needs to be reworded. This is more an issue of standard grammar rather than OCG. Graveyard needs to be capitalised. I hope this is helpful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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