Y2Jgrave Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 [center]First Of All,If you click this tread, you might as well comment on it! For every helpful comments/reviews will be given a rep. Unlike most sets now that I see,this set does feature any archetype so it will be like the decks/sets seen in the original yugioh series and it will be short cause yeah..I'm working on another set. So yeah here we go.. [b][color="#FF0000"][size="7"]FLAMES FROM BEYONDS[/size][/color][/b] IMG credit goes to JazinKay [color="#FF0000"][b]THE BOOSTER PACK[/b][/color] [img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/5259/stemp3.png[/img] [font="Lucida Sans Unicode"][b]LOW LEVEL MONSTERS[/b][/font] [spoiler='Rothus, the Traveler LV3'][img]http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/8524/271836.jpg[/img] LORE This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. During your Standby Phase, by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Rothus, the Traveler LV5 from your hand or Deck.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Ignis Baron The Immortal'][img]http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/8524/271836.jpg[/img] LORE While you control another face-up FIRE monster, this card cannot be attacked. Inflict 700 damage to your opponent during the End Phase of your turn. This card is also treated as a Continuous Trap card while in the Graveyard.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Brawler Zyler '][img]http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/2784/271836n.jpg[/img] LORE This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 FIRE monster from your hand to your Graveyard. When this card destroys your opponent's monster and sends it to the Graveyard as a result of battle, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Magmarex Volcanicbot'][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/4370/271836i.jpg[/img] LORE While face-up on the field, this card is also treated as a Machine-type monster. Once per turn during your Battle Phase, you can remove from play 1 Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard to destroy 1 monster your opponent control and inflict damage equal to that monster's Level x100.If you activate this card's effect,this card cannot attack during this turn.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Deadly Fighter Braid '][img]http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/5100/271836x.jpg[/img] LORE If this card battles a monster whose ATK is equal to or less than the ATK of this card, you can destroy the monster immediately with this card's effect without applying damage calculation, and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monster's Level X300[/spoiler] [font="Lucida Sans Unicode"][b]MID LEVEL MONSTERS[/b][/font] [spoiler='Rothus, the Traveler LV5'][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/4062/271836c.jpg[/img] LORE You can make this card lose 1000 ATK. If you do, Special Summon 1 Machine-Type or 1 FIRE monster with 1000 ATK or less from your Graveyard. This card cannot attack on the turn this effect's activated.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Twin-Cannon Wyvern'][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/3638/271836we.jpg[/img] LORE Once per turn, you can discard 1 FIRE monster to have this card gain ATK equal to that monsters' Level x200. When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls by battle, destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap card your opponent controls and inflict 600 damage to your opponent. When this card is in your Graveyard, it is also treated as a Continuous Trap Card.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Magmadragon Jagalzor'][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/5830/271836m.jpg[/img] LORE When this card is Special Summoned, return 2 remove from play cards to your Graveyard.When this card destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard, destroy all Spell Cards your opponent controls and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each Spell Card destroyed by this effect.[/spoiler] [font="Lucida Sans Unicode"][b]HIGH LEVEL MONSTERS[/b][/font] [spoiler='Bolshack Dragon/Assault Mode '][img]http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/8524/271836.jpg[/img] LORE This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with "Assault Mode Activate".When this card destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard, destroy all monsters your opponent controls and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each monster destroyed by this effect. When this card on the field is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Bolshack Dragon" from your Graveyard.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Bolmeteus Steel Dragon'][img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/2412/271836e.jpg[/img] LORE This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summon by having exactly 2 or more FIRE Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard. Each time this card destroy a monster your opponent control,randomly discard 1 card from your opponent's hand. If the discarded card was a Monster Card, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the monster x 100.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Rothus, the Traveler LV7'][img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/645/271836f.jpg[/img] LORE This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card cannot be Special Summon except by Tributing 1 Rothus, the Traveler LV5. While this card is face-up on the field or in your Graveyard, it is treated as a Machine-type monster. Each time this card destroy a monster your opponent control, select 2 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard. Return those cards to your Deck, then draw 2 cards.[/spoiler] [font="Lucida Sans Unicode"][b]EXTRA DECK[/b][/font] [spoiler='Bolshack Dragon(Trump Card)'][IMG]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/31/bolshackdragon.gif[/IMG] LORE 1 FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s) When this card is Synchro Summoned, select 1 face-up Spell Card your opponent controls and negate it's effect until End Phase. During your opponent's Battle Phase, all Attack Position monsters your opponent controls must attack this card. When this card destroys a monster and sent it to the Graveyard by battle, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monster's Level x 200.[/spoiler] [color="#00FF00"][b][font="Lucida Sans Unicode"]SPELLS[/font][/b][/color] [spoiler='Deal With The Lord Of Flames'][IMG]http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/3236/lgx52.png[/IMG] LORE Activate only if you have 2 or more FIRE monsters in your hand. Pay 2000 Life Points and discard all FIRE monsters in your hand. Special Summon 1 "Uria Lord Of Searing Flames" or 1 "Bolshack Dragon" from your Graveyard,ignoring its Summoning conditions. The Special Summoned monster cannot attack and activate its effect during this turn. [/spoiler] [color="#FF00FF"][b][font="Lucida Console"]TRAPS[/font][/b][/color] [spoiler='Combustible Collective'][IMG]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/1337/493pxdm28.jpg[/IMG] Active only if you have 3 or more Continuous Trap Cards in your Graveyard.Pay 1000 Life Points and send 1 Level 7 or higher Pyro-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard to Select 1 FIRE monster your control and inflict damage equal to that monster's original ATK. [/spoiler] [b]COMMENT/RATE/HATE/WHATEVER[/b] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreyCat Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 I like them. The images are nice too. I think 700 points per turn is a bit much though, so Ignis a a bit OP in my opinion. I'm definitely not an expert on OCG, but I see a few grammer errors: [quote] While you control another FIRE monster, this card cannot be [i]selected[/i] as an attack target. Inflict 700 [i]points of[/i] damage to your opponent during the End Phase of your turn. While this card is in your Graveyard, it is also treated as a Continuous Trap Card This card cannot be Normal [i]Summoned[/i] or Set. This card can only be Special [i]Summoned[/i] by sending 1 FIRE monster from your hand to your Graveyard. When this card destroys your opponent's monster and sends it to the Graveyard as a result of battle, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. [/quote] Overall- 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 [center][quote name='GreyCat' timestamp='1296627065' post='4980978'] I like them. The images are nice too. I think 700 points per turn is a bit much though, so Ignis a a bit OP in my opinion. I'm definitely not an expert on OCG, but I see a few grammer errors: Overall- 8/10 [/quote] thanks mate! ocg fixed![/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 [b][center]added the trump card!! so BUMP[/center][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 [center][b]BUMP PEOPLE BUMP[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted February 3, 2011 Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 Only two cards stood out of the rest: - Rothus the Traveler Lv 5 has some potential with Cyber Valley, Tuningware, Celfon, etc. I like it. - Deal with the Lord of Flames is OP'ed. I'm not saying Uria is banworthy, just summoning it by paying a few life points and *if you ever have to use the discard the FIRE monsters* cost, it becomes a cheap summon. You can try to rework the effect though to something more unique. The other cards seemed mehish. Nice start though. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 [center][quote name='Archelaus' timestamp='1296739333' post='4984619'] Only two cards stood out of the rest: - Rothus the Traveler Lv 5 has some potential with Cyber Valley, Tuningware, Celfon, etc. I like it. - Deal with the Lord of Flames is OP'ed. I'm not saying Uria is banworthy, just summoning it by paying a few life points and *if you ever have to use the discard the FIRE monsters* cost, it becomes a cheap summon. You can try to rework the effect though to something more unique. The other cards seemed mehish. Nice start though. 7/10 [/quote] Thanks mate! anyway..any idea on how I can tone [b]Deal with the Lord of Flames[/b] down? [b]Also, added 3 new cards so BUMP[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 using fire monster form dual monster pics some one new to here ............ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 [center][quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1296806441' post='4986526'] using fire monster form dual monster pics some one new to here ............ [/quote] LOL..that made my day! I know it screams rip offs all over but I found the most of the pics from JazinKay so why not? Anyway about the cards? good or bad or just meh?[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｍｒ．Ｒｏｂｏｔ Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 aside from the duel master thing..I think it's quite a good set alone. Also, it's nice to see a set which isn't occupied by archetypes once in a while. Nice start btw so a 7.5/10 for me dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 [quote name='Y2JgraveVStheWORLD' timestamp='1296802949' post='4986461'] [center] Thanks mate! anyway..any idea on how I can tone [b]Deal with the Lord of Flames[/b] down?[/center] [/quote] You can add an activation condition and another limitation: [b]Activate only if you have 2 or more FIRE monsters in your hand.[/b] Pay 2000 Life Points and discard all FIRE monsters in your hand. Special Summon 1 "Uria Lord Of Searing Flames" or 1 "Bolshack Dragon" from your Graveyard. The Special Summoned monster cannot attack and [b]activate its effect[/b] during this turn. I also fixed the OCG so it'll be nice and easier to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 They are kinda awesome. Treating them as continuous traps while in the graveyard is a nice, fresh and creative concept. I'll fix the OCG for you: [b]Rothus, the Traveler LV3[/b] This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. During your Standby Phase, by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Rothus, the Traveler LV5 from your hand or Deck. [b]Ignis Baron The Immortal[/b] While you control another face-up FIRE monster, this card cannot be attacked. Inflict 700 damage to your opponent during the End Phase of your turn. This card is also treated as a Continuous Trap card while in the Graveyard. [b]Brawler Zyler[/b] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 FIRE monster from your hand to your Graveyard. When this card destroys your opponent's monster and sends it to the Graveyard as a result of battle, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. [b]Magmarex Volcanibot[/b] While face-up on the field, this card is also treated as a Machine-type monster. Each time during your Battle Phase, this card gains 400 ATK for every Machine-type monster in your Graveyard. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.You can also Special Summon up to 2 "Magmarex Volcanicbot" from your Deck in face-up Attack Position. When this card is in your Graveyard, it is also treated as a Continuous Trap Card. This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster while face-up on the field. During each of your Battle Phases, this card gains 400 ATK for each Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard. [b]Rothus, the Traveler LV5[/b] You can make this card lose 1000 ATK. If you do, Special Summon 1 Machine-Type or 1 FIRE monster with 1000 ATK or less from your Graveyard. This card cannot attack on the turn this effect's activated. [b]Twin Cannon Wyvern[/b] Once per turn, you can discard 1 FIRE monster to have this card gain ATK equal to that monsters' Level x200. When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls by battle, destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap card your opponent controls and inflict 600 damage to your opponent. When this card is in your Graveyard, it is also treated as a Continuous Trap Card. [b]Magmadragon Jagalzor[/b] When this card is Tribute Summoned, select 3 Pyro-Type monsters in your Graveyard. Return those cards to your Deck, then draw 2 cards. Each time this card destroy 1 monster your opponent controls, discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand. If the discarded card was a Monster Card, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of that monster x 100. [b]Bolshack Dragon[/b] 1 FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s) When this card is Synchro Summoned, select 1 face-up Spell Card your opponent controls and negate it's effect until End Phase. During your opponent's Battle Phase, all Attack Position monsters your opponent controls must attack this card. When this card destroys a monster and sent it to the Graveyard by battle, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monster's Level x 200. This deserves a 8,5/10 after the OCG fixes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 [center]@Nexus, thanks mate!!love you for that @Archelaus, thanks!!+rep for your helpfulness @CDDRodrigo, woo nelly! if I could double rep I would [b]anyway...ocg's fixed so it's great as a virgin so BUMP[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 Glad to be of help, and I love reps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 [center][quote name='CDDRodrigo' timestamp='1296838700' post='4986986'] Glad to be of help, and I love reps [/quote] Everybody need a little help sometimes[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 dude every one take from jazenkalin pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 So? Is that important in any way? Taking pics from other card games is okay imo, but taking the same names... I mean anyone who ever watched Duel Masters will recognize Rothus, Ignis and Zyler. For the effect of being treated as traps in the graveyard, is there going to be support to fish them out? No support around this trap-feature yet, as far as I can see. Now reviews on the cards: [b]Rothus LV3[/b]: Simple LV monster, nothing to really tell about. 6/10 [b]Ignis Baron[/b]: This card exists already? [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Solar_Flare_Dragon"]Solar Flare Dragon[/url] Granted, this isn't treated as Continous Trap while in the Graveyard, but why do your cards anyway? 7/10 [b]Brawler Zyler[/b]: This card is okay I guess. It's a little close to Inferno for my taste, but it's okay. And every archtype needs stuff to Special Summon. 9/10 [b]Magmarex[/b]: I went nuts seing this. Gains 400 ATK for every machine type in your Graveyard? No. Just... It's easy to fill your Graveyard with machines. Cyber Dragon. Karakuri. Gadgets. There are just too many machines. This guy would skyrocket over 3000 easily. Broken. Broken/10 [b]Rothus LV 5[/b]: Probably the best card in the set? With the Broken Magmarex, this is broken too, but forget about that. The effect is really good. 9/10 [b]Twin-Canon Wyvern[/b]: Really high potential ATK power. Disregarding the ATK increasing effect, a balanced ATK power seems to be 2400. Now you get 200 per level of the monster discarded. Counting 6 stars as avarage, this leaves this card with 1200 ATK for itself, not 2300. Now since you can't always discard, you can go a little higher, like 1500. But I'd recommend 100 per level instead, and make its base ATK 2000. 7/10 [b]Jagalzor[/b]: Just not fair. +2 for the lulz to begin with. Also potential +1 every turn. No. Just no. broken/10 [b]Bolshack[/b]: Not too OP'ed I think. But for the avarage archtype boss it lacks a proper price. Like pay 1000 Life Points during every turn or negate this cards effect. Or Tribute 1 monster during your End Phase (means this card if it's your only one) 7/10 [b]Deal with the lord[/b]: Are you aware Uria cannot be special summoned? Make it either summon the bolshack guy or add uria to your hand. Bolshack is okay though, otherwise this would be unplayable. 6/10 Overall 51/70, or 73%, not bad. This is without calculating the 2 broken cards though. As they would be calculated as 0/10, that would make 56%. So work on those 2 please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 no skythief i meant that they take pics form jazinKay ablum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 [center]@Skythief, awesome!! I'll fix what need to be fix later on..+rep for you @judedudemude, stop trolling! if you cared to much about duel master go some place else![/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 i dont care for duel master as matter as fact i hate it skyteif thought i said one thing but i was just trying to make it crstyal clear about alot of people taking pictures from jazinKay's ablum sorry for any confusion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 [center][b]BUMP[/b] FIXED THE BROKEN CARDS SO [b]BUMP[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 [center][b]Added a new card[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dokktorawesome Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 great pics reasonable effect and reasonable atk and def VERY GOOD 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 I noticed most of the pictures were off Duel Master's cards. Anyways that's of no importance. The cards are pretty good themselves and I like how there Pyro-Type and Machine-Type, pretty cool. Overall I only see a couple of OCG errors, but I can still understand the card's effects. Good job on the cards. 8' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2011 [center]@yugiohbakuganpokemon, thanks...that's all I can say @♣Master♣,thanks mate though the pics are mostly from Jazinkay's archive..anyway..might you point out the ocg errors? please and thank you! [b]Added 3 new cards so BUMP[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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