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Prototype for a card I'm working on.


Zear Zen

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[img]http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/1904/321862.jpg[/img]
This card is also counted as a Dragon-type monster. During each player's Standby Phase, put a "_____ Counter" on this card. (max. 5) During a battle involving a ____ _____ monster, you can remove any number of "_____ Counters" from this card to decrease your opponent's monster's ATK by 400 for each "______ Counter" removed.
Note 1: The picture is TEMPORARY. I still have to make a new one.
Note 2: THe blanks are there because my and my brother still need to come up with names for the archetype and counters. (Yes, he is later going to by part of an archetype.)

Please comment. (If you have criticism about my drawing READ NOTE 1.)
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Dude the whole thing is off, lol
1st: Level does not fit the Atk/Def (make it weaker or give it more stars)
2nd: Name is horrible
3rd: It can only fight against one Archtype
4th: It has a handmade drawing, which yes, i understand you are chaning, but still...
5th: The ability is not yet completed, which i see that you are working on, but work on it faster
6th: If a monster is to be treated as 2 types it usually requires the monster to have some type of negative affect if targeted as the second type, just as the original Tech Genus did when they were also countable as machine-types (their Atk/Def would be halved if targeted as a machine-type)
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