Antwo13 Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 [spoiler=Fiend of Illusions ] 1 LIGHT Tuner Monster + 1 non-tuner DARK monster This card cannot be selected as an attack target or as a target of Spell and Trap Cards. If your opponent has 3 or more face-up monster cards on their field this card is destroyed. [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/8813/342391q.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler= Dimensional Cyclopse ] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters You can Tribute this card to negate the activation of a Spell Card, Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect that removes from play a card(s) on the field, and destroy that card. If you negate an effect this way, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase. [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/4147/342391n.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Mechanoid Fairy Pyreon ] "Bionic Girl" + 1 FIRE Machine-type Monster Once per turn, you can switch this Face-Up Defense Position monster into Attack Position to negate the activation of an effect monster's effect and destroy it, then you can negate the first Attack of your opponents battle phase while this card is in face-up Attack position [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/8210/342391.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Mechanoid of the Galaxy] 1 Machine-type tuner + 2 non-tuner DARK machine-type monsters Once per turn you can remove 1 DARK machine type monster from your graveyard to destory 1 card. This card cannot be destoryed by monster effects. While this card is in Face-up Defense Position your opponent cannot attack any other monsters you control. [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/803/342391s.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Warrior of Dark Flames ] 1 FIRE Warrior Tuner + 1 DARK non-tuner monster This card can only be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon. This card cannot be targeted by effects and if destroyed by an effect, Special Summon it during the end phase. [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/4685/342391k.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Mechanoid of the Galaxy and Warrior of Dark Flames are very OP. It isn't easy killing a monster be it card effect or attack. The rest are better. Brilliant actually. 10/10. Seems balanced enough for me. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjaFe Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Well lets start... First of all shouldn't its name be Fiend not Feind? Just asking Well its UP. I mean its not that easy to summon him, and when you do if he's the only monster on your side of the field the opponent can attack you directly. Would change its eff to "Cannot be destroyed by battle" or something like that with the "Cannot b targeted by spells/traps" Dimensional Cyclopse is a exact copy of Stardust Dragon, only its Type and Attribute is changed. I know I know, the eff isn't same as Stardusts, but still, lack of imagination :/ Sorry The 3rd card "Mechanoid Fairy Pyreon" isn't that bad Reminds me of a certain Cyber dragon but then agian, I like it Would only change its effect from: "Once per turn, you can switch this Face-Up Defense Position monster into Attack Position to negate the activation of an effect monster's effect and destroy it, then you can negate the first Attack of your opponents battle phase while this card is in face-up Attack position" to: "Once per turn, you can switch this Face-Up Defense Position monster into Attack Position to negate the activation of an effect monster's effect and destroy it. [b]During your opponent Battle Phase you can negate the first Attack while this card is in face-up Attack position[/b]" I believe I don't need to point out how OP your 4th card is, right? First of all its Machine-Type and Graveyard. Would change its eff to maybe: "When you Synchro Summon this card you can Remove From Play all Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon it. Then destroy 1 card on the field for each DARK Machine-Type monster removed this way. Once per turn if this card is Face-Up on the field in Defense position you can Remove From Play 1 DARK Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard to change the attack target of your opponent monster to this card." 5th card is OP as well as I believe... I would either change its effect or lower its attack to maybe 2600~ish The correct OCG should be something like: "This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. This card cannot be targeted by card effects and if destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon it during the End Phase." Total rating: 7/10 Not bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Antwo13 Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 thanks, i know they seem over powered and i'll change some things and thanks for the tips ill start some editing later today. It's always good to get some feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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