Embittered Moon Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/8043/208217.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is summoned, destroy one Set card. When this card Attacks, you can Discard one FIRE monster to have this card gain 800 ATK. You can return this card to the Deck to Special Summon one FIRE monster from your Graveyard. C+C... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Wow, Nice card. I don't see no OCG problems, the pic is nice so, that's good. The effect is realistic so that's also nice. Good job overall. 9/10 P.S. [size="6"][color="#FF0000"]First Post FTW![/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 [quote name='†Marksman†' timestamp='1296421026' post='4974681'] Wow, Nice card. I don't see no OCG problems, the pic is nice so, that's good. The effect is realistic so that's also nice. Good job overall. 9/10 P.S. [size="6"][color="#FF0000"]First Post FTW![/color][/size] [/quote] Thanks for the comment... but are there any problems or suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4tutoralcom Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 [size="3"]I also like the card 9.8 out of 10. Only one OCG error i could find.[/size] [size="3"]At the very beginning the card says "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set."[/size] [size="3"] [/size] [size="3"]when it should be [/size] [size="3"] [/size] [size="3"]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned [/size] [size="3"] [/size] [size="3"]link for reference : http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Special_Summon-only_monsters[/size] [size="3"] [/size] [size="3"]I am not 100% sure about this but you also may need to say [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif] When this card is S[/font][/color]pecial Summoned ... [/size][size=2]not [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]When this card is summoned.[/font][/color][/size] [font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"][size=2] [/size][/color][/font] [font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"][size=2]after you fix or if i am wrong i give it a 10 out of 10[/size][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 [quote name='>>ŘÄĠĒ<<' timestamp='1296421160' post='4974685'] Thanks for the comment... but are there any problems or suggestions? [/quote] After what 4tutoral said, No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zror Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 Cool. Did you draw the picture yourself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted January 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 [quote name='zror' timestamp='1296442262' post='4975584'] Cool. Did you draw the picture yourself? [/quote] No, but glad you like it^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted February 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 [quote name='4tutoralcom' timestamp='1296423273' post='4974784'] [size="3"]At the very beginning the card says "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set." when it should be This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned [/size] [/quote] Since there's no specific requirements for a special summon, I don't think it needs "This card can only be Special Summoned." Thanks for the rate though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 not bad but a bit blotched with effects, maybe limit a couple of the effects or get rid of 1. Ocg is pretty good, not very original basically a granmarg + ATK boost + Special Summon from Graveyard, 7/10 at the moment not a bad job though keep it up just try to add a bit more originality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted February 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 [quote name='Bluster Soldier' timestamp='1296595192' post='4979320'] not bad but a bit blotched with effects, maybe limit a couple of the effects or get rid of 1. Ocg is pretty good, not very original basically a granmarg + ATK boost + Special Summon from Graveyard, 7/10 at the moment not a bad job though keep it up just try to add a bit more originality [/quote] Thanks for the feedback. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ B U M P . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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