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Creepy? Yes. Disgusting? Yes. Small? Hell no! Insect Lords [4+2/5]


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[center][spoiler=Card List][b]bold[/b] means it has been made and added

[b]Giant Fortress Ant[/b]
[b]Castle-Wiping Rambeetle[/b]
[b]Earthquake Locust[/b]
[b]Berserker Mantis[/b]
Stonebreaking Digger

Bonus: Support on demand
[b]Hornet Trooper[/b] (Tuner)
[b]Insect Grappling Hook[/b] (Equip Spell)[/spoiler]

[img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/5962/163811q.jpg[/img]
Lore:
This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing Insect-Type monsters. The Type of this card is also treated as Insect. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Insect-Type monster to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Insect-Type monster with ATK equal or less than the ATK of the discarded monster from your Deck. Each time a Insect-Type monster you control is destroyed, equip it to this card. If this card would be destroyed, destroy 1 Insect-Type monster equipped to this card instead.


[img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/8349/163811z.jpg[/img]
Lore:
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Insect-Type monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or lower non-Tuner Insect-Type monsters from your Deck. They cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. They cannot attack during the turn they were Special Summoned.


[img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/5230/163811tn.jpg[/img]
Lore:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the Graveyard by Tributing 2 Insect-Type monsters you control. Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on the field, and change its battle position. If you do, Your opponent doesn't receive battle damage from battles involving that monster. When this card destroys a monster by battle, draw 1 card.


[img]http://img832.imageshack.us/i/createcard1.jpg[/img]
Lore:
This card can only be Summoned if there are 5 or more Insect-Type monsters in your Graveyard. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card deals Battle Damage to your opponent, destroy 1 card your opponent controls.


[size="4"]Tuner on demand![/size]
[img]http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/9360/163811.jpg[/img]
Lore:
You can Special Summon this card if you control a Insect-Type monster and your opponent controls a monster. This card cannot be used as a Synchro Material Monster, except for the Synchro Summon of a Insect-Type Synchro Monster.
[i]I didn't give it much time, so I don't expect this one to be very good.[/i]


[size="4"]Spell card on demand![/size]
[img]http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9360/163811.jpg[/img]
Lore:
Any Insect-Type monster equipped with this card gains 700 ATK and DEF. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 Level 4 or lower Insect-Type monster from your Deck to your hand.

Hate/rate/comment. More to come soon.[/center]
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OCG fix: [i][b]This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing Insect-Type monsters.[/b] [b]Increase the DEF of all Insect-Type monsters by 500[/b]. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Insect-Type monster to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Insect-Type monster with ATK equal or less than the ATK of the discarded monster from your Deck.[/i]

It's img is ok. But more Rock-Type ish then Insect like imo.
I like the general idea, as Insects need more love. However the DEF boost is kinda unnessary. If you would replace its boost by more DEF and another effect it would be a nice supportive monster. It also helps that it's Summonable by Gaint Rat.

Overal a nice card. A 8/10
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[quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1296921292' post='4989682']
OCG fix: [i][b]This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing Insect-Type monsters.[/b] [b]Increase the DEF of all Insect-Type monsters by 500[/b]. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Insect-Type monster to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Insect-Type monster with ATK equal or less than the ATK of the discarded monster from your Deck.[/i]

It's img is ok. But more Rock-Type ish then Insect like imo.
I like the general idea, as Insects need more love. However the DEF boost is kinda unnessary. If you would replace its boost by more DEF and another effect it would be a nice supportive monster. It also helps that it's Summonable by Gaint Rat.

Overal a nice card. A 8/10
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Thanks for the reply. Will change the OCG. Also, I will try to think of a different support effect instead.
+rep for you.
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[b]The new card.[/b]

OCG fix: [i]to[/i] = [i]for a[/i]
The rest looks fine.
It's pic is ok. And it's name is too simple imo.
The effect is really basic and imo UP. Without any Lvl 4 Insect Tuners it's hardly even Summonable. Not even starting about it's weak swarm effect, if that was from the Deck then it would be a nice card. Now however not.

A 6.9/10
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[quote name='~Apollo~' timestamp='1297006296' post='4992790']
Fortress Ant seems a little UP'd to me. I like Siege Beetle because it has a high level of playability.

So overall 7.5/10
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Yes, I am thinking of another effect, but making the other insect lords has more priority to me atm.

[quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1297007819' post='4992829']
[b]The new card.[/b]

OCG fix: [i]to[/i] = [i]for a[/i]
The rest looks fine.
It's pic is ok. And it's name is too simple imo.
The effect is really basic and imo UP. Without any Lvl 4 Insect Tuners it's hardly even Summonable. Not even starting about it's weak swarm effect, if that was from the Deck then it would be a nice card. Now however not.

A 6.9/10
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From deck sounds like a good idea. Or maybe I might allow them to be used as synchro material? Maybe I'll make a tuner too, so this can actually be played.
Thanks for the review, this was very helpful.

Update: Cards have been changed
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[quote name='Skythief' timestamp='1297010506' post='4992912']
Yes, I will surely add more. As you can see, I have the names for the remaining lords already, as well as I have the pics already. At the moment, I have them saved in my card maker as blank monsters with a name, picture and type.
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That's great to no man; I really like these cards because I barely see any Insect support and these are great.

The pictures are amazing, and if these are the boss cards, their good enough for bosses.

Also you should add a Spell Card to support these cards.
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Your synchro can give you 3 of itself in one turn, you go second, opponent summons any monster, u normal summon an insect, special summon your tuner creature, tune for the giant rambettle synchro monster, brign ouot another of your tuner and another 4 star insect, tune again, and then repeat once more... thats 2900x3... thats 8700 ATK, slap down a solidarity (if u choose to run one) and you've got 11300 ATK on first turn, 10 to 1 its a OTK, I love it... and yet is still isn't quite that powerful... but to stop such amazing things i would add a stipulation that they can't be used as synchro material rather than they can not attack... though that could still give u massive fire power with 2 chainsaws and slap down a solidarity its still most likely a OTK... so i personally find it an amazing card... that being said i love the tuner aswell... the fortress, while being decent support, i do not like anywhere as much... but if those other 2 were made real i'd so play insects full time

Edit: never mind, I had failed to fully read the card, i apologize for such, i still love the big beetle though
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[quote name='♣Master♣' timestamp='1297010889' post='4992931']
Ite, well can't wait for the other lords.
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I think it's called item, but indeed, item (or ite)

[quote name='Boss Z' timestamp='1297011370' post='4992953']
Your synchro can give you 3 of itself in one turn, you go second, opponent summons any monster, u normal summon an insect, special summon your tuner creature, tune for the giant rambettle synchro monster, brign ouot another of your tuner and another 4 star insect, tune again, and then repeat once more... thats 2900x3... thats 8700 ATK, slap down a solidarity (if u choose to run one) and you've got 11300 ATK on first turn, 10 to 1 its a OTK, I love it... and yet is still isn't quite that powerful... but to stop such amazing things i would add a stipulation that they can't be used as synchro material rather than they can not attack... though that could still give u massive fire power with 2 chainsaws and slap down a solidarity its still most likely a OTK... so i personally find it an amazing card... that being said i love the tuner aswell... the fortress, while being decent support, i do not like anywhere as much... but if those other 2 were made real i'd so play insects full time

Edit: never mind, I had failed to fully read the card, i apologize for such, i still love the big beetle though
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I made that up for myself. That's why you can only summon non-tuners with its effect. I guess you found out yourself though, seeing your edit.
Thank you for your review.
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