Hizu X Posted February 3, 2011 Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 [img]http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/8518/320168.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Broken Posted February 3, 2011 Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 replace any with "A" and instead of "Spell card" just say "card" 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted February 3, 2011 Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 Warrior-Type with hyphen, Type capitalized Spell in Spell card is capitalized cannot written together [s]in Battle[/s] by battle (without capital B ) After that, not much to say about this card, it is short and clear, and imo good. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyakan Posted February 3, 2011 Report Share Posted February 3, 2011 Cool pic, you should capitalize the name of the card like a book title, balanced. OCG fix: A Warrior-Type monster equipped with this card cannot be destroyed by battle. Personally, I think that you could buff it up a bit seeing as how Mist Body is a generic version of this, otherwise 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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