Lucky Star

[Kagami Hiiragi]

 

If you control another "Lucky Star" monster, your opponent cannot select any card besides this card as an attack target.

 

If this card is targeted by an opponents card effect you may special summon one "Lucky Star" monster in your graveyard. As long as this card remains face up on the field no other "Lucky Star" monsters can be targeted by effects. You may only control one "Lucky Star - Yutaka Kobayakawa" on your side of the field.

 

While you control another face-up "Lucky Star" monster, this card can attack your opponent directly. If you control no monsters, you may special summon this card from your graveyard during your standby phase.

 

When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard you may add one "Lucky Star" monster from your deck to your hand.

 

When this card is summoned while another "Lucky Star" monster is on the field, you may change the battle position of one monster on the field.

 

Once per turn you may add one "Lucky Star" card in your graveyard to your hand. If you do so this card cannot attack this turn.

 

Discard this card from your hand to negate the attack of one opponents monster against one "Lucky Star" monster you control and end the battle phase.

 

One per turn this card cannot be destroyed in battle. If a face up "Lucky Star" monster would be attacked, you may change the attack to this monster.

 

You may tribute one face up "Lucky Star" monster to negate the activation of one spell or trap card and destroy it.

 

As long as this card remains face up on the field, "Lucky Star" monsters cannot be removed from play.

 

All "Lucky Star" monsters on the field gain ATK equal to their DEF when in attack position. Once per turn during your turn you may negate the effect of one "Lucky Star" monster to have its name and effect treated the same as one other face up "Lucky Star" monster you control until the end phase.

 

Once per turn during your standby phase, you can pay 500 life points to special summon one "Lucky Star" monster from you hand or graveyard if you control a face up "Lucky Star" card.

 

This card can only be special summoned from the extra deck by sending the above cards from the field to the graveyard. This card can attack twice each battle phase. If this card is removed from the field you can send one of the fusion material monsters listed on this card from the graveyard to your hand.

 

This card can only be special summoned from the extra deck by sending the above cards from the field to the graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK for each "Lucky Star" monster in your graveyard. If this card would be destroyed in battle and sent to the graveyard you can discard 2 "Lucky Star" monsters from your hand to the graveyard instead.

 

This monster can only be summoned by sending the above cards from the field to the graveyard. This monster can attack once for every other "Lucky Star" monster you control. If this card is removed from the field, you can send one "Lucky Star - Konata Izumi" from your graveyard to your deck and shuffle your deck.

 

Negate the effect of one spell or trap card that would remove one or more "Lucky Star" monsters from the field and destroy it then draw 1 card.

[Exa Raiun]

My first note about these cards is that the the total of ATK and DEF of these cards is 2000 for all the cards. Was that intentional? Now for the individual cards:

 

Tsukasa Hiiragi - Can be used well with cards like "Raregold Armor" for an easy lock, or with "Heart of Clear Water" so they won't destroy this monster. A bit tricky, but can be effective in the right hands.

Yutaka Kobayakawa - The comment about "Heart of Clear Water" applies to this card too. The effect of this card is a bit odd - your opponent just won't target this card as the target of an effect most likely.

Kagami Hiiragi - I think you missed an "other than this one" part from the first effect - the way it is worded now means it can attack directly all the time, as it counts as a "Lucky Star" monster itself. Either way, it makes for an average direct attacker, the Special Summon effect can give it a secondary usage as Tribute / Synchro fodder, though.

Miyuki Takara - The effect does not state from where this card is sent to the Graveyard. Did you mean it in a way so it does not matter? Or did you just forget the "from the field" part?

Konata Izumi - There are other cards which possess a similar effect and in an easier to use way.

Ayano Minegishi - If you can keep this card on the field, you can get a hand advantage - either for discard effects, Tribute / Synchro fodders, or something like that. Keeping on the field is a hard task, though, as it has no internal protection.

Hiyori Tamura - A somewhat weaker effect compared to the one of "Battle Fader", with slightly higher stats.

Minami Iwasaki - A curious protection effect, I have to admit. There are other ways to get a similar effect, but can work.

Patricia Martin - Interesting effect, but just like the Yutaka card - your opponent will most likely get rid of this card first with raw power.

Misao Kusakabe - Again, the effect is pretty cool, but with these stats, it just won't survive.

 

The concept is curious as a novelty Deck, but these cards are actually pretty weak. Most of them would require the support of cards like "Gravity Bind", "Heart of Clear Water" and other defensive stuff to just keep them on the field. And as they have no effective attackers, even if you manage to protect them, you cannot really inflict damage. I know, they are just schoolgirls.,,

[Guest • Ω Kakashi Hatake Ω •]

Ha ha! You finally got your Lucky Star set up! I'm not exactly what you would call a "Card Rater" but I'll try. xD

 

Ok, the first thing I noticed is that the images are all pretty basic. Try to find some that are more flashy. Also, even though it is a Lucky Star set, the effects are kinda simple on some of them.

 

7/10?

[Kagami Hiiragi]

My first note about these cards is that the the total of ATK and DEF of these cards is 2000 for all the cards. Was that intentional? Now for the individual cards:

 

Tsukasa Hiiragi - Can be used well with cards like "Raregold Armor" for an easy lock, or with "Heart of Clear Water" so they won't destroy this monster. A bit tricky, but can be effective in the right hands.

Yutaka Kobayakawa - The comment about "Heart of Clear Water" applies to this card too. The effect of this card is a bit odd - your opponent just won't target this card as the target of an effect most likely.

Kagami Hiiragi - I think you missed an "other than this one" part from the first effect - the way it is worded now means it can attack directly all the time, as it counts as a "Lucky Star" monster itself. Either way, it makes for an average direct attacker, the Special Summon effect can give it a secondary usage as Tribute / Synchro fodder, though.

Miyuki Takara - The effect does not state from where this card is sent to the Graveyard. Did you mean it in a way so it does not matter? Or did you just forget the "from the field" part?

Konata Izumi - There are other cards which possess a similar effect and in an easier to use way.

Ayano Minegishi - If you can keep this card on the field, you can get a hand advantage - either for discard effects, Tribute / Synchro fodders, or something like that. Keeping on the field is a hard task, though, as it has no internal protection.

Hiyori Tamura - A somewhat weaker effect compared to the one of "Battle Fader", with slightly higher stats.

Minami Iwasaki - A curious protection effect, I have to admit. There are other ways to get a similar effect, but can work.

Patricia Martin - Interesting effect, but just like the Yutaka card - your opponent will most likely get rid of this card first with raw power.

Misao Kusakabe - Again, the effect is pretty cool, but with these stats, it just won't survive.

 

The concept is curious as a novelty Deck, but these cards are actually pretty weak. Most of them would require the support of cards like "Gravity Bind", "Heart of Clear Water" and other defensive stuff to just keep them on the field. And as they have no effective attackers, even if you manage to protect them, you cannot really inflict damage. I know, they are just schoolgirls.,,

I intended them all to add up to 2000. i had a spell card in mind that may have something to do with that.

Kagami - will edit

Miyuki - will edit

Kotana - now that you mention the effect in that way i will probably need a whole new idea for her card. suggestions?

Patricia - suggestions?

 

to go with all of the cards i will have support in my next set.

 

Ha ha! You finally got your Lucky Star set up! I'm not exactly what you would call a "Card Rater" but I'll try. xD

 

Ok, the first thing I noticed is that the images are all pretty basic. Try to find some that are more flashy. Also, even though it is a Lucky Star set, the effects are kinda simple on some of them.

 

7/10?

 

if you could help me find images i would change them but im not a good hunter for that sort of thing

and im open to suggestions for revised effects if you have em

[Exa Raiun]

Actually, I am not really knowledgable about the show - I only watched a few episodes from it, so I am not really sure what kind of effect would be both flavorful and useful. About the support card you mentioned - you made me really curious, what kind of Spell Card would make it effective in one way or another?

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Trying to think up extra effects for those monsters that were mentioned, I can also go pic hunting for you. Konata could be something like ""Lucky Star" monster cannot be destroyed by battle" since they're so weak, give you a couple more options for an attack lockdown, then that would make Patricia's effect a little more valuable, though I would make it so it prevents all effects, not just spells and traps, since most destruction usually comes from monsters now.

 

I'll get back to you on the pics.

[Kagami Hiiragi]

Actually, I am not really knowledgable about the show - I only watched a few episodes from it, so I am not really sure what kind of effect would be both flavorful and useful. About the support card you mentioned - you made me really curious, what kind of Spell Card would make it effective in one way or another?

I was thinking about it being a field spell or a continuous spell

"All "Lucky Star" monsters on the field gain ATK equal to their defense when in attack position. Once per turn during your turn you may negate the effect of one "Lucky Star" monster to have its name and effect treated the same as one other face up "Lucky Star" monster you control until the end phase."

 

Trying to think up extra effects for those monsters that were mentioned, I can also go pic hunting for you. Konata could be something like ""Lucky Star" monster cannot be destroyed by battle" since they're so weak, give you a couple more options for an attack lockdown, then that would make Patricia's effect a little more valuable, though I would make it so it prevents all effects, not just spells and traps, since most destruction usually comes from monsters now.

 

I'll get back to you on the pics.

thanks a ton and i will definitely keep that in mind

 

Actually, I am not really knowledgable about the show - I only watched a few episodes from it, so I am not really sure what kind of effect would be both flavorful and useful. About the support card you mentioned - you made me really curious, what kind of Spell Card would make it effective in one way or another?

also i need ideas for trap cards if you can think of an effect that would support these

[Exa Raiun]

For the support Spell, I recommend it being a Field Spell Card to avoid having multiple copies on the field and getting the bonus several times. The secondary effect can work too, to help with creating the lock. I am also going to look for the Trap Cards you are going to make.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Unfortunately, I'm not familiar with the show, so I can't rate on how well the cards cover the characters. So, I'll rate it based on playability and OCG.

 

Anyway, these are interesting cards. OCG is fairly good, with the only mistakes I see being small (albeit repetitive) ones, such as "may" should be "can" and "one" should be "1". Playability-wise, this makes for an interesting stall/lockdown set. However, the poor stats are killer here. If you plan on continuing this set, I would recommend you make:

-Card to boost the ATK/DEF of each monster. Think Limiter Removal or something.

-Summon engine card to allow for swarming. Think Six Samurai.

 

Those are my suggestions for the future. For right now though, I actually like that their base stats are low. This allows for searchability. Gravity Bind is a must for this set too. Overall I like it. It just needs to be refined some to allow for playability. 7/10 for now.

[Kagami Hiiragi]

For the support Spell, I recommend it being a Field Spell Card to avoid having multiple copies on the field and getting the bonus several times. The secondary effect can work too, to help with creating the lock. I am also going to look for the Trap Cards you are going to make.

field spell it is then. ill post a topic as soon as i have the next part done. thanks for your help ^^

 

Unfortunately, I'm not familiar with the show, so I can't rate on how well the cards cover the characters. So, I'll rate it based on playability and OCG.

 

Anyway, these are interesting cards. OCG is fairly good, with the only mistakes I see being small (albeit repetitive) ones, such as "may" should be "can" and "one" should be "1". Playability-wise, this makes for an interesting stall/lockdown set. However, the poor stats are killer here. If you plan on continuing this set, I would recommend you make:

-Card to boost the ATK/DEF of each monster. Think Limiter Removal or something.

-Summon engine card to allow for swarming. Think Six Samurai.

 

Those are my suggestions for the future. For right now though, I actually like that their base stats are low. This allows for searchability. Gravity Bind is a must for this set too. Overall I like it. It just needs to be refined some to allow for playability. 7/10 for now.

ive got the atk boost almost ready.

ill try to do my best with the OCG

and im not sure what i could do with the summon engine. any thoughts?

[krazyxgamer]

holy crap it's exa!

i haven't seen you for so long lol

 

anyways, the cards

 

i like it mostly

 

ok pics, OCG is good enough, effects are not boring so it's nice

 

8/10

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Hey nice cards lucky star what are they from?

Um...their from Lucky Star...

 

Anyway, I like the continuous spell since it's like Valhalla, but a lot stronger since you can actually use more than 1 per turn consistently. I'm trying to think of another way to say your field's second effect, since I think if you negate the monster's effect they can't use their new effect either.

[Ginko]

lmfao. i love this anime and this set is great

my only questionis wheres akira-sama? she would have a crazy-good effect. lol

i love the effects in which i give this set an 8/10

you could make the cards stronger, so your field spell gives them more of an advantage.

 

and @metagross

WHERE DID YOU GET THAT AVATAR!?!?! I WANT IT!!!!!!!!1

[Kagami Hiiragi]

holy crap it's exa!

i haven't seen you for so long lol

 

anyways, the cards

 

i like it mostly

 

ok pics, OCG is good enough, effects are not boring so it's nice

 

8/10

thank you ^^

im open to ideas for good card effects and pictures if you have any

 

Um...their from Lucky Star...

 

Anyway, I like the continuous spell since it's like Valhalla, but a lot stronger since you can actually use more than 1 per turn consistently. I'm trying to think of another way to say your field's second effect, since I think if you negate the monster's effect they can't use their new effect either.

what do you mean by the last part of that?

im thinking about making contact fusion cards for them..maybe..

 

lmfao. i love this anime and this set is great

my only questionis wheres akira-sama? she would have a crazy-good effect. lol

i love the effects in which i give this set an 8/10

you could make the cards stronger, so your field spell gives them more of an advantage.

 

and @metagross

WHERE DID YOU GET THAT AVATAR!?!?! I WANT IT!!!!!!!!1

for now i was just thinking about the main cast

akira will come in due time i promise ^^

thank you ^^

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

what do you mean by the last part of that?

im thinking about making contact fusion cards for them..maybe..

I meant that the card says "negate 1 monster's effect", and I'm not sure if you'd be able to use the copied effect after that. Just something I'm thinking about.

 

And when I saw you say contact fusion, I got an image of Kagami x Konata in my head.

 

and @metagross

WHERE DID YOU GET THAT AVATAR!?!?! I WANT IT!!!!!!!!1

Searched it up on Google, and I'm using it so you can't have it :P

[Kagami Hiiragi]

I meant that the card says "negate 1 monster's effect", and I'm not sure if you'd be able to use the copied effect after that. Just something I'm thinking about.

 

And when I saw you say contact fusion, I got an image of Kagami x Konata in my head.

 

 

Searched it up on Google, and I'm using it so you can't have it :P

XD i need pics. have you found anything interesting lately?

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

XD i need pics. have you found anything interesting lately?

Not quite, though you should have the ones for the four mains right now.

[Kagami Hiiragi]

Not quite, though you should have the ones for the four mains right now.

heres what i was thinking about doing with the lucky star set

tell me what you think

with the fusions i was going to have their atk+def=3k

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Try here for some pics. I use this site a good bit.

[Ginko]

Searched it up on Google, and I'm using it so you can't have it :P

aww D:

[Shizuku Oikawa]

Safebooru, where FTW has suggested, has some great art that can be used, so I recommend there for images.

Also, since I enjoyed Lucky Star wince I first watched it, I shall comment every individual card, possibly in different posts.

 

lol at everyone having different ATK and DEF, but they all still add up to 2000.

Could I also suggest placing their effects below them, since if there were an error or two, people can copy and paste, then edit it to be able to correct it.

 

may="can"

 

Starting with Tsukasa

Lucky Star - Tsukasa Hiiragi

Her effect is pretty useful, and if you are able to bring in another one, you can create an attack lockdown on your opponent, so you would be able to set up some sort of strategy, like being able to build up all their ATK by using "The A. Forces", so when you play Lucky Game, they are all ready to attack with 3000 ATK each, and you can change her effect to something else until the end of the turn, since your opponent will still be stuck on the attack lock, lol. So one thing is for sure, aim for this card first if you see it on the field.

Yutaka

She is probably all the good support you would need for bringing loads of monsters. And with her DEF, being able to pass her is hard. And when she is targeted, you can use her effect to bring in a useful monster, like a Tsukasa while you have one on the field to create the attack lockdown I mentioned earlier lol. I'm pretty sure when the high Level Lucky Star monsters get added, Yukata would be beastly against some Decks.

Kagami

She is pretty lulz to use, when you combine it with Lucky Game and The A. Forces, making her be able to attack directly for big damage. And with Tsukasa or Minami, she can attack directly freely each turn. And her effect to able to be Special Summon from the Graveyard while you control no monsters make her seem pretty good to use, especially with Lucky Crowed.

Miyuki

My gawd, Miyuki-chan is so cute! Anyways, her effect to search out any Lucky Star monster to your hand from your Deck makes her almost an essential in some kind of a Lucky Star Deck. Her DEF makes her somewhat decent in blocking, and even if they attack past it, you get to add a monster, then possibly re-Summon her with Lucky Crowd or Yutaka's effect, and then after she gets destroyed again, you still get a monster. So this card is really useful to use, especially with Lucky Game, since her effect activates in the Graveyard, where it can't be negated by it.

 

That's pretty much all I can rate for now, so I'll rate some later.

The set is looking pretty good so far. Hope you create some more cards, like Kona-chan's lulzy father.

[krazyxgamer]

oh look it's dogma~

the good sites for pics are

danbooru, safebooru, pixiv, devianart

pixiv is japanese but it has some great pics

safebooru is a "safe" version of danbooru which has some 18+ stuff which i don't really mind personally but some ppl do i think lol

[Kagami Hiiragi]

Safebooru, where FTW has suggested, has some great art that can be used, so I recommend there for images.

Also, since I enjoyed Lucky Star wince I first watched it, I shall comment every individual card, possibly in different posts.

 

lol at everyone having different ATK and DEF, but they all still add up to 2000.

Could I also suggest placing their effects below them, since if there were an error or two, people can copy and paste, then edit it to be able to correct it.

 

may="can"

 

Starting with Tsukasa

Lucky Star - Tsukasa Hiiragi

Her effect is pretty useful, and if you are able to bring in another one, you can create an attack lockdown on your opponent, so you would be able to set up some sort of strategy, like being able to build up all their ATK by using "The A. Forces", so when you play Lucky Game, they are all ready to attack with 3000 ATK each, and you can change her effect to something else until the end of the turn, since your opponent will still be stuck on the attack lock, lol. So one thing is for sure, aim for this card first if you see it on the field.

Yutaka

She is probably all the good support you would need for bringing loads of monsters. And with her DEF, being able to pass her is hard. And when she is targeted, you can use her effect to bring in a useful monster, like a Tsukasa while you have one on the field to create the attack lockdown I mentioned earlier lol. I'm pretty sure when the high Level Lucky Star monsters get added, Yukata would be beastly against some Decks.

Kagami

She is pretty lulz to use, when you combine it with Lucky Game and The A. Forces, making her be able to attack directly for big damage. And with Tsukasa or Minami, she can attack directly freely each turn. And her effect to able to be Special Summon from the Graveyard while you control no monsters make her seem pretty good to use, especially with Lucky Crowed.

Miyuki

My gawd, Miyuki-chan is so cute! Anyways, her effect to search out any Lucky Star monster to your hand from your Deck makes her almost an essential in some kind of a Lucky Star Deck. Her DEF makes her somewhat decent in blocking, and even if they attack past it, you get to add a monster, then possibly re-Summon her with Lucky Crowd or Yutaka's effect, and then after she gets destroyed again, you still get a monster. So this card is really useful to use, especially with Lucky Game, since her effect activates in the Graveyard, where it can't be negated by it.

 

That's pretty much all I can rate for now, so I'll rate some later.

The set is looking pretty good so far. Hope you create some more cards, like Kona-chan's lulzy father.

thanks for that it helps a ton ^^

 

oh look it's dogma~

the good sites for pics are

danbooru, safebooru, pixiv, devianart

pixiv is japanese but it has some great pics

safebooru is a "safe" version of danbooru which has some 18+ stuff which i don't really mind personally but some ppl do i think lol

ill be sure to check em all out

im really scavenging for pics right now

you guys helped a ton so thank you thank you thank you ^^

[Astro Dude]

MY GOSH MAN! These cards are too awesome.

[Shizuku Oikawa]

oh look it's dogma~

Well, I'm online alot, it's just I just go to the TCG Section, and games mostly now, so I don't really visit the Custom Cards section.

 

Also, now onto the next card.

 

Konata

She can easily activate her effect against a monster your opponent has that has load of ATK, but generally low DEF, forcing them into Defense Position. Flamvell are an example. The same strategy can also work for monsters with high DEF, but low ATK. Like most Rock monsters. And it can be easily used when she is just Summoned, making it pretty useful, if your opponent is attacking one of your monsters, then you use something like Call of the Haunted, and bring her back, then switch it to Defense Position. So Konata is a monster that looks like it shouldn't be underestimated.

Ayano

Another good card as in can add useful cards to your hand like Hiyori. Other combinations she has are like adding Miyuki, then use her effect so you can add a Lucky Star monster from your Deck, making it lulzy to use. So this card really generates small hand advantages. You can also add another Ayano to your hand, Summon it, then add another monster, making this card even more useful and lulzy.

Hiyori

There isn't much to talk about her effect, except that she can disrupt alot of the opponent's attacking strategies. And she can be added by either Miyuki or Ayano, so she can constantly use her effect alot. So keeping more than in your hand seems good enough.

Minami

She seems like good protection to use, since they have to attack her twice. And even if she is destroyed, you can just add bring her back via Ayano, Lucky Crowd, or Yutaka. But she will be considerably hard to beat if Lucky Game is on the field. Making her more powerful. And with Yutaka, she is even harder to takedown, generally because she can't be targeted by effects. Well that's all generally I have to say. So, yea...

Patricia Martin

She s awesome to use against certain Decks. You can easily use her effect to Tribute someone, the return her with Ayano's effect. The only bad part is that Patricia's effect doesn't work with Miyuki-chan's effect, since it misses the timing. Though, she can still stop cards like Mirror Force, Bottomless Trap Hole, etc.

Making her a good part of the set. And with her generally high DEF, getting past her seems unlikely.

 

That's all I can comment for now. I'll do the rest later.