Blaze Of Honor Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 [center][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/4687/355167.jpg[/img] [b]Post-Apocalyptic Recovery Android[/b] [b]Lore:[/b] [i]When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Recovery Token" to your field. During the Standby Phase of your turn, you can tribute 1 "Recovery Token" to add one card from the Graveyard to your hand, or 2 "Recovery Tokens" so you can Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard or hand. A monster Special Summoned by this card's effect cannot attack on the turn it is Special Summoned. [/i] Feedback would be appreciated. [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 Wow. Just, wow. A newbie, made an almost [i]exactly[/i] OCG-free card! The only problems i see is the word "hand". It should be capitalized, "Hand." Other than that a [b]PERFECT[/b] Card. U think it's rather realistic. Great job! Love the card, 10/10! Awesome job! P.S. [size="5"][color="#FF0000"]First Post FTW![/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 Hmmmm... only 2 errors but that's fine by me. ^^ You need to state the "Recovery Tokens" stats. Like this card: http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20090410033602/yugioh/images/d/d5/EmbodimentofApophisRP01-EN-ScR-UE.jpg [u]OCG Fixes[/u]: [list=1] [*]Change "hand" to Hand [*]Change "tribute" to Tribute. [/list] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blaze Of Honor Posted January 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 [quote name='†Marksman†' timestamp='1296516227' post='4977508'] Wow. Just, wow. A newbie, made an almost [i]exactly[/i] OCG-free card! The only problems i see is the word "hand". It should be capitalized, "Hand." Other than that a [b]PERFECT[/b] Card. U think it's rather realistic. Great job! Love the card, 10/10! Awesome job! P.S. [size="5"][color="#FF0000"]First Post FTW![/color][/size] [/quote] Not exactly a newbie; I was a user on this site back in 2007-2008. So I'm a returning card maker. But thanks for the feedback, both of you. I'll keep the Hand and Tribute in mind, as well as the Recovery Token stats. This is a part of the "End of Days" set I'm hoping to make soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 [quote name='Blaze Of Honor' timestamp='1296517168' post='4977550'] Not exactly a newbie; I was a user on this site back in 2007-2008. So I'm a returning card maker. But thanks for the feedback, both of you. I'll keep the Hand and Tribute in mind, as well as the Recovery Token stats. This is a part of the "End of Days" set I'm hoping to make soon. [/quote] That explains it! Anyhow, Other than that - I'll be on the lookout for the set. One more thing, Your welcome for the feedback - Always glad to give it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 [b][color="#A0522D"]What are you saying ?! no errors !! "so you can" WHAT !!! change it "to Special Summon a monster..". "During the Standby Phase of your turn," It should be "During your Standby Phase,". "one" should be in numbers. "on the turn.." should be "during the turn.."[/color] [color="#8B0000"]Hand should not be in cap.. I think.[/color] [color="#A0522D"]You siad "from the Graveyard" then said "your hand" so you can use bothe graveyards ?! I hope not, it could be OP. The second effect will be more clear when you add the stats.[/color] [color="#8B0000"]7.2/10.[/color] [color="#F4A460"]Card Info = 0.8/1 | OCG = 0.5/1 | Usefulness = 1.6/2 | Balance = 1.7/2 | Originality = 1/2 | Concept = 1.6/2[/color][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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