Gospel. Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 [IMG]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h357/OctaviusSH/Crysistag.png[/IMG] It took me awhile to find the BG....turns out Crysis 2 environment concept art is the way to go. Anyway, didn't take long. Rate, hate, whatever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 IF you don't like the text, why not take it off? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Increase the text size, and add some variant typography elements to increase its appeal and enhance effects. If it's to pretty to the point where it takes away from the focal, remove it. Read a few elements of typography tutorials too, cause in all honesty, tag text falls under graphic typography. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 [quote name='-DG-' timestamp='1297016605' post='4993168'] IF you don't like the text, why not take it off? [/quote] cuz it looks even crappier without text... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted February 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2011 bump. whoa totally forgot. is that all that needs fixing...the Text? >:/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 Original stock please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 Sojiro^, i'm gonna say it's a Crysis render on Crysis 2 stock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 I still wanna see them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
۞Jolteon۞ Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 Looks pretty cool! The text is a no (as said) The front guy has a blurry shoulder, I think.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [quote name='Seta' timestamp='1297433937' post='5002514'] I still wanna see them. [/quote] sorry I didn't post them. I was kinda sleeping. .-. [spoiler=renders and BG stock][IMG]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h357/OctaviusSH/crysis2-1.png[/IMG][IMG]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h357/OctaviusSH/crysis2.png[/IMG][IMG]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h357/OctaviusSH/Crysis2_Grand_Central_Station_by_OmeN2501.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 Ahh, you did more than I doubt in the beginning. I think that it could look better if you took out the guy in back and add some more flames there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [quote name='Seta' timestamp='1297452770' post='5002825'] Ahh, you did more than I doubt in the beginning. I think that it could look better if you took out the guy in back and add some more flames there. [/quote] You didn't think I did anything to it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 Nah I just was unsure if the flames were part of the stock or added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 I've made a whole bunch now....maybe a showcase?????? :/ maybe later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 Wow, yours is so much better than mine. I'm not very good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Well keep trying bro, sure its difficult sometimes, but it's fun as hell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 I disagree. This is the best i've seen from a "newbie" Tag maker, In a VERY long time. I actually quite like it... Job well done, i see potential. KIU. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 This looking pretty hawt imo. Very nice use of 2 renders. I usually tend to shy away from that, but it's pretty well executed in this tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='Cаtmаn' timestamp='1297540437' post='5004959'] This looking pretty hawt imo. Very nice use of 2 renders. I usually tend to shy away from that, but it's pretty well executed in this tag. [/quote] Agreed. Thats what i forgot to say -.- For use of two renders/ two focals, this is pretty well executed. Better than a lot of other s*** i've seen on this site. Now, i am eagerly anticipating your next piece ;3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='NightWalker' timestamp='1297540824' post='5004975'] Agreed. Thats what i forgot to say -.- For use of two renders/ two focals, this is pretty well executed. Better than a lot of other s*** i've seen on this site. Now, i am eagerly anticipating your next piece ;3 [/quote] Too bad I have to render everything myself...seems like every cut on Prenders sucks ass. And I'm trying to start a sketchbook. Painting is to tedious right now. Maybe good ol' fashioned 'paper and pencil' stuff? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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