†Marksman† Posted February 3, 2011 Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 Okay guys, I'm going to try to make this short. Anyhow, Just made a new Archetype, (As i think it's a Archetype...) named the 'Battle Machines.' I really hope you guys enjoy this, As this is my first every Archetype thingy. Let's get right into it, Heres the cards! =3 [Spoiler=Battle Machines] [Spoiler=Battle Machine - Jack5] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/2080/353548.jpg[/img] Lore: Raise this card's ATK and DEF by 500 for every "Battle Machine" monster you have in your Hand. If you do not have another "Battle Machine" card in your Hand, destroy this card. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Battle Machine - Tron5] [img]http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/2080/353548.jpg[/img] Lore: If you have a "Battle Machine" in your Graveyard, you may tribute 500 LP to return it to your Hand. If you do not have any "Battle Machine" cards in your Graveyard, decrease your LP by 500. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Battle Machine - Neon] [img]http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/2080/353548.jpg[/img] Lore: During the turn this card was set, tribute 1 "Battle Machine" to add the amount of ATK that the tributed monster had to this card. [/Spoiler] [/Spoiler] [b][size="5"]I will, for a fact - Update actively. CnC Appreciated! =3[/size][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronzegoldquake Posted February 3, 2011 Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 I think your supposed to say "Life Points" instead of LP and I also think its pay 500 Life Points rather than tribute. They don't seem to have much correlation between each other(the cards) but I guess that's not necessarily bad. My biggest issue with the cards are the pictures, I really don't like it when there are white or black backgrounds(not too be harsh or anything). 4/10 I think you have potential but when making an archtype, I think, its important to give them a theme which is different than any other archtype previously made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 [quote name='Bronzegoldquake' timestamp='1296698222' post='4983801'] I think your supposed to say "Life Points" instead of LP and I also think its pay 500 Life Points rather than tribute. They don't seem to have much correlation between each other(the cards) but I guess that's not necessarily bad. My biggest issue with the cards are the pictures, I really don't like it when there are white or black backgrounds(not too be harsh or anything). 4/10 I think you have potential but when making an archtype, I think, its important to give them a theme which is different than any other archtype previously made. [/quote] Thanks for the feedback! Will consider this when making more cards for this Archetype, and any other Archetypes. Hopefully i'll look harder for better pictures..I just search on google. =3 Once again, Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronzegoldquake Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 don't get me wrong these aren't bad cards. They just don't seem to work as an archetype. for images use pixiv.net or jazin kay's archive. Those are always good places. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 Alrighty, Thank you. I'll make sure to look at those, I really needed a different website. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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