Red Dragon Archfiend's new form

[Serenity the Candyman]

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Lore:
1 Synchro Tuner Monster + "Red Dragon Archfiend"
When this card is Summoned, all monsters are changed to Defense Position (except this card). If your opponent Summons a monster, it is Summoned in Defense Position. Spell and Trap Cards cannot be activated as long as this card is face-up on the field. When your opponent's monster declares an attack you can select it, then remove this card from play and negate the attack. During the End Phase, Special Summon this card that was removed from play by this effect. When this card is Special Summoned, increase this cards ATK equal to half the negated monster's ATK.

enjoy!

[Squirrel Girl]

1 Synchro Tuner Monster + "Red Dragon Archfiend"
When this card [b]is Summoned[/b], [b]all monsters are changed to Defense Position (except this card) and destroy them[/b]. Spell and Trap Cards cannot be activated [b]as long as[/b] this card is [b]face-up[/b] on the field. When your opponent's monster declares an attack, increase this [b]cards[/b] ATK equal to half the attacking monsters ATK. [b]If your opponent Summons a monster, it is Summoned in Defense Position.[/b]

All black things are changed from the first effect.

Now to the card. It's good but a little OP imo. And it needs an effect that you can remove it from play to negate the attack of 1 monster your opponent controls and then it is Special Summoned. That is how Accel monsters is.

You should delete the effect that destroy all Defense Position monsters cause that effect is to OP. If you want it more balanced, just say. But now, it gets 5/10 fro the OP part

[Serenity the Candyman]

ok, thank you


fixed

[Squirrel Girl]

Now it is better. But I think you should change the last effect until your next End Phase or something. Cause I think that effect makes it a little, little OP. But it get a 8/10