Six Samz 500 Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 [img]http://bighugelabs.com/output/decke4ca91b59426a711f99f3b34eea45952f9f25913.jpg[/img] [size="5"]If this card is in face up defense position you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard it cannot attack this turn. This card cannot be used as a Synchro material monster.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 I'm confused, is the number it's level? Why is the field spell symbol right above it's number? Is it a Synchro monster? Does it have a sub-type? Your card is too confusing, needs more information. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 [quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1296936298' post='4990486'] I'm confused, is the number it's level? Why is the field spell symbol right above it's number? Is it a Synchro monster? Does it have a sub-type? Your card is too confusing, needs more information. [/quote] good thanks for that, its my first time doing a card like this its now edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 I like the whole concept of the card and its effect, but I only see a few OCG errors; if you don't mind posting down the lore right quick, I could fix that for you easily. Anyways good card overall besides the OCG errors, 9' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 [quote name='♣Master♣' timestamp='1296936998' post='4990513'] I like the whole concept of the card and its effect, but I only see a few OCG errors; if you don't mind posting down the lore right quick, I could fix that for you easily. Anyways good card overall besides the OCG errors, 9' [/quote] thanks and the lore is now up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 Alright no problem man and here's the OCG fix in my terms: Once per turn, if you control this card in face-up Defense Position, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. This card cannot be used as a Synchro Material Monster. So I added the once per turn part cause I'm not sure when your suppose to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard, and I took out the monster cannot attack on this turn because that makes this card under powered a little bit. Hope you like the changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 [quote name='♣Master♣' timestamp='1296937491' post='4990546'] Alright no problem man and here's the OCG fix in my terms: Once per turn, if you control this card in face-up Defense Position, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. This card cannot be used as a Synchro Material Monster. So I added the once per turn part cause I'm not sure when your suppose to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard, and I took out the monster cannot attack on this turn because that makes this card under powered a little bit. Hope you like the changes. [/quote] thanks and thats a "+ rep" too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 No problem again man and the +rep is greatly appreciated; btw could you comment on my Mystical Warrior Holy Knight please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 Name's not very creative. It's an ok card. Say "Once per turn". And it's not OP'd because of the last clause. KIU.[quote name='♣Master♣' timestamp='1296937637' post='4990553'] No problem again man and the +rep is greatly appreciated; btw could you comment on my Mystical Warrior Holy Knight please. [/quote] Please don't spam/advert :/ You know better than that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 [quote name='Smesh' timestamp='1296937814' post='4990560'] Name's not very creative. It's an ok card. Say "Once per turn". And it's not OP'd because of the last clause. KIU. Please don't spam/advert :/ You know better than that. [/quote] k thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frieza96 Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 nice card, like it, not overpowerd 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 Keep last clause to prevent some abuse, though I can see abuse with this card and marauding captain for quick synchros (marauding captain and a warrior tuner) And thanks for changing the template, now I can understand it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Make it Once per turn, summoning a plethora of Warriors gaining advantage is broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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