Danny Thomas Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 My first card creation. [edited]<br><br>[img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/4714/355284z.jpg[/img]<br> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 [quote name='Danny Thomas' timestamp='1296527034' post='4978003'] My first card creation. [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/3264/355284.jpg[/img] [/quote] You don't Have to put effect 1 or effect 2. Also, it should read as thus: When this card is sent to the Graveyard you can Special Summon 1 level 3 monster from your deck. If you activate this effect you can also Special Summon any other "Orb of Tristis" cards from your deck. I'll admit it's a little OP. just give it a cost like discarding a card or an LP cost or the monsters can't be tributed, used as synchro material, attack, change battle position, reduced stats, etc. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny Thomas Posted February 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 Thanks for the indication. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 [quote name='Danny Thomas' timestamp='1296527708' post='4978023'] Thanks for the indication. [/quote] You're welcome. Check out my Yokai cards while you're at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman†Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 Theres a few OCG errors, (I will fix below) pictures nice and the effects are okay! Overall nice job. I rate it...Hmm. Hard decision. I'll rate 7.5/10! OCG fixes: graveyard = Graveyard deck = Deck summon = Summon field = Field ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I think that's it, Anyhow - Only other thing is one word's grammar fail (users should be user's) Hope you take the time to look through! You did epic for your first card, Just capitalization failures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 I fix the ocg tomorrow. However field should spell like this "field" ha. Butj still, the ocg needs work, other than that, good for a new member, it seems kind of balanced 8/10 I think you should get a new pic though. I dont think it fit the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 Am I the only one who sees a card that somewhat resembles rescue cat? It's a level 3, when it goes to the grave you get another one (at least) and then a level 3 (most likely a tuner). That can easily break this card. And since it only needs to be sent to the Grave, discarding it counts as well. I'll admit, for a new member it is good, but it just seems to be rescue cat all over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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